Date: May 12, 2019 8:30 pm Title: CHAPTER 29: BLOOD, SWEAT AND TEARS Part 2: HOT CITY
SOS, FORGOT SOMETHING!
Will the Arsefaced Hellbitch get charged with attempted murder not only for Gus, but for poisoning Mel as well?
Ta
Deb L
PS - Just to put my wager in; I'm going with Jason Kemp's brother is the assasin who killed Stockwell.
Date: May 12, 2019 8:07 pm Title: CHAPTER 29: BLOOD, SWEAT AND TEARS Part 2: HOT CITY
SOS, FORGOT SOMETHING!
Will the Arsefaced Hellbitch get charged with attempted murder not only for Gus, but for poisoning Mel as well?
Ta
Deb L
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2019 7:37 pm Title: CHAPTER 29: BLOOD, SWEAT AND TEARS Part 2: HOT CITY
Okay, just want to say, I want the planes in this universe! They all got to NY rather quickly, esp Connor from LA! LOL, keep working that artistic license!!
I have a thought for future chapters, considering Brandon & Lindsay and being in custody.
If Brandon stays in the Pitts on remand (is that the same in the US?), a lot of their previous sex slaves etc are in jail there. Could they possibly get to Brandon amd mete out their own brand of justice? (HE HE - evil laughter!)
Also, according to TV land etc, in womens prisons, new inmates who have commited child abuse get the shit kicked out of them and apparently get burned/scalded and are left with scars to prove it as a kind of scarlet letter, prison style! Is it possible that whilst The Bitch From Hell is on remand she can be beaten and maimed too? This will be especially karmic for her as she think she's the bee's knees and that everyone is attracted to her. (more evil laughter!)
Any considerations on the above appreciated.
Thanks
Deb L
(okay I just read that back & think I may need my medication adjusted - NURSE!!!! LOL)
Author's Response:
LOL! That artistic license is a wonderful gift, but in this case there is a bit of fact mixed in with fiction. The elite of the elite often have jets that fly just under the speed of sound. But in this case, it's also a matter of time zones and the like. It's also a matter of miles to the gallon, and smaller jet engines as opposed to a 727 or 747; jets are notoriously faster. An average trip from NY to the Pitts is about an hour and a half, whereas a standard flight from NY to LAX is about three on a non-stop unless there is a layover. Also private jets also have a much different flight plan, and are given priority clearance to land rather than commercial flights. So it's all a matter of which method they used to get to NY.
I think the answer to who the assassin is will surprise you. At this point, there's no telling who is a friend or an enemy to people like Stockwell and Peterson. All I will say is that this person has prepared for every eventuality, and is definitely about ten steps ahead in their agenda.
HAPPY READING!
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2019 7:56 pm Title: CHAPTER 29: BLOOD, SWEAT AND TEARS Part 2: HOT CITY
I Would love to STAPLE Lindsay's mouth. Nothing justified, what she did to Gus.
You always successfully put us on edge. Will they able to stop plane taking Sunshine?! or not?! What is Conner's plan?
Fantastic writing! More please. :) â¤
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2019 9:47 am Title: CHAPTER 29: BLOOD, SWEAT AND TEARS Part 2: HOT CITY
TWO updates for the price of one, WOW!
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
I am looking forward to this story drawing to it's conclusion. But please, if at all possible, don't leave so long between updates. This my fave WIP of yours now, having overtaken JTTOU. I'd hate to have to add my vote to you being locked in a room with Bitch & Whine, LOL!
Love and hugs,
Deb.
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2019 1:40 am Title: CHAPTER 29: BLOOD, SWEAT AND TEARS Part 2: HOT CITY
Wow, more to this tale. But will the men in blue be able to contain the situation?
[Report This]Date: May 09, 2019 7:41 pm Title: CHAPTER 28: BLOOD, SWEAT AND TEARS
Amazing chapter! The tension is high!
So relieved to read that the plane is not available yet and it may give some precious time to the team.
[Report This]Date: May 09, 2019 3:00 am Title: CHAPTER 28: BLOOD, SWEAT AND TEARS
With so much to deal with all ready we know have to contend with Justin and Seven being kidnapped and doped up.
