Date: Apr 03, 2017 2:32 am Title: Chapter 19: CLOSE ENEMIES
Pins and needles over here!!!!!! Love this story!
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2017 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 19: CLOSE ENEMIES
Brian and Justin are going to do whatever they can (Legally) to make sure everyone pays.
I don't trust Ron but maybe he can be a quite useful tool to bring down all their enemies.
Lindsay naked Ewwwwwwwwwwww!!!! That ranks right up there with Michael naked <shudders>
I wonder who stole the info off Lindsay's computer? Are they Friend or For??
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2017 2:43 am Title: Chapter 19: CLOSE ENEMIES
I wouldn't be surprised if Lindsay ends up one of Connor's captives. It's only what she deserves. Brian will protect Justin and Ron's about to find out how.
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2017 9:08 am Title: Chapter 6- DON'T LET THE SMOOTH TASTE FOOL YA!
It's a shame that Brian almost blew it. Thank goodness Cynthia let him have it.
Date: Apr 01, 2017 6:35 am Title: Chapter 19: CLOSE ENEMIES
Thank you for the update!
I loved the feisty blonds. Molly is very funny.
Date: Mar 08, 2017 12:48 am Title: Chapter 9- SLEEPING DOGS AIN'T LYING
Omg what a beautiful, hot chapter! They have so much to talk about, so much to do, so much to share....so good! So glad I started this hun, I love your writing!
Date: Mar 07, 2017 8:27 pm Title: Chapter 18: SUSPENSION of DISBELIEF
OMG you updated one of my favorite stories. Love you so much, honey! Happy dance here.
Can't wait what shitstorm Brian will release upon their enemies.
How very suspicious I'm of Wainwright, I'm beginning to believe him.
Lindsey, however, is really deranged; and that dumbass Michael - no words here for so much stupidity, jealousy and hatred.
Hope you find time to continue and your inspiration and ideas for this plot don't leave you.
Date: Mar 07, 2017 7:39 pm Title: Chapter 6- DON'T LET THE SMOOTH TASTE FOOL YA!
What a fabulous chapter, there are all fabulous but this one, especially so. I was screaming at my phone, like...really Brian, don't fuck this up! Jeez man!
I was wondering about something.... if Thing 1 and Thing 2 are in Italy don't they have guards or somebody at their place watching and or looking at Justin from time to time? Wouldn't someone notice that he's gone and notify them?
Date: Mar 07, 2017 5:35 am Title: Chapter 18: SUSPENSION of DISBELIEF
Boy I missed this fic. Will give a longer review later
Date: Mar 07, 2017 2:40 am Title: Chapter 4- (It's the WRONG time of Year) NO TRICKS HERE
Daph & Cyn, on their way to becoming besties! Two of a kind...love it!
Date: Mar 06, 2017 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 3- CLOSE ENCOUNTERS of the PERSONAL KIND
Oh my God I love that meeting, at a masquerade ball, cool! Justin is going to start work before the even have their coffee. Loving this!
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2017 7:41 pm Title: Chapter 15- INQUIRING MINDS WANT TO KNOW…
No NO No Leave Gus alone:(
Date: Mar 06, 2017 7:12 pm Title: Chapter 1- SPACE: The FINAL Fucktier
Holy shit! What a way to start a story! Fucking Craig should be in jail! Those self absorbed assholes Connor & Brandon....I would have loved to see that painting he left for them lol
Justin is very lucky to have such wonderful friends, now he can go to Pittsburgh happily & meet his destiny...
Date: Mar 06, 2017 6:37 pm Title: Chapter 18: SUSPENSION of DISBELIEF
I've got chills...they're multiplying...!!!
WOW and holy shitballs! This is so intense! So many things going on in the lives of Justin adn Brian. Their so called friends have no idea just how deep in shit they are! Lindsey may have a slight idea, but I don't think Michael really does. He's not smart enough. He actually thinks that Brandon and Connor will want him. His jealousy is going to get him killed of he doesn't get his head out of his ass soon adn get some form of protection against the brothers. Unfortunately for him, he can't see past his own wants and what he sees as beingowed to him. Namely Brian's loyalty. He wants what he wants and screw anyone else. Lindsey, being cut from the same clothe as her mother, is more than happy to align herself with the brothers to get what she wants, what she feels she deserves.
