Reviews For Smokescreen
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Reviewer: TrueIllusion Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2018 7:35 pm Title: Chapter 4

Read this last night and I’m in love with it...please, please continue! I need more!

Love the premise, and I want so badly to find out what happens! I’m so scared for Brian too. I feel his anxiety.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2017 1:07 pm Title: Chapter 4

Why has this story never continued ????????????  It is really annoying when stories are left unfinished.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2017 1:56 am Title: Chapter 4

Will this story ever get an ending?



Author's Response:

Yes, we are going to start back on it again VERY soon x

Reviewer: addict_writer Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2017 10:16 am Title: Chapter 4

Uh... I'm done. White flag. I'll be back, armed with issues and steal nerves. 

That kid would be only one to make Brian forget about his problems.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2017 10:37 am Title: Chapter 4

You've put down in words exactly how Brian must be feeling.  It's something that's hard on everyone.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2017 6:44 pm Title: Chapter 4

Omg I'm sitting here at my lunch hour, at work, trying not to cry. My heart is breaking for all of them....Gus....he's so sweet! 

This is so good! Please let an eye specialist fix him! Now onto Road to Recovery lol

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2017 7:36 am Title: Chapter 4

Ugh! This is going to be so hard for Brian, but all the people around him are just going to make it worse. I don't think I have enough 'poor Brians' for this story. Lol. TAG



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing, it's going to be tough for him, and you're right, people aren't going to know how to act around him - but some people may surprise you :)

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