Penname: BlueMyst Real name: ECH
Member Since: Jul 03, 2016
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Big fan of Queer As Folk just Love Brian and Justin my favorite stories are when they end up together :) I also love a good Anti Michael, Lindsay, Melanie, Debbie story because I always feel they should get what they deserve.


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Summary:

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Justin is upset because he thinks Brian has done the unthinkable.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brian Kinney, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, James 'Hunter' Montgomery, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca Marcus-Peterson, Justin Taylor, Kiki, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Ted Schmidt
Tags: Anti-Michael
Genres: Alternate Canon
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Brian/Michael
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43767 Read Count: 136493
[Report This] Published: Jun 26, 2016 Updated: Jul 06, 2016
Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 05, 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Happy 4th of July to You😃 Thanks for two very interesting chapters Michael is gone and I don't think he is coming back. It is funny because now he thinks Justin is cheating on Brian with Nick instead of Ben, I am happy that Ben has finally come to the realization that he needs to move on and put him and Hunter first.

Brian taking a step.back is a good thing because he really needs to not feed into Michael's delusions or give Deb more reason to hold him responsible for Michael's actions.

Lindsay using Gus to get a trip to Paris without even caring about Mel or Jenny Rebecca is beyond rude, good for Brian to put her in her place and make her realize that this trip is for him and Justin not for her to live out another fantasy.

I liked when they told Michael off and got him to get out of the car of course this doesn't stop the madness but it needed to be done.



Author's Response:

Michael wants his man and no one is going to stop him. Hope you guys like the next chapter it is the only one left before we see King of Babylon. I used some of the ideas you had and added a couple more.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 06, 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Ben is joining the King of Babylon Contest?!! This is going to be so good I wish the next chapter was up already this train wreck is going to be fun! 😄

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 06, 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OMG!! That was Hilarious! I especially loved that Justin got Ben into the contest while Brian was worried that Justin would enter, that is one sneaky blonde lol Ben winning is just perfect and a nice little ego boost, Deb boxing Michael's ear and taking her whiny brat out was just as funny as Lo man-handling him, Brian and Justin are two very sneaky people and I love them for it!

Welcome Back Drew, Happy 21st Birthday! I hope Emmett enjoys blowing out his candles lmoa



Author's Response:

Justin entering Ben worked better for me. Justin got to have fun and Ben got to show off. I thought about not bringing in Deb but we know she would have to be there. I have to give Emmett a happy ending. Thank you for staying with me.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 07, 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I see Michael has moved his delusions to someone else I like that Brian is continuing to stay out of the drama, it is nice to see finding their own happiness and leaving Michael to figure out life on his own. I look forward to reading more from you because it was such a pleasure to go on this ride :)



Author's Response:

Thanks the newest one I am attempting is going to start out different but i have to laugh. Thank you for riding with me through all this.

Summary: Feature

Alternate Universe, Hustler!Justin, John!Brian

"Remember that not getting what you want is sometimes a wonderful stroke of luck." - Dalai Lama

Because sometimes you get exactly what you never knew you needed.

Thanks to Cheryl for editing.


Categories: QAF US, Reader's Choice Award
Characters: Brian Kinney, Justin Taylor, Other Cast Regulars
Tags: Prostitution
Genres: Alternate Universe, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76984 Read Count: 69032
[Report This] Published: Jun 30, 2016 Updated: Mar 01, 2018
Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 03, 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - No More Pretending

This story always makes me cry, laugh and live Brian and Justin so much perhaps they really are soul mates or else your story really moved my heart lol

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 07, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not surprising that Mel and Lindsay are at each other's throats they have something of a toxic relationship. I sometimes wonder do they love each or being right more? And whatever they are fighting about is just a smoke screen so they don't have to deal with the giant elephant in the room. I like that it is being told through Gus's point of view it shows what a child sees when parents are too blinded by their anger.



Author's Response:

When the show ended it was unrealistic to me that everything was fine. I planned this with us them having to go to counseling. 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 10, 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Michael is acting like such a baby! He honestly believes that he is still in competition with Justin. He is acting more like a drop-in Dad then Brian ever could, it is not surprising he is acting jealous and spiteful he always did that when no one was paying attention to him. Nice to see Deb not playing his game anymore the apron strings had to be cut sooner or later.

The girls are finally acting like adults and they are coming to realize that their actions do have consequences for Gus and Jenny Rebecca.

Glad Brian is refusing to play along with Michael the time has come for everyone to stop coddling Michael he is a grown man who should be more concerned about his daughter then himself.



Author's Response:

I think if the kids weren't involved he would try to help. The next chapter is going to test everyone's patients. Thanks for the review.

Why Not Me. by starlight Rated: E half-star [Reviews - 187]
Summary: Feature

I chose this story as it is a "what if" that continues the story of Brian and Justin after Season 5. Starlight is an author that pulls you into a story by the third paragraph and takes you on a wild ride. There's angst, humor and drama that has you cheering and yelling in disgust in the same chapter. She has this writing style that keeps you wanting more every chapter she writes - mamaduck

Brian and Justin decide it's time to have kids.


Categories: QAF US, Admin Pick
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, Debbie Novotny, Drew Boyd, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, James 'Hunter' Montgomery, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca Marcus-Peterson, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Original Character, Sam Auerbach, Ted Schmidt, Tucker
Tags: Anti-Lindsay, Post-series
Genres: Angst w/ Happy Ending, Could be Canon, Drama, Humor
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Debbie/Carl, Emmett/Drew, Michael/Ben, Ted/Blake
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33789 Read Count: 140665
[Report This] Published: Jul 12, 2016 Updated: Nov 15, 2016
Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 13, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

WOW You Amaze Me, Congratulations on Story 3! Read both chapters and I must say it is nice to have a Michael that isn't annoying and has smarten up so he could accept Brian band Justin together.

