Date: May 03, 2017 5:53 pm Title: Chapter 8
Hilarious: the hamsters in Justin's head.
Justin remembers the prom: that's a major step for him and Brian as well.
Gus and Lindsey: poor kid; having such a mother; fortunately, Brian talked to him.
Daphne and Michael: I love how she deals with him.
Taylor was so funny and spontaneous with her “Mr Sulky Face why are you in your jammies?”
Lindsey is getting worse as the time goes on.
So happy she was put down by George.
[Report This]Date: Apr 08, 2017 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
Miss SuckyLemonFace... LOL!
Wow, she has seriously lost all sense of manners and decorum! What the hell did she think she was doing? That is just beyond... to perv on him while he was in the shower?! Even if that isn't what she was doing (which I doubt) what kind of person goes into someone's private bedroom?
Way to go Daph in getting revenge on the shrew!
The little scene with Brian and Gus was sweet. At least Brian, Justin, Mel, and Ben make up for the other two jackass parents.
Holy crap that's an awesome gift they gave Mel, and such a great f.u. to Lindz!
*jumps up and down* Go, George!!
Date: Jan 13, 2017 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 8
George is my new hero. These two should try to be happy together. Nobody else wants them.
Date: Oct 24, 2016 8:42 pm Title: Chapter 8
Hiya,
I read Whispers and this story in one go.
OMG! I have been having a belly ache from laughing out long and hard. More than once I had to run full speed to the bathroom to prevent me from peeing myself with laughter.
You sure know how to write Anti Lindsay and Anti Michael.
I especially loved how George told Lindz of. She deserved all she got. And Michael? Well he's propably never going to learn a thing from all of this. He'll end up totally isolated and alone. Stupid little manchild.
I love Zee and Faal. They are simply gorgeous. A loving, warm and welcoming couple and great friends to everybody. It is wonderful to see Ben and Hunter so very, very happy.
Wouldn't it be great to see Lindz applying for a job at the gallery Hunter's working and him becoming her supervisor? I can just imagine the look on her face. And how will she react when Mel can't stand it anymore and leave her. I can just see Michael and Lindz sharing the house at Shayside, planning the demise of all of the clan and end up without family, friends and with no life to speak off.
Being in a choir and having to sing Deck the hall this Christmas I will have to concentrate real hard on not singing the version in this story. It will also be very hard to keep the grin off my face when thinking about these lyrics. Who ever wrote them has a wonderfully wicked sense of humor.
Thank you so much for this wonderful story and its prequel. I can't wait for the next update.
XOXO
Soirsa
Author's Response:
Soirsa,
Thanks very much for your kind words. Whispers was my first fic.
I had thought of putting her and Hunter in the gallery but that's just too cruel, though I have thought of something else to enable Hunter to put that nasty ass broad in her place.
You can thank BlueMyst for the lyrics, although I just added the last line, I was crying with laughter when I read that in her review!
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 24, 2016 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
oh yippee!!!!!!! Christmas chapter! It went pretty much like I thought it would. Few added bonuses of green hair though! LMAO! I can't believe her audasity!
I want to go to the Treehouse for Christmas! Sounds incredible! Zee and Faal asr, as usual, top knotch! Love them both! truly stand up characters. their devotion to each other and their friends are amazing especially after a fairly short amoung of time.
Justin is getting his memories back it seems! I hope this isn't just aone time occurrence. I really hope he gets them all back for both their sakes.
Lindsey is juat a terrible person all together! So glad everyone is putting her in her place on such a regular basis. Her treatment of everyone is intolerable. Poor Gus! I mean he's almost 18 adn is being reamed out by her for stating what she herself has said on occassions. she needs to learn to live by her own statements. Her allegience to Michael is just silly. I don't think she even really feels anything for him in all honestly, I think she just hopes to have an allie in him.
So why didn't Michael bring gifts? He was going to shop for them wasn't he? Was he delayed for some reason? If so why? Why is he lying about them?
I'm not sure who's smack down I enjoyed more. Lindsey's or Micheal's LOL! the captain is nothing more than a bunch of ashes! HAHAHAHA! Love it! That was truly brilliant adn the fact that Michael mistakenly thought is was some kind of doing on Brian's part was even better! Have to say though...George was the best out of all of them! OMG!! "Over indulgent fuckstain"!! "Nasty ass broad"! HAHAHAHAHA!
Thansk for this chapter! It warmed the cockles of my heart! Had much enjoyment from it! so looking forward to what else you will do with his!
LOVE!!
Cheers
Elaine
Author's Response:
Hi Elaine,
So do I, now just need an architech and millions to build the damn thing!
Lindsay focuses on one person that isn't her and that's Brian but now she's focusing on Faal, but has tro try AND FAIL to get round the obstacle that is Zee.
Michael bought gifts but only for Jenny. Zee sent a text to tell him that if he didn't bring gifts for Jenny and Hunter not to come, so he pretended to have forgotten them...payback came nice and toasty or did it.
I had great pleasure writing George's speeches.
Happy reading
Nicole
Date: Oct 23, 2016 8:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
Well that certainly was Christmas done a differnet way...wow! Love George...note to self, 'Don't anger George' classic!
