Date: May 01, 2017 8:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
Excellent chapter! Daphne is back and it's wonderful! Her "breathing" is hilarious.
Mel and Zee played nicely with the move and the next family house for the Munchers.
Zee and Jennifer against Lindsey: hot as hell; she better watch what she does and says next!
[Report This]Date: Apr 08, 2017 7:12 am Title: Chapter 5
Adding her personal touches to the table? The gall of Lindz! All about sitting next to Faal or Brian, I'm sure. She will probably be playing Lady of the Manor. I also love how she's all concerned with J visiting Michael, but would be more than willing to withold Gus from Brian if it suited her agenda.
Yep, Lindz trying to play Lady of the Manor. Too bad for her that no one else is playing!
I'm confused as to why they're doing presents on Thanksgiving?
Epic smackdown by Zee! Sluggish twat, LOL, love it! Lindsay's jealousy seems to be causing her to lose all sense of manners. She's a terrible WASP.
Zee is so awesome. Thank god Lindz isn't getting her hooks into Britin. Justin would kill her.
Author's Response:
Thanksgiving presents was a small mistake on my part as I thought the USA did presents then but it worked out okay.
Oh Zee gets so much better where Lindsay is concerned.
With regards to the spelling of Lindsay's name...I didn't have betas with this until about half way through so they are catching them more.
Happy reading.
MissMerlot
PS: wait for the pitbull smackdown!
Date: Jan 13, 2017 6:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
Somehow I think Lindsay will be worse than Michael. At least she got some kind of intelligence. That can make the whole thing really ugly.
Date: Oct 21, 2016 9:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
Fantastic chapter.
Lindsay is coming to town for good. I hope she isn't run out on a rail by Zee.
Author's Response:
Well she's definitely coming back for a while...
Date: Oct 21, 2016 4:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
hurry with the next chapter... I can't believe Lindsay hasn't bothered to 'verify' Michael's version of events.. not even ask Jenny what's going on? ignorant! lol
Author's Response:
Haha! Am typing as fast as I can. Lindsay and Michael are the same. Only seeing and hearing what they want. Ignorance is not going to be bliss for her.
Happy reading
Date: Oct 21, 2016 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
I cannot believe Michael was allowed to have Thanksgiving with them....please tell me he won't be at the Christmas celebration?
I always thought Lindz was not a stupid person but if she's going to choose to take on Zee again...she gets what she deserves!
Author's Response:
Of course he's going to be there for Christmas, you can't have Lindz be stupid by herself! But it will, hopefully, be fun to read.
Hope you stay with me Glo
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2016 4:22 am Title: Chapter 5
Brian is the man. Having Daphne show up for Thanksgiving is inspired. Not to mention he knows that she'll keep Michael in check. Back in Toronto Lindsay is thinking 'Something is definitely up, I don’t like deviousness or secret agendas.' Considering she is the mistress of devious and secret agendas that's rich. Ben and Steve have been outed ... by Hunter, not that we care. We think that couple is adorable, add Taylor to the mix and it's plain awesome. Justin and Emmy Lou trying to find out what Zee is serving was totally funny. Thanksgiving was unique starting out with a fantastic breakfast. One thing that puzzles me is presents at Thanksgiving. That's a new one on me. Not that I wouldn't mind starting the tradition. Speaking of which, did Michael bring one for Jenny? I was so glad to find out that Mel took the offer. Top that off with Zee saving Brian from having to put Lindsay up while they find a place to move into in Pittsburgh. Bow to the Queen. Then we have to love, love Jennifer for suggesting the house in Shadyside. Vince is my new favorite. When Michael doesn't order a cab in the hopes of being allowed to stay, he offers to drive him home. No greater sacrifice can a man make. Now what was it Lindsay told Michael? That's gonna bug me. Christmas should indeed be interesting.
Author's Response:
I hadn't realised that presents were given at Thanksgiving as the norm, but I thought because of their generous natures, this is something that Zee and Faal would do and Brian and Justin hopped on board with the concept. Of course Michael didn't bring a present, he was zeroing in on his "forgiveness" by Brian until he was disabused by the tigress that is Daph, silenced by Jen and escorted out by Vince.
Ah that would be telling what the whispering viper told him, all will be revealed later.
