[Report This]Date: May 21, 2020 4:17 am Title: Chapter 10
I looked at the car. Awesome!
Date: May 03, 2017 8:28 pm Title: Chapter 10
Gus is right to face his mother and Mel backs him up; Lindsey better be careful.
Jennifer is starting to speak and think like Deb about kinky topics.
The comment of Stuart about Rage was funny and Michael's reaction was great.
Emmett, Daphne and Jennifer seemed to have a disaster for Lindsey; I bet she will be ashamed for some time after that.Date: Jan 14, 2017 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 10
So they are trying to manipulate the party. I hope it's really really bad. She needs to be embarrassed in front of all her friends.
Date: Oct 28, 2016 3:07 am Title: Chapter 10
I love it- so evil- jsut hope michael wil sign the papers and let Ben on wth his life
Author's Response:
Hi
Thanks for reading, I am a great fan of your fics!
I know, you wouldn't think those 3 innocent looking lovely people could be so mean...but
Michael would have to be selfless to do that, you know care about someone other than himself...so no not yet not until he's forced to.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2016 12:45 am Title: Chapter 10
I truely love this chapter. You've caught Lindsay perfectly, from wanting to have a party and expecting everyone, meaning Emmett, to do the work. Emmett handled her better than I could have. Love the fact that the kids are going to be there. It should be fun with Ben and Steve along with David and his significant other.
Author's Response:
Thanks. She's always been a princess so naturally expects people to bow and scrape. Emmy Lou is a southern boy, so there is a iron fist in that velvet glove. Hope you enjoy the rest.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2016 6:29 pm Title: Chapter 10
Holy Smokes You Got Me on The Edge of My Seat About This Party!!
I am so curious about what Emmett, Daphne and Jennifer have planned to embarrass Lindsay, I so want to know right now but the waiting builds up my anticipation for her humiliation.
She honestly thought Emmett was going to do the catering he offered his and Drew's home, not his services, besides she couldn't afford him anyway.
How could she plan a party and not invite the kids? They have never been excluded from a celebration before?
I hope everyone out shines Lindsay with their outfits especially Zee I want Lindsay to be pissed that Zee is getting more compliments than her.
The ideas they came up with for the comic book store is brilliant and will make it more profitable than when Michael ran it, plus his collectibles are being auction off makes me giggle.
I see Lindsay is trying to dig in her heels and stay in the brownstone she just keeps underestimating Zee who would love to pull her out by her hair. (I would pay to see that)
What is in the paperwork that Lindsay is going to try to use to get into Britin. I am with Faal I want to know what that Cow (Sorry Cows don't mean to insult you) is up to?
I wish the chapter was up already, I gotta know how bad this will be for Lindsay and I'm thinking Michael too. (45 guests with cellphones, this is going to spread so fast lol)
You Are Driving Me Nuts and I Love It!!
Author's Response:
I really hope you enjoy C11, it was fun to write.
As Faal and Mitchell have said, she wants to be lady of the manor but comes up short especially, when faced with people who just want others to have a good time.
She can dig her heels in as much as she wants...I might just put in a bit of hair pulling, just for you!
That had to chafe Michael's ass about the comic book store especially when it was Matt's idea and when Justin blew him out of the water wanting to restart Rage.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 27, 2016 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 10
Omg what on earth do they have planned for Lindsey's cocktail party? This should be epic! Lol
Author's Response:
Glo,
Read on and enjoy, I hope.
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 27, 2016 2:27 pm Title: Chapter 10
I love this... can't wait to see how this party is such a big success... (Insert sarcasm here lol)
Author's Response:
Thanks cookiebun, hope you really enjoy Chapter 11!
MissMerlot