Date: Apr 25, 2017 4:32 pm Title: Chapter 85 - Blame Game
I very nearly peed myself reading about Gus! That was absolutely priceless and one of the best scenes ever! Deranged battleax...Pussy Paradise...shitting teeth! Oh man....just oo funny. Loved every moment of it. So well deserved and every word was spot on. I'm still giggling and I imagine it will bring a smile to my face all day, everytime I think on it. hehehehe.
Cuntquat...Seriously girl...How the hell do you come up with these??
Glad Lindsey recovered quickly. thrilled that she didn't fool anyone with her"disoriented" routine. Can't wait till she is finally on the inside!
Michael...well. Looks like he'll be making some new "friends" lol. At least his first new friend likes to read. ;) Huh....wil this chap get Michael to start becoming religious perhaps? Will he finally see the error of his way? somehow, I highly doubt it.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
I have to say I do love saying cuntquat to the deserving because it takes a while for them to realise I haven't called them a fruit!
Hope you continue to enjoy the rest of the last few chapters.
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2017 12:25 am Title: Chapter 84 - Laying Down the Law
The Old Hag are out prowling for young men to seduce to bad they haven't realized that cobwebs is not a fashion statement and not all young men like dating their grandmothers...unless it's a charity event lol
Slick showed class when she gave her statement something Michael, Lindsay and Nancy no nothing about.
Not surprised the jury didn't take long to come back but Lindsay fainting was comical because I doubt anyone caught her so that should sting.
Michael as usual had his focus on that stupid comic not on whether he could get more time added on to his sentence<smh> When two idiots share a brain do they flip water to see who gets to use it first?
Nancy better prepare herself for the Wasp Freeze because the temperature is dropping and a blizzard is heading in her direction.
Date: Apr 24, 2017 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 84 - Laying Down the Law
I hope that when Lindsay collapsed her head struck Michael in the crotch on the way to the floor! Face first would be good! Ha! :)
Loving this story and looking forward to the next chapter!
Deb
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2017 6:28 pm Title: Chapter 84 - Laying Down the Law
Yea, they've been found guilty. Brian and Daniel's testimony was icing on the cake. Thank you for coming to the right verdict.
Date: Apr 24, 2017 5:26 pm Title: Chapter 84 - Laying Down the Law
So, 3 chapters so catch up on. Sooooooooo much has happened. My goodness! I am so incredibly freaking proud of Lynette, Oliver and Ron! I nearly peed myself laughing at what they did to Nancy's stuff! She and Lindsey deserve each other! No she's off staying with one of her "friends". We'll see how long that lasts once the WASP crowd finds out about Lindsey and all she's been up to, what the verdict is etc. I can see Nancy's social standing dropping like a stone soon enough. I simply can't believe what Nancy said about Lynette's assault! What an absolute C-word!!!!! More that thrilled that her "family" threw her out on her ass. I'm going to enjoy watcher her fall even more. she seems to think that she's going to give ron problems with the divorce...we'll just have to see about that.
The trial for Michael and Lindsey was informative for the jury! the fact that it was all on tape just cemented how aweful those 2 really are. Brian's statements really hit home with just how devious and underhanded M&L were as well and for how long. Not just the 7K they charged to Slick, but all their machinations re: the wedding, the art show, and the support that Brian paid, also the support that Michael didn't pay etc.
Daniel also gave a great statement. Very meaningful as well since he was a father trying to develop a relationship with his son, but was systematically used by his own son. Slcik too gave a good statement. Brutal in it's honesty. Like the judge stated, "well said and well held"
At least now those 2 will be out of the way for the next almost 5 years! Lindsey dropped like a stone after hearing the verdict. Poor diddums..NOT! lol. I'm sure it's all an act on her part. It's the wasp way of doing things. Trying to draw attention and sympathy to herself. Sadly the only bit she'll get is from her mother. (Why the hell did Nancy stand anyway? stupid cow)
Brilliant chapters and so well worth the wait! I'm so glad you are feeling better. Beign so used to seeing you regularly, it was definitely cause for concern when you seemed to disappear for several days. Hopefully you are fully mended now and well rested.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Apr 24, 2017 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 84 - Laying Down the Law
YES, YES, YES!!!
Full jail time for both bitches and absolutely no contact with Brian and Justin afterwards! The ultimate scentence for them. A social death sentence....