Author's Response:
Oh hell no and don't anger Lilah either. Brian's her most favourite human.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 23, 2016 6:24 pm Title: Chapter 8
I keep saying it, but I love how they all back each other up.. and are even a bit disappointed when they cannot be the ones to tell someone off LOL
Burning the Capt was the funniest!
Author's Response:
They were disappointed indeed but George got s**t done don't you think.
Happy reading.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2016 4:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
OMG!! Thanks for using the song that was Hilarious!!
Lindsay had some nerve to go into private rooms and use someone's shampoo, she is so damn rude thankfully Daphne took care of her cause I think Faal was going to wring her neck, I see she is still acting like Queen of the manor despite the fact that the Tree House is not hers and neither is Faal (The man doesn't want your skanky Ass move on!).
Gus was right to put her in her place too she is being so freaking rude I want grab her by the hair and dunk her head in the toilet, she had no right to berate him for her rudeness and the stunt with the snowball has even Emmett gunning for her Ass.
What the Hell Michael, I thought he told everyone he went Christmas shopping, how can you show up without Christmas gifts for your kids????
The Ass even came in his pjs expecting to stay over while again dismissing the fact that he was invited to eat and spend time with his kids not stay over.
Zee played him so well about the Captain and Ted reminding him that he is still in default was perfect.
The delusion he and Lindsay share is the reason why George had to lay the smackdown on them and kick both of them to the curb where all the trash belongs.
I just loved when George told them off that man is my Hero!!
Despite the whiny brats Christmas was Wonderful and especially with Justin starting to remember prom.
Lindsay and Michael need to realize that no one is taking their crap anymore, Mel needs to start the New Year by getting rid of the dead weight.
I can't wait for what these two idiots think of next :)
Author's Response:
No I should be thanking you. I just added the last line.
Faal was definitely going to wring her neck starting from the ankles, which is why Zee needed Emmy Lou to calm and Daph for payback.
Oh I so enjoyed writing the George smackdown. Not sure where nasty ass broad came from but it fits her perfectly.
Mel knows Lindz well, she's in it for the long game, after all there's the wedding to try and derail after all...
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 23, 2016 4:32 pm Title: Chapter 8
LMFAO!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE GEORGE!!!!! His reference to Nathanial Hawthorne's novel "The Scarlet Letter" was spot on. But unlike Hester Prynne, Lindsay is immodest, a shrew and an asswhore! I sooooo wish Faal and Zee would have kicked her out for the shampoo incident but Daph's revenge was so much better! I think George was probably a little sad that Michael opened the door because he couldn't send a WASP and a DUMMY flying! I know I was LOL
Justin is starting to recover his memory at long last and I am so happy about that! He and Brian have been through so much and having that bit of their lives back will make them stronger all the more. Gus handled Lindsay like a Kinney and I LOVED it! I loved Gus' talk with Brian since it was so damn true to what Lindsay is up to. The bitch ain't slick! Also I love Emmett's defense of Gus and Daph. Lindsay had better walk a chalk line because NO ONE is going to put up with her bullshit any longer, including the kids!
As for Michael: Still petulant, still selfish and still an Asssshole <in Ted's voice> . He needs to go on and just sign the papers. He's not getting anything except his ass handed to him at every turn. The stupid idiot needs to go find a job and find a LIFE. No one is buying the 'Michael is a Victim' act except that spiteful, blind heifer named Lindsay! I'm glad that he thought his collectibles were 'safe' and that Brian disabused the bastard of that notion posthaste. $30,000 in toys? REALLY?! Yet he couldn't manage to fund his own life! That ratty rat bastard!!
The Christmas gifts were so wonderful! Mel now has a new wardrobe to get started in her new life. I'm glad she's DONE with Lindsay! Hopefully she will go back to the Brownstone and pack up Bitchzilla's belongings and kick her ass to the curb. It's no less than what Lindsay deserves. Let her go live with Michael or her parents where she belongs, since she is still a child playing grown-up!
WRITE On Nicole!!
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Isn't George great! More memory camera clicks from Justin to come.
I am enjoy this as much as WAALAAS
I shall indeed write on.
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2016 4:13 pm Title: Chapter 8
This is the best present ever. A Treehouse Christmas at it's best. Michael with his pouting, pjs, not buying presents gets a chopped up Capt for Christmas. Lindsay with her nose in the air and stealing Faal's shampoo and sporting green hair got thrown out with Mikey. Yay. Love, love, love George. He said what everyone else wanted to say but felt they couldn't. Little Taylor, who almost got smashed by a snowball thrown by Lindsay, gave Ben a cute Teddy Bear. There was iceskating, and delicious food. Tree decorations. I'm still wondering why Tucker looked horrified? Snowing for Christmas! Yes! That makes it a White Christmas. Justin remembering the prom is icing on the cake for Brian. I actually expected them to lift a lid on the kedgeree and finding the kitty munching down on the fish. lol. Gus, my love, telling off his mum. Her lecturing him later was another reason for throwing her out. I was amazed that everyone waited to open presents until later. And what wonderful presents they were. Even Emmy Lou got the present he had been wishing for. Zee! There was so much more to love here.
Author's Response:
Thanks hope you stay with me till the end. Lindz wants to...oh wait that would be telling
Date: Oct 23, 2016 3:24 pm Title: Chapter 8
Omg I just love this fic best chapter ever daph song hilarious
Author's Response:
Thank you, the song inspiration was from BlueMyst, I just added the last line.