The James Brothers and their cronies should be buried in a cell with Michael, Lindsay and Craig while strapped in chairs with unbreakable bonds so they can hear them whine for centuries.
No Wasp Tears are going to save Lindsay now she and her parents are going to pay and this sting won't fade no matter how much money they throw.
I hope Martin is late because he is cowering in fear of the retribution about to rain down upon him or Brian cold-cocked him lol
I hope Gus made it through surgery and will soon be in the slow mend along with Leda, Ted and Emmett.
I won't lock you in a room with Michael and Lindsay but Jennifer might want a fist...I mean word or two? 😜
Don't Mind Waiting Because You Always Make It Worth It😀😃😃
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2019 9:14 am Title: CHAPTER 28: BLOOD, SWEAT AND TEARS
A comforting speech David but not gonna help cause Justin with Seven is kidnapped. Conner really dreaming long. So much Suspense.
Sending lots of love & hugs... hope you get enough time update next one. Can't wait. 💕
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2019 5:08 am Title: CHAPTER 28: BLOOD, SWEAT AND TEARS
Darn you do like to amp up the suspense. How do you get Justin and Seven out of this?
Date: Apr 28, 2019 4:22 am Title: CHAPTER 27: AFTERMATH
This is not really a moan, but it sorta is!: Can we please have an update for this as we haven't since Feb? You left this with such a cliffhanger/mystery, its discombobulating!
Thanks,
Hugs 'n' stuff,
Deb.
Author's Response:
Hey Deb,
I know it's frustrating to have this particular storyline left in a cliffhanger. Believe me when I tell you it's doing the same to me. But since I've never been one to just put out a chapter for the sake of having done so, we're all stuck in this waiting game. The good news is that it's at the forefront of my mind, cooking up its own brand of mischief. The bad news is that I need to wait on it just a little bit longer, so that you all as the readers and the story itself, will not be slighted because of a rush job. My motto has always been QUALITY not quantity, and that's especially true when it comes to this particular storyline. Even I remain surprised at how it has weaved itself where it can only lead to a heartstopping climax and ultimately, a satisfiying end. Thanks for your continued patience, and support of all my work!
HAPPY READING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Feb 20, 2019 2:30 pm Title: CHAPTER 27: AFTERMATH
Wow, seeing Jennifer acting so animalistic was intense. I can totally understand her passion for the Gus and everyone else who was involved but oh my goodness, that part of the chapter caught me by surprise.
The first paragraph has me a little confused as to who exactly Carlo's client is.....and who Carlo is anyway? lol Was this person in the story before & I'm having a senior moment? lol
What a chapter ending, holy shit! Talk about intense....wow!
Author's Response:
Hey Shine,
Rest assured, 'Carlo's client' was also a major surprise to me too! To answer your question though, Carlo is a hitman who only made a very small appearance in this work. He may come back briefly if he has some other information to impart, or in order to help the client in some way. I don't know yet, since other than an extremely primitive outline, I allow for everything else within the story to occur organically; in essence, the way life happens to all of us. Stay tuned!
HAPPY READING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Feb 19, 2019 8:25 pm Title: CHAPTER 27: AFTERMATH
Gus is a brave kid. I hope he will be okay, so will be Leda.
Lindsay & Craig gonna certainly pay hell for their crimes. Hope Micheal pays his debt too. Their messed up thoughts are same.
Stockwell out.... we have a mystery killer ?!
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2019 5:52 pm Title: CHAPTER 27: AFTERMATH
Well it looks like Craig got served for his part in this story and four more are going to get what is coming to them sooner than think.
One thing Stockwell should've always remembered when dealing with underhanded people is that God Forgives, But The Devil Never Does.
I get the feeling everyone associated with Connor and Brandon James are going to learn those words by heart and it will be a painful lesson they will remember for the rest of their lives...However Long That Is?
Craig is going to wish he stayed in his face with the other rodents who fear sunlight cause he is destroyed, Hell it he was that the moment he got involved with Connor and Brandon.
I hope Michael is arrested too he do should go down for a World Class A-HOLE with a pebble for a brain.