Nobody and I mean nobody will want to see Blondy Bitch and Manky Mickey after their return from jail. They might as well move to Alaska to be pissed on by the elks and wolves for they are dead to the Avenue!!
It will also mean the ostracism of Nancy as well. She will never, ever, ever be welcome in the WASP circles of Pittsburg and New York and possibly even further away for don't they all know each other in these circles? And I guess there will be a warm welcome for Slick in those circles for getting rid of the obnoxious and over entitled Nancy and Lindsey.
All this will bring peace and quiet and some well deserved love for Ron and Lynette. They will most likely grow closer together and enjoy their new found appreciation of each other.
A big bravo to Brian and Daniel for verbaly kicking M&L's butts. And an even bigger bravo for Slick for keeping her statement short but venomous as can be.
I just feel very sorry for poor Debs to see her son sinking away into oblivion. But I guess her extended family will help her in getting over all this.
Thank you for an amazing, amazing update.
XOXO
Meriam
Date: Apr 24, 2017 4:31 pm Title: Chapter 84 - Laying Down the Law
It didn't take long for Nancy to find a place; will it last?
Brian poking Ted about Justin's ass and about his afternoon delights with Ted is hilarious.
Poor Lindsey: was the verdict too hard for her? Too bad: I hope they will throw some iced water to her face.
Date: Apr 23, 2017 3:55 pm Title: Chapter 83 - Truth and Meeting
The treatment Nancy and her clothes received was epic and so funny!
Too bad she didn't get hosed!
Date: Apr 23, 2017 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 82 - The Wasp Nest
Brian and Nancy: hilarious!
The rest of her trip down Liberty avenue and the WASP net is quite a stormy cruise. The proposal was the key point of it!
No, Lindsey won't get a new beau as her mother thinks she "deserves".
Date: Apr 23, 2017 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 81 - Hello Happiness, Annoyance and Envy
Excellent chapter; I loved particularly:
“Brian!” Jennifer protests. “At least let him walk!”
Brian pauses, turns and smirks. “Why Mother Taylor? He’s not going to be able to after.”
As for Lindsey: she learns some major facts in front of everybody; her parents, Brian and Justin and then Terez!!!
Date: Apr 23, 2017 4:43 am Title: Chapter 83 - Truth and Meeting
Omg I am so dam happy to see you back . Missed you hope you had a wonderful holiday.thank you for the updates on both your story's . Mikey am laughing so hard right now. Nancy should really get a clue. Till next time lovely lady please take care .
[Report This]Date: Apr 22, 2017 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 83 - Truth and Meeting
Welcome Back! :)
Boy Is Nancy Beyond Stupid, But At Least She Got Her Comeuppance and I Doubt It Will Be The Last Time.
I feel so bad for Lynnette but now she can heal and embrace her happiness with her loving husband, father and good friends on her side.
The proposal was just so sweet.
Michael and Lindsay should just get use to sleeping on a hard mattress because they aren't getting out anytime soon.
Way to Go Ronald!! lol
Great Updates, I so needed that laugh :)
Date: Apr 22, 2017 5:26 pm Title: Chapter 83 - Truth and Meeting
Sweet Lord in Heaven what an update this turned out to be.
Nancy picking her clothes out of the mud dressed in her nightie. OMG you had me howling with laughter at the demise of that old crone. Darling this was one amazing chapter.
I just feel so terribly sorry for Lynette for being treated that f**king awful by that woman that calls herself her mother. Now we all know where Lindsey learned her behaviour.
Fun to see both Asshat and Blondy Bitch going down in court. Can't wait for the sentence to be announced. I guess they both will spend a considerable time in jail. Which they obviously deserve! They way they both acted: despicable.
I know they both will have a "jolly, happy" time behind bars.
I loved Lindons propasal to Slick. Very romantic and all of that in the presence of Nancy. She is being ousted more and more for her homophobia and false sense of pride and entitlement.
And Ronald? Well he is in better spirits since he decided to leave Nancy. His life did a 180. And isn't it looking up for him in a magnificent way? New selfrespect, new friends and possibly a new love. Go Ronald.
Eagerly awaiting the next update and off to read the updates on ROTS.
Loving you to bits for this enjoyable read.
