Date: Apr 10, 2017 5:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Kathy...I loved this so much!
Although she changed her story, Debbie still gets me so mad how she coddles Michael. This is probably why I love the poetic justice of psycho/delusional Mikey stories.
I can't wait to read more, sweetheart. You're one of my fave new writers. *Hugs*
Author's Response:
Awww thanks Deborah *blushes*
I'm glad you're enjoying it and thank you for the review :)
Date: Mar 29, 2017 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
I wonder what Deb will think about Michaels behavior. Is she going to believe it or try to defend her son?
Author's Response:
I hope you like how she handles it!
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2017 2:32 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm loving how your continuing this story. This should be an interesting dinner. Hopefully Deb will be able to hear the concern and not just the judgement as they talk about Michael's immaturity. So happy there's already more chapters...
Hugs Kathleen 💟
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading my story and for the review.
the story is now complete... I hope you continue to enjoy it :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2017 3:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have to say that this chapter rings true. Ben talking with Em and ending up staying with him sounds perfect. Ted being a true friend for Brian and giving his insight into Michael's behavior is just what I've always thought. The question I have is does Deb mention that they are all going to Brian's to Michael and does he barge in being the 'best friend'?
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and for leaving a review
I'm happy to hear you think it rings true... that's exactly what I'm going for.
I'm still working on the Deb aspect of dinner... I have conflicting thoughts about what I want to happen... I might have to write both versions and see which one I like best LOL
Date: Mar 10, 2017 2:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for continuing the story. I thought you did a great job giving insight into how Ben is feeling.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and for leaving a review.
I'm glad you are enjoying it... working on the next chapter now :)
Date: Mar 10, 2017 3:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Great follow-up! Poor Ben!
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and for leaving a review :)
I agree, Poor Ben... I feel the worst that he was fully vested and Michael was just using a placeholder :(
Date: Mar 10, 2017 1:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Intriguing start. Bring on the Mental-Mikey intervention! Lol! TAG
Author's Response:
thanks.
Still working out the details in my head. I want it to be realistic and true to character for them all, but not fully there yet LOL
Date: Mar 09, 2017 8:28 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm so glad you made a sequel of the previous stand alone...So excited to see where this story goes after Michael's stupidness on the previous story..
Already love it..Good luck for updating and thanks for sharing..😚
Author's Response:
thank you for reading and leaving a review.
I'm working on ch. 2 now and hopefully won't take too long to update this story.
Looking forward to seeing how it turns out too LOL
Date: Mar 09, 2017 6:21 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a very entertaining chapter, Kathy. I especially like the strong friendship between Brian and Ted. That developing friendship (as well as Ted's increasing self confidence) was one of the very few things I liked about season 5.
Hmm, might Em and Ben evolve into a couple? I think they'd do well together.
I like the way the boys prepare to greet the family!
~Karynn
Author's Response:
Thanks Karynn (my badass beta),
i've been thinking about Em and Ben, but still on the fence about it
I'd love to prepare that way too lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2017 6:14 am Title: Chapter 1
I hope Deb listens instead of looking to place blame on Brian like usual cause her son has gone off the deep end and he needs help.
Ted really is the best friend Michael could never be because he listens, gives good advice and doesn't need to smother Brian, he knows the boundaries and even though he might occasionally step a toe out of line Brian knows he is just being honest and has no ulterior motive.
There are some friendships that last a lifetime and others that fade into the background, I think Michael knows that he has been left behind and instead of facing it he is reverting back into his fourteen year old self and hurting others in the process.
So happy you have written another chapter :)
Author's Response:
the story is still writing itself in my head (which is not how I ususally do a story), so I'm not even sure how things are going to turn out yet LOL
thank you for reading and taking the time to leave a review :)
Date: Mar 09, 2017 3:26 am Title: Chapter 1
This was so good! Really glad to see a sequel & looking forward to the next chapter. Feel so bad for Ben, all of them really. It's going to be a rough night.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review Glo... glad you are enjoying it, working on ch. 2 now, but be patient... I'm a slow writer and RL gives me only limited bursts of free time to write lol
Date: Mar 08, 2017 7:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well what's there to say but I'm so happy you are continuing this story. Loved the way Emmet took Ben in. And still wondering about Michaels antics. Ted pointed it out very poigniantly: Michael is never, ever, ever going to grow up. And who's to blame for that?
That dinner is certainly not going to be easy for some persons. Let's wait and see.
Thanx for sharing this with us.
XOXO
Meriam
Author's Response:
thank you... so glad you are enjoying it... I'm looking forward to the dinner too... it's still writing itself in my head, so I can't wait to figure it out LOL
Date: Mar 08, 2017 5:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
So glad you're continuing this as you well know! So the dinner is going to be interesting to say the least, hopefully Debs will listen first then speak and as for Michael he will never listen or believe that Brian doesn't want him because the only voice he hears is his own. And of course this will be Justin's fault...looking forward to more.
MissMerlot
Author's Response:
Thanks my dear... so glad you enjoyed it :) The story is still writing itself in my head, so I may be just as surprised as you with how the dinner turns out LOL
Date: Mar 08, 2017 5:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thrilled beyond measure to see that you are continuing with this fic! Definitely looking forward to what the family will be discussing over this dinner. What will Deb's reactions be I wonder? How will they all deal with Michael?
LOVE Ted and Brian's friendship, and that Brian really listen's to Ted and apprecaite's their friendship. I've always thought that their friendship, in the latter part of the series should've been given more attention. Ted really came into his own by then and I love his character.
Heartbroken for Ben though. Thankfully he has the support of the gang. He may not realize it at the moment, and may be nervous about everyone's reaction at the dinner, but I'm sure he will be assured that no one blames him. (again, I guess we'll have to wait and see on Deb)
Whatever happens tonight, Michael needs help! Will he get it? Will he face facts and finally understand that there's no hope? That he and the rest of the gang, like was discussed, have very little in common anymore. Sad, but that tend to happen in some friendships over time.
Will await the next chapter with baited breath!
Thanks!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read the story and to leave such a great review. I've left my comfort zone and am posting as I write, so the reviews may feed into the story a bit...
Thank you so much I'm glad you are enjoying it!