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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2019 4:51 pm Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2

great, thanks

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2019 8:26 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: Chapter One

Just drown Michael, nobody will miss him

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2019 8:26 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: Chapter One

Just drown Michael, nobody will miss him

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2019 8:21 pm Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2

Can’t wait to see what happens wit Ethan. 😳

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2019 4:11 am Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2

What an egotistical diabolically thinking idiot. 

Happy David has Chase. He surely wouldn't want to get mixed up with that nut job again. 

Duh duh duh... Oh no Ethan is on the island. Whatever shall we do? Can't wait to read what happens when Dumb and Dumber come face to face.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2019 3:47 am Title: STAYING OR GOING: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 1

The lives these men live. Good/bad, secrets and full disclosure. It is about time Brian knew about Kip. But with good old Mikey having his fingers in every pot it seems, why then if he truly wanted Brian and Justin broken up did he not tell Brian all about it? It seems like Mikey is all knowing. How could he not have known?

I don't understand why Michael set up Emmett? What was the purpose?

Justin really needed that drink. Ha! I don't think the guys are going to look at him or treat him differently. I'm sure they would care just as much as always. He needs to stop worrying so much about what others think.

Mayweather Media sounds like a can't pass up opportunity but the strings attached aren't worth Justin's time or trouble.

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2019 10:22 pm Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2

Nichelle:

  Great update.  Michael is so delusional.  It is frightening how hard he is working to manipulate his "friends" back into his life.  He is like the beginning chess player-  thinking he knows all the moves of the pieces and how the person will act without understanding that their are other moves than the one you think the person will play.  Michael is a menance to all of them.  I just hope that the gang all find ways to get rid of him in their lives to the extent that his manipulations can't impact their lives.

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2019 11:22 am Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2

i have one word for you, you wonderful fanfic genius: MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOREEEEEEEEEEEE

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2019 8:34 am Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2

I don't know an adjective that means more than "nasty", but if it exists that would be what I think of Michael.

Even David is telling him to let go, but has he ever actually listened to David?

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2019 8:11 am Title: STAYING OR GOING: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 1

Justin should never doubt on himself. He has been through much already. Happy that with help of Blake , Alex It out in open infront of Brian. They are much stronger now. The island giving them privacy.

But, Brian really seems or is mad now knowing about Sap incident. Micheal is gonna be so much trouble.

Love this Chapter. Kudos !! ❤

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2019 8:01 am Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2

Excellent writing & chapter.

David observation about Micheal is 1000% correct. Micheal never ready to let go of his immature feelings. QaF pathetic ending is all Mikey's ill-mind image.

After watching show 2nd time realised, Micheal always burdened Brian to be take care, by clinging. If not hate, I Surely could never like Micheal (or Hal's face, he showed off too much on Camera)

Micheal Brewing so much nasty. Brian is gonna Super mad at what Mikey trying to pull on Justin. So will Ted, Drew for Blake and Emmett.

ThankYou for update.:)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2019 7:35 am Title: STAYING OR GOING: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 1

Whoa! Heavy on revelations! They really don't need enemies with a "friend" like Michael.

I'm not sure I understood well what happened at the end of the chapter: did Emmett get drugged and taken to the Sap's party? Was Blake planned to be dragged to it too? Why Michael would have left Sap get his way with Brian? To have him so wasted that he would go back to Michael afterwards?

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2019 7:30 am Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2

Wow Michael is completely crazy I hope everything will fall on him quickly and he will suffer as much as he does to others. David is 100% right, he studied Michael well. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2019 1:24 am Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2

Wow, great chapter.  I love how you make Mikey so disgusting.  I usually don't hate anyone or anything, but OMG I really, really hate Mikey.  I don't know how you manage all the WIPS.  My mind would burst.  I have loved this story from the beginning and can't wait to see how it ends.  Hopefully happy, PLEASE.  Hope you are doing ok.  It seems that so many writers are not updating and I really get concerned about them especially those who used to regularly update and now weeks go by.  You all feel like family to me. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2019 1:23 am Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2

It's so good to see updates on all your stories.  This one just shows how unbalanced Mikey really is.  

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2019 12:01 am Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2

Michael has some nerve acting like he is a pump and Brian his Prized Stud Ready and Willing to Serve Anyone Michael breaks him too.

For a man who wants Brian all to himself he certainly doesn't Love it Respect him.

Everything David said about Michael is 100%on the nose unless Michael says it is okay then everything is supposed to stay the same and no one can talk in love but him, he really is Peter Pan and he sees his friends as his list boys and servants who are to how when they Rajah walks in the room.

Brian, Ted and Emmett went out to find their success while Michael is stuck in Neverland waiting for them to pay tribute in cash and accolades for being allowed in his presence (Deb Is The Same Way!) and they aren't allowed to make a move without consulting him first.

Justin, Blake and Drew are the interlopers who want to crush the Rajah which ticks him off because they are successful without him e they don't need him.

Deb raised Michael to be a Princenot realizing that as he wants to be King and Rule alone the only time he wants to see Deb is when he needs his subjects back in line, after she finishes her own version of  caterwauling he is going to send her back to the dungeon with other slaves to fight for scraps.