XOXO
Meriam
[Report This]Date: Apr 22, 2017 2:01 pm Title: Chapter 83 - Truth and Meeting
You give us so much fun with how you deal with Nancy. Lynette and Oliver are truly charming and Elspeth and Lewis are the best friends one could have. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: Apr 22, 2017 1:47 pm Title: Chapter 82 - The Wasp Nest
Welcome back!!! Nancy has gone from bad to worse. Lynette has joined her dad on being on the side of right. What did Lindsay and Michael think they would accomplish? Guelty is Guelty.
[Report This]Date: Apr 22, 2017 3:19 am Title: Chapter 1 - Cold
No update from you in almost two weeks. I hope you are okay. Missing my rattlesnake & first bite fix. If on holiday, hope you are having a blast!
Author's Response:
RL kicked my ass but now I'm back. Hope to be back on my posting schedule. Thank you for your concern. I have added two chapters of each and hope you enjoy.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2017 12:01 am Title: Chapter 81 - Hello Happiness, Annoyance and Envy
It's sad and funny that Craig and Ethan will get out before Michael and Lindsay, unless they do something stupid and that despite the kidnapping attempt Michael and Lindsay will get more time simply because they are heartless, greedy, spiteful, jealous morons<smh>
[Report This]Date: Apr 12, 2017 2:18 am Title: Chapter 81 - Hello Happiness, Annoyance and Envy
Fantastic chapter as always.
Date: Apr 12, 2017 1:55 am Title: Chapter 81 - Hello Happiness, Annoyance and Envy
Ty so much for another great chapter . As always thank you for your hard work.
[Report This]Date: Apr 12, 2017 12:54 am Title: Chapter 81 - Hello Happiness, Annoyance and Envy
Lindsay sitting in her cell plotting her revenge while ignoring that she is in some serious trouble and no one is coming to her rescue<rolls eyes>
Too bad she didn't give as time to her kids as she does to her petty vendettas<smh>
Michael should feel so thrilled that Kyle has his collection now they will finally be put to some use besides gathering dust.
Brian and Justin are getting an RV?
Slick is getting a gorgeous engagement ring!
My What Changes A Year Brings To The Deserving and The Sanctimonious
Date: Apr 10, 2017 6:16 pm Title: Chapter 80 - Mother Really! And Here Come the Grooms Part II
Deb and Jennifer don't think before they act: Deb has a bad influence on Jennifer, who, I think, would be more considerate. Anyway, the crisis is aborted.
So happy for Slick taking a big step.
Date: Apr 10, 2017 5:49 pm Title: Chapter 79 - Reality Bites the Stupid and Opens the Eyes of the Smart
Lynette maybe is better than her sister and definitely better than her mother.
Glad Ronald got some balls and got a grip on his life: never too late!
It seems Michael lost his toys: so sad for him, or not?
Date: Apr 10, 2017 4:58 pm Title: Chapter 80 - Mother Really! And Here Come the Grooms Part II
A lovely blessing! Perfect for our boys!
Thank goodness Molly stopped Deb and Jenn in their tracks! Under normal circumstances it maybe, might've been a bit funny, but considering Slick, and in all honestly Justin too, not a bright idea. Justin went through alot, and could've had very adverse effects from such a prank. Slick...Well that would've been ALL bad!
Nice to see that their previous wedding and this blessing went off without a hitch. that those two assholes weren't able to intervene in any way.
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Apr 10, 2017 3:09 pm Title: Chapter 80 - Mother Really! And Here Come the Grooms Part II
Well the blessing went off without too much of a hitch. It's a good thing Jennifer and Deb were stopped.
[Report This]Date: Apr 10, 2017 4:44 am Title: Chapter 80 - Mother Really! And Here Come the Grooms Part II
Thank Goodness Molly Was Able To Stop Deb and Jennifer From Doing Something So Traumatic!!!
Yeah Brian and Justin would have never forgiven them for hurting Slick like that.
The Blessing was Beautiful and totally Brian and Justin.
What made it so Wonderful was no Lindsay and Michael trying to ruin it<does happy dance>
Though would it be mean to send them a photo of the happy couple and a slice of cake? <evil laugh>
Author's Response:
Yes that would be slightly mean...calls photographer and goes to wrap cake...
Happy reading.
MissMerlot