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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2018 5:04 am Title: CHAPTER 25: CROSSING LINES INCURS BLACK EYES

Whoa! I hope someone will take Lindsey away before Brian arrives; the risk of him killing her is too high, but I hope someone will teach her a lesson when she will land in jail.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2018 3:47 am Title: CHAPTER 25: CROSSING LINES INCURS BLACK EYES

Omg!!! This was so disturbing....Holy shit! What a fucking bitch! Wow....poor Gus! How old is he supposed to be? 

Next chapter will be the confrontation & arrest right? 

Reviewer: Juditka Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2018 11:40 am Title: CHAPTER 24: (Continuation of) PHOENIX RISING/ IT’S A BIRD, IT’S A PLANE, IT’S A BITCH and a VROOM

This is an excellent story. I would like to read the sequel. I'm interested in moving things forward. I am waiting for the sinners to receive their worthy punishment.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2018 1:27 pm Title: CHAPTER 24: (Continuation of) PHOENIX RISING/ IT’S A BIRD, IT’S A PLANE, IT’S A BITCH and a VROOM

One of the things forbidden: taking Gus from his family; the step not to take. It's going to be bloody.

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2018 6:49 pm Title: CHAPTER 24: (Continuation of) PHOENIX RISING/ IT’S A BIRD, IT’S A PLANE, IT’S A BITCH and a VROOM

Can we have Star and Lorie on the sidelines to give Lindsey some one-on-one attention please? 

Pity the fool (in my MR. T voice) who gets in the way.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2018 5:40 pm Title: CHAPTER 24: (Continuation of) PHOENIX RISING/ IT’S A BIRD, IT’S A PLANE, IT’S A BITCH and a VROOM

I was so happy to see this updated! Omg, what a way to end a chapter? Holy shit, poor Gus & Leda!!! That psycho bitch is really in for it! 

Justin & Seven are so brave...wow! Go get those assholes! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2018 1:06 am Title: CHAPTER 24: (Continuation of) PHOENIX RISING/ IT’S A BIRD, IT’S A PLANE, IT’S A BITCH and a VROOM

Darn, we need to see the next chapter to this soon!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2018 11:36 pm Title: CHAPTER 24: (Continuation of) PHOENIX RISING/ IT’S A BIRD, IT’S A PLANE, IT’S A BITCH and a VROOM

Oh Hell No!!! That Damn Cold-Hearted Bitch!!!!

Lindsay won't need to worry about a cell because Brian, Justin, Melanie and Jennifer are going to tear her limb from limb and laugh while doing it.

Pittsburgh better prepare because a tsunami is coming and when it leaves the devastation is going to be Horrendous.

One hair on Gus's head is harm and their won't be anything or anyone who can save her, and if she is running home to Mommy and Daddy then They Are Deader Than Toast!!

Damn I Can't Wait For The Next Update My Blood Is Literally Boiling To See Lindsay Get Hers!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Shaz254 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2018 4:56 am Title: CHAPTER 23: IT’S NO FUN WHEN THE RABBIT’S GOT THE GUN Part 2

I love this story!!!! Please continue Nichelle....

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2018 8:27 pm Title: CHAPTER 23: IT’S NO FUN WHEN THE RABBIT’S GOT THE GUN Part 2

The dominos are starting to fall! Maybe they will be able to get some peace before the trial.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2018 3:13 am Title: CHAPTER 23: IT’S NO FUN WHEN THE RABBIT’S GOT THE GUN Part 2

Wow what a powerful chapter.  This is an amazing story.  Can't wait to see where you take it next.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2018 10:23 pm Title: CHAPTER 23: IT’S NO FUN WHEN THE RABBIT’S GOT THE GUN Part 2

Good to see this one again.  Love how all the evidence is coming together and hope that soon the Fucked-Up Five get what they deserve.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2018 8:43 pm Title: CHAPTER 23: IT’S NO FUN WHEN THE RABBIT’S GOT THE GUN Part 2

Dumbass Give is good but The Insignificant Five Would be better.

Brandon, Connor, Lindsay, Michael and the others involved are being blasted on television and the ones who haven't been named yet are in some serious trouble that won't be going away anytime soon.