Moving to the Brownstone is going to be a trial for Lindz as she's never seen it but has heard Jenny rave...she doesn't do it justice. And of course she makes the rookie, considering she's a WASP, mistake of trying to buzz Zee on home turf...Zee was just toying with her earlier.
Happy reading.
Nicole
Date: Oct 21, 2016 3:30 am Title: Chapter 5
LMFAO!!!!! Lindz and Mikey got smacked DOWN!!! WHOOOO_WEEEEE!! That tongue lashing Zee gave Bitchzilla was PRICELESS!! WOW!! Then Lindsay tried to make sad and got shut down by the rest of them, LOL OMG! So much in this chapter to love! Daph and Jen...what can I say except that I really love those two and their 'Breathing!' The Bitch and Mitch thought they were being slick; thought their planning was going to go their way...NOPE! And then there was Mel's announcement!
I'm so happy she accepted the position with the law firm. Mel is BACK and with a lucrative career as a partner in the works. I think she's coming back better off than when she'd left for Toronto. Now only if she could have a better partner... I can't believe Lindsay's audacity to expect to stay at Britin. That trick just knows no conscience! And I love how Zee made it virtually impossible for her to refuse and the not-so-subtle innuendo that Lindsay's 'housefrau' days are OVER!! She should have gotten a job long since! Well now she'll have to but I really hope that it will NOT be in the gallery Hunter works for. That would be just like having Michael underfoot and all over him. I wouldn't wish that fate on my worst enemy!
Christmas wil definitely be interesting indeed!! I doubt right now very much that Asshole and Asswhorette are feeling very thankful right now!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Yep and Zee was only playing with her. But wait until she gets to the Brownstone, which she's not seen...haha! And of course there was the sly comment that Jen made about the place in Shadyside...
Of course there will be the odd skirmish between now and Christmas...and I get to play guess who's coming to dinner too!
And if Lindz thinks that Mel missed the comment about not wanting to go to Canada "in the first place" she is so wrong.
Oh hell no I couldn't do that to Hunter but they do get into a skirmish, lets just say her trifling ass gets handed to her and then some!
Serious asswhorette...brilliant!
Happy reading and hugs back
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2016 3:09 am Title: Chapter 5
The moments between Brian and Justin is hot and steamy as usual and I love when they have quiet moments to themselves.
Michael being his normal obtuse self glad that Daphne is here to knock him down several pegs, I just loved when she threatened him too bad he was semi behaved I think he should have eaten some cat poop, it would be fitting justice for the crap he has heaped on everyone else.
Now Lindsay got quite a smack down from Zee that had me laughing and stunned everyone else, she comes to Britin acting like she is Queen of the manor trying to throw her weight around, luckily Justin knocked her down, even Jennifer and Daphne got a shot in though that won't stop Lindsay she will just come up with a new strategy (Too Bad All Her Plans Are As Dumb As Her).
Mel taking the job and moving the kids back to Pittsburgh is good and a smart move, too bad the move also means having to deal with Michael and Lindsay at once (Of course twice the laughs when they get humiliated).
Zee was smart to offer the girls use of the brownstone for six weeks and smart to lay down conditions, cause once Lindsay gets in it is going to take crowbars to get her out, plus it prevents her from thinking Britin is hers, keeps her away from Brian and nips her fantasy in the bud.
Lindsay is playing a a very dangerous game that has two women gunning for her Ass, she would be smart to stay in her lane but when Lindsay wants something she is never smart, and that means she is never ready to handle the consequences of her actions.
My money is on Zee to go for the face and Jennifer going after the body. lol
I wonder how much money Michael has left he has been spending Alot and with Christmas coming he is going to spend more trying to win back Jenny??
Looking forward to Christmas I just know there is going to be more fireworks than the fourth of July. :)
Author's Response:
Had to put in a bit of sweetness for my boys. Notice how I didn't have Michael interacting much with Jenny and Hunter...again he is zoning in on Brian and thinking he has been forgiven...ooh boy so very wrong.
Zee was being very polite when she smacked down Lindz, who of course is going to come out all guns blazing for Christmas, which she doesn't know will be in the Treehouse yet. And wait until she gets into the Brownstone...she's not seen it and when she does hahaha!
Have to say the plot bunny is bouncing like she's on viagra over the Christmas chapter...
Happy reading
MissMerlot