Ethan is another character who has no idea what he's getting himself into I don't think. He's another one who thinks he's owed something, who thinks he deserves what he wants. He's certainly going to get what's coming to him, just not in the way he thinks or hopes.
glad that William seems to have come around. That he and Justin seem to have come to some kind of truce. that may be the only thing that saves his ass in the end. If what he's saying is the truth, then hopefully he'll be able to obtain soem kind of protection. If not, than his demise is iminent. May be iminent either way tbh. It's a good thing he went to Cynthia first off, and was given the opportunity to speak to B&J as well. they are better prepared now hopefully.
I simply cannot believe everything that is happening to our boys, particularly Justin. Life has not been kind to him in so many ways. thankfully he has Brian now as well as a ream of friends and family who will do all they can to protect both he and Brian.
Oh girlfriend......I was SO SO SO excited to see an update to this story!! It really is just so exciting, so thrilling! It's been interminally long since we've seen an update. No guilt, I know you've been busy!! I'm just so happy to see this. I saw it last night, shortly before I was turnign out the lights and forced myself not to read it. To wait until this morning so I cold go back and re-read a couple of chapters to remind myself where we're at. I wouldn't have gotten any sleep at all if I'd done that last night. LOL.
I hope to see more of these now. Such a cliff hanger!!! My anxiety level is at a high. I can't say enough about how exciting this is. You are such a freaking talented writer!! It blows my mind that we are all gived with your talent, and so very grateful that you share your gift with us!! HUGE FAN!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 06, 2017 6:32 pm Title: Chapter 18: SUSPENSION of DISBELIEF
The plot is so thick!
I had to read the previous chapter again to remember what happened.
Micheal is in serious drama and there is no way for him to get out. As for Lindsey, let's wait for the next chapter to see what she's up to. It can't be good.
I hope Brian will be able to get Justin to not withdraw and to fight with him. Together, they are stronger.
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2017 6:03 pm Title: Chapter 18: SUSPENSION of DISBELIEF
Wow. Mikey and Lindsay both need to go down and Brian's just the one to take them down with a little help from his friends.
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2017 4:18 am Title: Chapter 18: SUSPENSION of DISBELIEF
Time for Brian, Justin and Friends to take the fight to these A-Holes and the first thing to is to find out what they have, want and use it to get them all sent to prison with no way of getting out and no one to help them because everything was taken.
I am so Happy you have come back to this and your other WIP I am ready to get back into both of your stories :)
Date: Jul 27, 2016 6:53 pm Title: Chapter 17: A CALL TO CHARM Part 2
Patiently (not) waiting for more!!!
Date: Jul 25, 2016 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 17: A CALL TO CHARM Part 2
Woah......I seem to say that alot in these fics of yours. That and Holy shitballs! both of which are pretty precise!
michael adn Lindsey are in so much trouble! both are digging themselves early graves. figuratively and perhaps even literally. this need for revenge is going to have Lindsey in a whole heap of trouble. she's completely over the top! Her dad...I dunno about him. You make him seem like he may be havingsecond thoughts, but will he ever really do the right thing or will he go down with the perverbial ship with Craig and Stockwell? the brithers....well...they are going to come to a dire end I'm sure. (I have upmost faith in you!!)
Ethan...well now. He's one that's also causing too many problems for himself.
Glad they have Mel on their side in this. She's not going to let anything happen to our boys. Thank goodness she overheard everything in teh last update! She'll be a few steps ahead of those who are causing all teh problems.
William is finally really seeing Justin for who he is. Not a threat to him at all. that everything that justin has gone through, while he may not know what it is, recognizes that it's been dire. That alone seems to have him respecting justin. Seems to have a deeper understanding of all the crap Justin has gone through.
I have so much fun reading adn re-reading all your fics. alwyas such a thrill. I find I need to read each update a couple of times just to make sure I get all of it engrained. That I catch all the nuances. fuck me you are just so talented. I'm always trying to figure out which one I prefer. I can never really tell. with each update on each fic, I deem that one my faveorite. lol.
