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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 06, 2020 3:52 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 9: MO’ MONEY, MO’ PROBLEMS

Tino and Darius being out of Michael's reach will give Blake some breathing room and time to figure what to do next once he deals with what they had planned for him and Diane.

Carl instincts are telling him to get far away from Deb and he should listen because Deb is not going to change if it means that Michael will be left behind with her.

In a way Carl is right in his thinking about Deb she sees Michael as her sudoku is band, son and Pampered Prince who the gang should take care of why she basks in things they must continuously give to Michael.

She sees Michael as her King as well because he brought such loyal subjects into their kingdom for her to help rule over and punish when they make her Pampered Prince unhappy.

Only what is coming for Michael and Deb once these men have dealt with everything will have them wishing for guillotine, because not only will they metaphorically be cutting off their heads but they will be taking back the power they gave them to the point where they won't even have the crumbs.

Michael and Deb ripped chunks of flesh out of Brian, Justin, Ted, Blake, Emmett, Drew and Ben for years now they are going to enjoy ripping with their bare hands strips out of them.

I wonder and hope that Hunter is somewhere safe and that Michael and Deb don't know about he will need to have his moment too with Rita Montgomery and them.

Thanks for the Update😀

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2020 6:54 pm Title: FIRE AND ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: I GOTTA BE

I just wanted to give the heads up in case anyone thought I was confused about where I left off.

This had me LOL - What? Nichelle confused???? How could she possibly be confused? She doesn't have anything ELSE going on in her life - RIGHT??? LOL

Sorry, I don't mean to make fun, but when I read that in your notes, it was the first thing I thought of, and I just couldn't let it pass.

This chapter was good. A lot of deep introspection on Drew's part. And good of him to fully understand his feelings now.

I feel so bad for Emmett. I can only imagine the turmoil of emotions roiling through him. Will he still love me? at the forefront. Not to mention his embarrassment at everyone finding out his past and in such the manner they did.

I love the idea of Brian calling Carl and getting everything moving, but I still think they should put Michael in the little boat filled with huge boulders and push him out in the ocean. They COULD call it suicide... he couldn't live with himself after he lost Rage and all his friends.

I ALMOST put a shout-out to you a could of days ago saying I was going into withdrawals and needed some JT2U or BIFG, and then here it is. Kismet? I must have thought so hard, it happened. Like it was meant to be.

Good to see you back.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2020 8:49 am Title: FIRE AND ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: I GOTTA BE

It's so good to find this story again and with such a beautiful declaration of love. I can't wait to read what they have planned to kill Michael! Good luck with all the change you have. Stay safe.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2020 3:25 am Title: FIRE AND ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: I GOTTA BE

Great update.  Hope the house goes good for you.  Wonderful writing.  Take care and be safe.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2020 3:13 am Title: FIRE AND ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: I GOTTA BE

Darn I really want to hear what Emmett is thinking.  Miss this story so much.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2020 12:13 am Title: FIRE AND ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: I GOTTA BE

Drew Truly, Madly, Deeply Loves Emmett and Emmett feels the same way but he needs to unlock the part of himself that has been hidden away so he can love without fear or recrimination.

Michael learned how to use information from Debbie because she does the exact same thing so that later she has power to bend others to her will.

Only now her reign of terror is about to come to a shocking painful end just like Michael because there will be No One to help them after this.

Thanks for the Update😀

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2020 11:37 pm Title: FIRE AND ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: I GOTTA BE

Whoa, what a declaration of love! Beautiful, even if the circumstances are far from idyllic.

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2020 12:54 am Title: THE WIFE OR THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 10: BROKEN CHANDELIERS Part 3

VEry intense chapters.  WEll written and they give us a great insight into the characters.  I jsut wish we could have more.  I worry about Blake and what machinations Michael is going to try on him.  He is strong and now that he has told Ted what is going on, perhaps Michael can be stopped.  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2020 6:43 am Title: THE WIFE OR THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: BROKEN CHANDELIERS

I feel a very uncomfortable chapter coming.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2020 6:35 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 10: EVERYBODY PLAYS THE FOOL

Ben is really getting his life in order and considering the past events may help coping with his guilt.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2020 6:10 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 9: DON’T WANNA BE A FOOL

Whoa! Zen Ben is finally awake and kicking! Good for him!

I loved the "unicycle of unparalleled selfishness"; excellent!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2020 5:56 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: GIVING UP IS SO HARD TO DO…

Ha ha ha, "I’ve been watching a lot of porn so I know what to do."!!! As if it would be sufficient to seduce Brian and keep him interested! Hilarious! How dumb Michael can be!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2020 5:44 pm Title: STAYING or GOING: BOOK II: CHAPTER 10: 7 LIVES EXPOSED/ IF ONLY YOU KNEW Part 3

Beautiful chapter! The emotion is all over the page! Great to read that they have reconnected and that Justin knows what partner Brian sees in him.