 

 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2018 1:19 am Title: CHAPTER 22: IT’S NO FUN WHEN THE RABBIT’S GOT THE GUN Part 1

God! I've missed this! All these fabulously strong, powerful women! Yay girl power! 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2018 5:36 pm Title: CHAPTER 22: IT’S NO FUN WHEN THE RABBIT’S GOT THE GUN Part 1

OH this story is getting really good.  Love your writing.  Great job.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2018 2:24 pm Title: CHAPTER 22: IT’S NO FUN WHEN THE RABBIT’S GOT THE GUN Part 1

I'm still enjoying this story.  Always leaves me wanting more.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2018 4:53 am Title: CHAPTER 22: IT’S NO FUN WHEN THE RABBIT’S GOT THE GUN Part 1

The battle is building and I guess it will be a bloody mess.

Thank you for the update!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2018 4:30 am Title: CHAPTER 22: IT’S NO FUN WHEN THE RABBIT’S GOT THE GUN Part 1

Whoa Jennifer is scary when she is in Take Charge mode, but she is lethal when she is in Don't Fuck With My Family mode.

Like Brian when he is ready to destroy someone bet she has just the outfit when she is about to strike? ;)

Seven is very brave to go on tv and take back more control of of life against his abusers.

Connor and Brandon are not liking the noose around their necks cause Brian, Justin, Seven and everyone else is pulling that rope tighter and tighter.

Lindsay is about to learn that when you have a slingshot and the other side has a Cannon it's best to surrender and beg for mercy.

Pretty soon there will be no place they can hide.

 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2017 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 21: CONTINGENCY PLANS

I love the way the gang was bouncing ideas & comments off of one another so quickly! Intelligence is so sexy! That press conference was fabulous! Can't wait for the interview...Lindsay & the James boys are going shit themselves!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2017 10:56 am Title: Chapter 21: CONTINGENCY PLANS

What a delight to see how Lindsey is starting to go down and how Justin remains proud and out.

It would be great if Lindsey got a little taste of what the James brothers can do to blonds...

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2017 8:02 am Title: Chapter 20: BROKEN WINGS

I love the way Brian lets Justin get the upper hand back.

Ron learned very interesting facts and it seems he's acting to respect Justin and Brian's wishes. Remain Lindsay, who is a wild card, and the James brothers, a wilder one.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2017 4:14 am Title: Chapter 21: CONTINGENCY PLANS

Wow.  Can't wait to hear the interview.  Missed this a lot.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2017 2:46 am Title: Chapter 20: BROKEN WINGS

Love this chapter.  Hopefully Lindsay gets what she deserves and Connor and Brandon lose everything they deem dear.

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2017 1:25 am Title: Chapter 1- SPACE: The FINAL Fucktier

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Name: Saje (Signed) · Datum: Jun 15, 2017 5:59 pm · F?r: Chapter 20: BROKEN WINGSyeah, what Glo said. I was literally going to say the exact same thing!lol keep those chapters coming doll.... SajeAdmin Options: [Edit] [Delete]

Name: Glo (Signed) · Datum: Jun 15, 2017 5:24 pm · F?r: Chapter 20: BROKEN WINGSI love me some bottom Brian! Give it to him Sunshine! Lindsay is a wench & a schrew. Can't wait to see Brandon & Connor get there's. Admin Options: [Edit] [Delete]

Name: emac66 (Signed) · Datum: Jun 15, 2017 1:37 pm · F?r: Chapter 20: BROKEN WINGSWOW!! Wow wow wow! Am totally amped up now. Pretty thrilling chapter!Ron definitely wasn't at all prepared for the brick wall he faced. He didn't get anywhere with them. I'm a bit surprised that Ron was naive enough to think that he'd just walk away with the journal.Ooooooooooooweeeee! Nancy isn't gonna know what hit her!! Looking forward to that!! Inevitably Lindsey will see her demise as well. Again, fun fun fun! Well, perhaps not for her, but definitely for the rest of us! lolThank you for this! Terrific update.Cheers,ElaineAdmin Options: [Edit] [Delete]

Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Datum: Jun 15, 2017 1:19 pm · F?r: Chapter 20: BROKEN WINGSWoah.  You didn't think things could get worse and yet it does. Who's doing the interview?  Hopefully things will point to Lindsay.Admin Options: [Edit] [Delete]

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Datum: Jun 15, 2017 12:11 pm · F?r: Chapter 20: BROKEN WINGSCan't wait for the interview and conference; it will give them some leverage and some kind of freedom.Thank you for the update!Admin Options: [Edit] [Delete]

Reviewer: mcm Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2017 12:52 am Title: Chapter 19: CLOSE ENEMIES

So HAPPY got home and seen this. Thank you for update

WTH is Linds thinkin and whats Ron really up to!!

~Teresa~

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