Michael doesn't Love anyone because he never understood  what it means to sacrifice for someone more important than yourself.

Michael desires Power, Attention, Worshippers and Money without the others and his mommy fighting his battles he Invisible and he can't stand that.

Michael doesn't realize that every second his life expectancy is getting shorter.

Fantastic Uodates, Thanks😄

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2019 11:45 pm Title: STAYING OR GOING: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 1

Justin needs to inherent himself or Michael and the others will continue to have power over his happiness inside himself and with Brian.

By each of them laying their secrets out in the open they are taking back pieces of their would others have ripped from them, plus they are destroying any ammunition Michael or Deb can use to get them to heel.

They all are going to go rant and rave but as long as they listen then they are making strong progress to mend their lives.

 

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2019 3:23 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: BLAME IT ON GOOSE, GOT YOU FEELING LOOSE, BLAME IT ON PATRON, GOT YOU IN THE ZONE, BLAME ON THE ALCOHOL... BUT NOT ON MY MICHAEL!!!

Way too short, but great chapter.  Love that everybody is finally on the same page and telling Deb and Michael what they are feeling.  Frightening what might actually happen.

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2019 3:23 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: BLAME IT ON GOOSE, GOT YOU FEELING LOOSE, BLAME IT ON PATRON, GOT YOU IN THE ZONE, BLAME ON THE ALCOHOL... BUT NOT ON MY MICHAEL!!!

Way too short, but great chapter.  Love that everybody is finally on the same page and telling Deb and Michael what they are feeling.  Frightening what might actually happen.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2019 1:15 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: BLAME IT ON GOOSE, GOT YOU FEELING LOOSE, BLAME IT ON PATRON, GOT YOU IN THE ZONE, BLAME ON THE ALCOHOL... BUT NOT ON MY MICHAEL!!!

Even if the truth hurts Diane, Jenn and Melanie just wasted time and breath. Deb doesn't want to face the truth that her precious can and does do harm. Learned from his mama to turn things to his advantage. Same as Deb using Brian,Ted, and Emmett. Bend them to her will.

Maybe now with Carl he'll be able to finally get something through that thick skull of hers. Maybe leaving her to her own for a while would help. Think about it Carl.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2019 6:28 pm Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: BLAME IT ON GOOSE, GOT YOU FEELING LOOSE, BLAME IT ON PATRON, GOT YOU IN THE ZONE, BLAME ON THE ALCOHOL... BUT NOT ON MY MICHAEL!!!

Whoa!!! Mel, then Jennifer: Deb is in for a verbal bashing that was delayed for too long.

And then, Diane gave the "coup de grâce": pension and don't come back here.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2019 4:48 pm Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: BLAME IT ON GOOSE, GOT YOU FEELING LOOSE, BLAME IT ON PATRON, GOT YOU IN THE ZONE, BLAME ON THE ALCOHOL... BUT NOT ON MY MICHAEL!!!

More denial from Deb...wow. Hopefully, Carl can make her see reason. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2019 4:38 pm Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: BLAME IT ON GOOSE, GOT YOU FEELING LOOSE, BLAME IT ON PATRON, GOT YOU IN THE ZONE, BLAME ON THE ALCOHOL... BUT NOT ON MY MICHAEL!!!

Deb finally is learning what her mouth has set in motion.  Shame she willfully refuses to see it.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2019 4:59 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: BLAME IT ON GOOSE, GOT YOU FEELING LOOSE, BLAME IT ON PATRON, GOT YOU IN THE ZONE, BLAME ON THE ALCOHOL... BUT NOT ON MY MICHAEL!!!

This is what I felt in show too. I am new fan but I can say that Even Deb conditioned them mother love but she gained for her & Micheal from them too.

Its like Writers in Qaf show tried to hide it. Brian, Ted, Justin, Emmet, Ben and Blake are own their successful life. Proud & out , on the other hand Micheal is closet most of time. Micheal clings on Brian and others. One can try BUT will unable to like Micheal's manuplative character.

Very Glad to read these awesome fics. It give so much broad , better look in their characters. :) ❤

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2019 4:09 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: BLAME IT ON GOOSE, GOT YOU FEELING LOOSE, BLAME IT ON PATRON, GOT YOU IN THE ZONE, BLAME ON THE ALCOHOL... BUT NOT ON MY MICHAEL!!!

WOW!! No One Minced Words and Now Deb Is about to reap what she has sown for years by losing everything she held sacred to get and Michael, plus it means when everyone comes back to Pittsburgh she will be stuck catering to Michael for the rest of her life.

Carl should leave because yeah she Is going to feel bad but in five seconds she will revert back to her old ways.

Entitlement like that doesn't just go away it grows stronger and her avarice for Brian, Ted, Emmett, Justin, Ben, Blake and Drew has grown  the more they succeed and leave Michael behind.

Michael us really Peter Pan who refuses to grow and he expects Brian, Ted and Emmett to stay by his side No Matter What, only his lost boys left and found happiness which Michael resents cause he is their past while Justin, Blake and Drew are their future.list

Being fired from Liberty Diner won't stop Deb from trying g to get everyone to flock to her and that really will be pathetic.

The next few weeks will be very interesting!

Thanks For The Update :)

 

 

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