Also, great touch getting Daphne all the credit she deserves.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2020 2:39 pm Title: THE WIFE OR THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 10: BROKEN CHANDELIERS Part 3

Laying the Ghosts to rest.  Good job.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2020 2:27 pm Title: THE WIFE OR THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 9- BROKEN CHANDELIERS Part 2

Love the way you show Ted's view of Michael and how it changed.  This is important to Teddy seeing why he thought he was poor, boring Teddy.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2020 2:16 pm Title: THE WIFE OR THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: BROKEN CHANDELIERS

Rats, even though we think we know Ted's secret, I'm not sure we know Blakes.  I've missed this story and look forward to the day when you take down Michael along with the characters you write about.

Reviewer: Pink Plate Special Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2020 2:16 pm Title: THE WIFE OR THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 10: BROKEN CHANDELIERS Part 3

Thanks for the update. Oh, Teddy! Glad to see him and Blake doing what it takes to be whole, even if it hurts.

When I started plotting my first story, I had all these issues for each couple to be juggling. I worried that people might not like that, but I thought of this story and it gave me the courage to proceed with the story in my head. Thanks for writing this. At your own pace!! 

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2020 1:29 pm Title: THE WIFE OR THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 10: BROKEN CHANDELIERS Part 3

thanks for update.  stay save

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2020 9:02 am Title: THE WIFE OR THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 10: BROKEN CHANDELIERS Part 3

I love how you take the episodes of the show and turn them so that they fit into your story. Is the young man Hunter and his damn mother? Thank you for the update. Stay safe!

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2020 7:55 am Title: THE WIFE OR THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 10: BROKEN CHANDELIERS Part 3

I think you did an awesome job of taking canon and making such befitting back stories. They really worked, and COULD have been possible.

And now that EVERYTHING is out in the open, no secrets left, nobody can hurt them, nobody can make threats, and nobody can reveal something the other person diesn't already know.

It's also wonderful to know that Darius, and I assume Tino, time will soon be up, and things will catch up to them... I'd love to be a fly on the wall for Diane, Melanie, and Carl's meeting regarding these scumbag lowlife's. And the info on Michael, that Jennifer handed over... I really wonder how much a role Michael played in the downfall of these men's lives. I can see him trying to get them out of the way, pavng his way to Brian, without any friends influence.

It sounds like they went after the small fish, hoping to get to the king and his prince...

Three cheers for Bernard snatching that tape up... When I think how manylives could have been ruined...

The story of the sixteen-year-old who was next in line after Ted, his story sure sounded like Hunter's... addict mother, pimping out her son, stabbing her husband, gong to jail... yep... sounds like the Rita and Hunter show...

Thank you for these awesome updates... Stay Safe, Stay Healthy...

HAPPY EASTER,

Cathy

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2020 6:40 am Title: THE WIFE OR THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 10: BROKEN CHANDELIERS Part 3

Wow that was a full on chapter it's awful to think this actually happens every day 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2020 5:18 am Title: THE WIFE OR THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: BROKEN CHANDELIERS

Just a quick note... I see all three chapters are actually the meeting with Ted and Blake... so far you've done admirably... having had close family with addictions... I can say, you are spot on...

And any time you bare your soul, whether it involves, addictions, cheating, gambling, etc... it's hard to open yourself for your partners scrutiny...

But, I honestly feel, if anyone could write this accurately and still remain sensitive to the delicate subject, that would be you, Nichelle...

 



Author's Response:

My God... I just found this, and now I am crying. Thank you so much, Cathy. Ted and Blake's story hits so close to home for me, on so many levels. I'm so glad that I was able to bring it to life with the sensitivity it deserves.

HUGS and LOVE,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2020 3:43 am Title: THE WIFE OR THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 10: BROKEN CHANDELIERS Part 3

Wow, great update to one of my all time favorite stories.  You know how much I love this one and Just the Two of Us.  Fantastic writing.  Hope all is well with you during these difficult times.  We have been under "stay a home" by our governor for awhile now.  With our management rules, we cannot leave out apartment without a mask or something covering our mouth and nose.  My county here in Pa. has had 11 deaths which is low, but we are a small county compared to many with just one larger town and lots of small towns and rural areas.  Never did I expect something like this in my 74 years on this earth of ours.  Take care and stay safe.  It is so difficult to say Happy Easter, but if you celebrate try to do the best that you can.  

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2020 3:27 am Title: THE WIFE OR THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 10: BROKEN CHANDELIERS Part 3

Almost Forgot, Happy Easter🐰🌹😀

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2020 3:01 am Title: THE WIFE OR THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 10: BROKEN CHANDELIERS Part 3

OMG! Poor Ted!

What Those Monsters were willing to do to get Brian and Justin!

I hope They All Pay!

Thank Goodness Bernard Got The Tape!

Now it can't be used against Ted and together with Blake they can destroy it and the Power it holds.

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