Lindsay waking up in a jail cell is quite appropriate since when the courts get through with her she will be buried ten feet under the prison.
way to go Misty (Thanks for adding me to the story:)) and her co-workers they are going to let anyone stop them from making sure Gus, Brian, Justin and Melanie get justice.
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2019 3:12 pm Title: CHAPTER 27: AFTERMATH
So glad to see another chapter and wish to read more. I want to find out how Gus is doing.
Date: Feb 19, 2019 8:04 am Title: CHAPTER 27: AFTERMATH
Wow! So much good stuff. I hope Gussy is going to be Ok.
Date: Feb 19, 2019 4:48 am Title: CHAPTER 27: AFTERMATH
Bloody and punchy chapter! I hope Gus is not too hurt.
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2019 9:33 pm Title: CHAPTER 26: THE BEGINNING OF THE END
Too many wickeds to count. It's time that Brian, Justin and Gus got justice.
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2019 8:48 pm Title: CHAPTER 25: CROSSING LINES INCURS BLACK EYES
Thank god for Misty. She saved the day, just wish Gus hadn't gone through the abuse.
Date: Feb 18, 2019 8:36 pm Title: CHAPTER 26: THE BEGINNING OF THE END
Whoa, what a horrible situation! And you let us with an evil cliffhanger!!! That's not fair... boohoohoo... too sad.
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2019 8:02 pm Title: CHAPTER 26: THE BEGINNING OF THE END
Lindsay got only half of what she deserves but derserve it she did for the Crap she is continually doing to have Brian at her beck and call, she needs to suffer for the rest of her life for siding with Connor and Brandon I hope she like them never gets out of prison.
Please Let Leda Make It!!
Wow Molly and Jennifer can really throw down Craig would be smart to stay away...On second thought please come closer he needs his Ass beaten too.
I do hope that is the paramedics because if it is Lindsay she is a dead Whore once Brian, Justin and Melanie get through with her.
Thank Goodness for David being on that flight.
Yes Please Connor Hurry Up and Get To New York Time For You To Join The Party and Pay For Your Sins.
So many people are about to go down and they should for being Selfish A-Holes!!
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!!
Date: Dec 05, 2018 1:51 am Title: Chapter 5- TALKING BOOK
fucking Michael and Lindsey
Date: Dec 03, 2018 12:11 pm Title: CHAPTER 25: CROSSING LINES INCURS BLACK EYES
please let mel hit lindz when she sees her, like really hit her!
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2018 5:57 pm Title: CHAPTER 25: CROSSING LINES INCURS BLACK EYES
I hope to Heaven Above it is Brian and Justin on that flight and the police are at the airport because I want Lindsay Peterson under the jail not in it!
Gus is one Brave Little Boy, I wish I was in the story cause in would be beating Lindsay's Ass All Up and Down That Plane, Off it and to the police waiting in the terminal.
That Bitch hit and repeatedly kicked Gus so they will need to rush to the hospital and Lindsay can wait until she is untapped very slowly and painfully.
I so hope someone heard her confession that she was going to give Gus to Brandon to use as leverage to bend Brian.
I also hope there are enough police there to keep Brian from killing Lindsay, death is too sweet for her she deserves to go to prison for the rest of her life and get what she deserves there.
Aiding and Abetting, Kidnapping, Assault with a vehicle (Please Let Leda Make It!!), Abuse of a child and so many others I Hope She Never Gets Out (Also hope they tapped her down by her hair and they have to rip out chunks to get her out of the seat!!!!!)
I Am Crying Here, Please Update Soon!!!!
Hey 'Misty', don't worry because like Lorie and Star, you got your punch in! I couldn't NOT have you in this scene- as heartbreaking and heartsick as it is- without you being able to cold-cock Lindsay at least one good time, my friend. I'll be updating this very soon, especially since it's drawing to a close very soon. This was definitely one of the most emotionally charged stories I've ever done, both professionally and here in QAF land. I'm STILL reeling from this chapter. HUGS, ~Nichelle
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2018 1:03 pm Title: CHAPTER 25: CROSSING LINES INCURS BLACK EYES
Another magnificent chapter!