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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2017 7:04 pm Title: Chapter 7

Ha ha ha, Gus almost spilled the beans about Ben and Steve.

“Allergies?”: same as Justin's when he had an emotional breakdown with Brian.

Gus and Jenny are good together, that's nice.

This is hilarious: “Ems you never need an excuse for bubbles!” Drew calls out.“Honey. One word. Couch!” He calls back.

The school's choices and the arguments Michael and Lindsey gave: they really have no shame at all!

Yeah! Daphne is in the plane too! And she will be staying at Britin!

What a useless bitch Lindsey can be: she can't even appreciate a beautiful home without trashing her host and the son of said host! Such a shame! She can't place an order to have food delivered on time.

Glad Faal witnessed that.

Reviewer: Angelhead Devilbed Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 08, 2017 10:24 am Title: Chapter 7

I wonder if everyone has nightmares of Michael in one ear repeating, "I'm his best friend!" and Lindsay in the other, "I'm the mother of his child!" It's like they think it should have the paparazzi following them around.

I hope Daph moves back to the Pitts soon.

Seriously, WTF is with Lindsay? Michael I get, he's always been a moron and lacking in common sense, but when did Lindz join that party? Don't get me wrong, she's a manipulative bitch, but she had at least some brains giving her the ability to be a good manipulator. Why on earth is she pushing for things as stupid as the kids going to school near Michael? Is it so she'd have an excuse to show up at Britin all the time? Very sloppy, Lindz.

My lord, she is such an ingrate! I'd be drop kicking her ass out the door!

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2017 9:22 pm Title: Chapter 7

Lindsay is going mental when she finds out about Hunters job. I can't wait. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2016 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 7

Lindsay is not a part of the real world, it's as if she's ignores what she sees and hears.  I'm shocked she's willing to associate with Mikey.  I wonder if Zee is going to drop kick her at some point... Lol.



Author's Response:

Oh yeah shes gonna get a metaphorical kicking.

Hope you enjoy the rest

MissMerlot

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2016 9:11 pm Title: Chapter 7

Lindsay is going to let Michael's idiocy burn bridges that she hasn't even built yet...SMH LOL I'm so glad that she is being exposed for the jealous Jezebel she is! First her digs about Daphne and Vince, which Gus promptl called her on. Then her bullshit mantra of how she is 'Gus' mother' and was promptly shut down by Mel. Then her and Michael's machinations to use Jenny and Gus to gain entry to Britin. I couldn't have been happier when all her plans went to hell in a handbasket...or better still an Armani suit (Brian), a pair of Monolos (Mel), an Old Navy sweater and cargo pants (Justin) and a pair of Wrangler jeans with a plaid shirt and gold-rimmed glasses (Ben).

Incidentally How dare Michael?!!!! How dare he spend Brian's money for him while everything must be about his own convenience?! What a damn low-down clown he is!! I'm glad that everyone shut him up, including Justin! The scene at the store was hilarious!! Talk about Karma! He could only look at the action figures but no longer able to touch them. Even though I would have sold every last one of them off, this is a much better punishment for Captain Pain in the Ass! Furthermore, Matt proved himself a freaking genius when it came to remodeling the store while that lazy schmuck literally saw just how worthless he is. I laughed loud and long at Michael's expense this chapter. Now back to the President of the Skank Patrol: Lindsay...

Once again Sargeant Pain in the Ass has to wiggle her toes in her throat (a variation of Michael's foot-in-mouth disease) as she first insults her hosts taste in wine and then their son! I snickered when Zee told her point blank that she forgets that the house she is staying in IS Matt's home and has more right to fuck in it than she does. I'm glad that Faal heard her even though nothing the galloping trollop could do will change him and Zee's relationship. She'll probably piss bricks when she finds out just who Zaden really is and that she's as well off as Brian himself with and without Faal. I can see Mel is getting well and truly tired of her and that it won't be long before she'll be sharing her parents rental with Michael. 

Get Writing Nicole! I need MORE!! LOL

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

P.S. ECH aka BlueMyst: BEST Christmas song EVER!!!!!!!!! LMFAOOOOOoooooo Nicole please make it so!!

 



Author's Response:

Nichelle,

Ah our dear sweet [barf] Lindsay.  Her weaselly attempts to gain entry to Britin were really and truly shot down in flames that even impressed the devil.

And indeed she will be pissing bricks when she finds out exactly how much money she's up against in Zee, let alone Faal.

Hope you enjoy reading the Christmas chapter as much as I enjoyed writing it.

And I have made it so!

Hugs

Nicole

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2016 9:02 pm Title: Chapter 7

Shame that Gus and Jenny have to go back to Toronto.  I'm wondering why they are letting Lindsay pick the schools.  She was a pain throughout Thanksgiving and her opinion's can't be trusted.  It's a good thing that Daphne will be back for Christmas.  Justin's been spoilt during Thanksgiving.  Poor Alice having to clean up after Lindsay.  Hunter, without Michael's influence, has lucked out.  They now want to make him a curator and are paying for his education!  Micheal's in a bad mood, he's just found out that Red Cape Comics is reopening under new management and seen Ben at the diner.  Nosy as ever, he wants to know all about the keys that his mother gave Ben.  Someone needed to tell the person at the store that Michael Novotney wasn't welcomed.  Loved the conference call with everyone about schools.  Like how Ben weighed in and put the cabash to what Lindsay and Michael want over what's best for the kids.  Michael seems to think that answer to any problem is they can use the service, not that he's paying of course and why does Brian need to get anyone a car?  Mel and Lindsay are adults and can support themself.  Boy the comic book store looks fantastic, I wouldn't mind shopping there.  And to think that Matt was behind all the improvements, improvements that with all the money Michael got from Brian he didn't make.  Is the secret that Matt didn't tell what Michael said about Hunter?  Finally everyone is coming home on a private plane.  Funny how pissed Lindsay got when Daphne boarded with her new coat.  Someone really needs to set Lindsay straight about why no one wants to be around Michael.  Then when she still backs Michael everyone will have a good reason to back away from her.  Lindsay should have been impressed with the brownstone.  Can't get over her thinking she can dictate what Matt and Hunter do in their own home.  Seesh.  And that sly dig about the wine.  Personally a crew cap type of wine is all Lindsay deserves.  Wonderful chapter and I can't wait for the next.



Author's Response:

Lindsay is an idiot and thinks that nobody can see what's she doing to weasel her way into Britin.  

Yep that's the secret that Matt's keeping from Hunter, although it's not really a secret but you get what I mean.

The Christmas chapter was so much fun to write.

Hope you enjoy

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2016 8:33 pm Title: Chapter 7

This is going to be the best Christmas Ever, just as soon as Zee breaks Lindsay's jaw.

I hope there will be popcorn cause I think there is going to be a showdown at The Tree House.

Deck A Lindsay With Boughs of Holly Fa La La la la la Tis The Season To Be Bitchy Fa La La la la la See The Blazing Wasp Go Flying Fa La La la la la Join Me In Some Merry Laughter Fa La La la la la *roflmao* Sorry couldn't finish.

:)



Author's Response:

Oh yeah the treehouse is gonna shake from the roots up.  Grab a bowl and a seat.

Love the song!

MissMerlot

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2016 7:55 pm Title: Chapter 7

Lindsay should see a doctor about her Foot in Mouth disease😀



Author's Response:

She will he's called David and he straightens her right out!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

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