Love that you share your incredible talent with us! It's apriveledge to read them.
cheers my friend and I'm waiting for teh next one!
Hugs.
Elaine
Date: Jul 24, 2016 4:03 am Title: Chapter 17: A CALL TO CHARM Part 2
Yay! Finally caught up - this is such a complex story I had to go back and read it all over from the beginning. Glad that they stopped Lindsey from getting to the sperm sample. Eek - that would have been a disaster. And Michaels off to jail, good for him. Now what? TAG
Date: Jul 23, 2016 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 17: A CALL TO CHARM Part 2
Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! This is amazing.
You are building a complex plot with devious and dumb people and you put in some humor to ease the tension.
I loved "There were many MANY times that I caught Nancy with a mouthful of pussy during our early years of marriage. Who knows? She may still muff-dive every once in awhile". It's hilarious remembering how tight Nancy looked like in the series.
Like mother like daughter: what a nightmare they are these two.
As for Michael, he is in deep shit and haven't realized it; if he ever does.
I hope that William will keep his word and will keep his video for himself.
And Eck, Ian, Ethan...Ethan...ETHAN!! (loved that too!) or whatever, I'm quite sure he is going right into the net of the devils; too bad but too dumb!
Date: Jul 23, 2016 7:18 am Title: Chapter 17: A CALL TO CHARM Part 2
Okay, so now the chin rat is going to try to make trouble? And what did Michael really think he was going to accomplish by showing Brian that photo album other than pissing him off? Things are getting deep...and Lindsay is more vicious than I thought.
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2016 4:52 am Title: Chapter 17: A CALL TO CHARM Part 2
Happy, happy, happy to see more on this. Keep up the good work. Ethan, hopefully, will piss off Brandon and Connor and we know what happens to people who do that. Wainwright appears to be having a change of heart. Hope so. Lindsay is broke, broke, broke. But like a snake, you don't know when or where she'll strike. Got to laugh at Mikey, being accused of stealing. Unbelievably stupid.
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2016 4:17 am Title: Chapter 17: A CALL TO CHARM Part 2
You packed a lot into one chapter and it was good and well worth the wait.
Not surprised that Michael got arrested I actually smiled because he is an idiot and I knew he wouldn't like that hand he got dealt.
Mel signing her rights back to Brian was brilliant cause it protects Gus from Lindsay (temporarily anyway), them also stopping Lindsay from getting Brian's sperm was a good move too, Mel did a lot of good things this chapter to protect herself, Gus, Brian and Justin.
Some people just have to learn the lesson the hard way Ethan not heeding Brian's warning is on him for being an idiot.
Justin handled Wainwright like a man should he didn't need to bully him he just needed to look him in the eye and explain some of the situation, what Wainwright does with that video is up to him, I hope he will destroy it and just learn to work with Justin, they don't have to be friends but they can find an even ground.
I wonder if Lindsay will be arrested next? I can't believe.... YES I CAN BELIEVE that she would poison Melanie to get her life insurance....What a BITCH!!!
So far two dominoes have fallen will more fall or will the game continue?
Author's Response:
Hey ECH! So glad that you like this chapter! Most of the major players are in place now but this story isn't over YET! Nor has Michael or Lindsay gone away. Without giving anything, I'll just say that there are many more surprises to come for everyone in this story. I'm actually glad that Justin and William got it together. We'll see how long their 'reasonable' peace lasts.
Thanks so much for commenting!! Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2016 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 16- A CALL TO CHARM
OH HELL DON'T MAKE ME WAIT TO LONG YOU FOND OUT WHAT HAPPENS BECAUSE I'M GOING TO BE GOING CRAZY TILL I CAN FIND out what's going to happen next!!
Author's Response:
*PEEKING @ Lorna from behind the computer screen* LOL! I know, I know.... I'm an evil chick with a pen and a dangerous imagination. I promise it won't be too long. I'm actually working on the next chapter. It won't let me work on anything else until it's written. SMH....they are so demanding!
In the meantime, Happy Reading and HUGS!
~Nichelle