Now on to Lindsay funny how she is so excited for Gus to get a sibling when he already has one?

Brian and Justin are doing this the smart way by not asking the either of the g to be surrogates, Brian has had enough problems with those two and the way he was treated when Gus was born.

Lindsay is living in La La land thinking that either Brian or Justin would ask her, she us already acting like a witch because Justin has come back to Brian and because he more successful than she could ever be, glad you addressed her sleeping with Sam I know that it was about Brian.

Lindsay listening to her mother who thinks Brian can change his sexual preference as fast us Lindsay is laughable, when I read that I wanted to ask her was she high or just stupid, Brian loves Lindsay as friend no way is he giving up dick just so she can have her 'Hetero-Fantasy'.

Mel is going to have to put on her big girl pants and deal with Lindsay because she is going to go off the rails when Lindsay finds out the baby is coming sooner than she expected.

As swear you are so becoming my favorite author :)



Author's Response:

That is so sweet. I just wanted a story to go my way. Lindsay  is defiantly in her own universe. I thought we could have one to change why she went to Brian all those times. I'll hopefully keep everyone interested with my writing. Thank you for sticking with me. 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 14, 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Mel is being a good parent and getting those kids out of bad situation that is getting ready to escalate because Lindsay just let Gus go and sadly he is her pawn to get to Brian, I have a feeling she is on her way to the Pitts which is probably what she wanted so she could be closer to Brian. 

I think Sarah deserves a raise along with Cynthia because she is handling Lindsay wonderfully.

Mel and the kids staying at Britin is good because Lindsay can't just barge in like she could the loft, Mel finally acknowledging that Brian is not her enemy is good because they are going to need to work together to handle Lindsay, while also protecting Gus and JR.

Why is Lindsay's mom is all of sudden talking to her and trying to give her advice about Brian? What is Mrs. Peterson up to?

Sorry to see the penis trees go they sounded interesting and hilarious can't wait to find out what Justin thinks of next.

I have a feeling this is just the calm before the storm of the century hits The Pitts, everyone better prepare.



Author's Response:

Lindsay wants her mother to approve of her. In this one I changed Lindsay reasons for what she did. I see her going to her mother because Brian would be someone they could show off. No one she knows would help her. But her mother would if Lindsay married Brian.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 14, 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Blake helping Justin get back at the neighbor is Hilarious I also like Emmett's idea and the strobe lights will really make it POP *lmao*

Lindsay seriously thinks she is going to marry Brian? 😅😅😅😅😅 Dream On Crazy!

She has lost everything and she doesn't even know it yet Brian is not going to let her continue to play these little wasp games with him.

Gus is one smart little boy and sees the truth of Lindsay and he is also not playing her game.

Now that she knows about the baby she is on her way to the Pitts to fight for her fantasy, I wonder if everyone will be there for the show?

I can't wait to see what they come up with to annoy the neighbor next? (her husband likes it, probably making his year lol).

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 16, 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Nymphs with water coming out of their Asses- I Love That! lol Perhaps they should get some sculptures in different sexual position too or some men who wouldn't mind acting out those sexual positions just when Kathy comes outside *roflmao*

Brian and Justin are quite remarkable when they turn their evil genius on others this Kathy woman should just give up but I doubt she will.

So the wicked witch is on her way to Pittsburgh now that she knows that Mel is there with the kids, I can't wait to see for her broomstick to land and she goes to see Daphne, I wonder how Jennifer is reacting to all this drama and does she have any suggestions to help Justin get at Kathy? lol

Now suddenly Lindsay's mom is starting to realize this is a bigger headache than she originally planned, this isn't her pathetic relationship with her husband, Brian and Lindsay were never married so the wasp games don't work on him.

I can understand Gus needing a break from Lindsay and her drama he is a child who should not be dealing with these problems and JR didn't ask to be born into this either, thankfully Lindsay does not have custody of JR so in a way she is safe, Lindsay barely noticed her anyway unless she was using the poor kid as pawn to get back at Mel.

I wonder what dirt Brian has on the Petersons to make them regret ever trying to take Gus away from him? (I wonder if Mrs. Peterson talking to her daughter was a ploy to get Gus all along?)

Not surprised Sam doesn't remember Lindsay women are just Kleenex to him and that man is a dog always in search of a new bone. 

Lindsay has a long line of people who want to kick her ass, I hope she is ready to pay the consequences for her actions?

This story is so good and I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 17, 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Mom gives her the idea to push and pull Brian then when she comes to town Mama Peterson ain't got no time for her, now that is funny and so deserving for their little princess.

Hunter was funny the way he handled Lindsay I do love that young man :)

Nice that we are getting Gus point of view about Lindsay and I do find it interesting that she is all concerned about Gus, but never asked about JR once, smart of Brian to cut off the money so now Lindsay is really all alone, also smart of him putting in a clause ,that if they deny him access to his son then they have to pay back the support, how could Lindsay forget that part of the agreement especially since she barely has enough to pay for a lawyer?

She us so delusional about Brian and what he needs this woman never knew him she just liked the wrapping he came in, Lindsay the manipulator is not surprising you could see she liked the power it gave her especially over Brian.

Justin and Michael are having too much fun getting back at Kathy nice to see Carl joining in the fun too, I wonder what Mother Taylor will find out about Mrs. Peterson that Brian doesn't know already??

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That was too funny for Words, though I do have a few for Lindsay lol Daphne Is My Girl!! Everything she said to Lindsay was hella funny I wish Lindsay hadn't left yet I wanted Daphne to say more.

So Lindsay would owe Brian $140, 000 huh? That sounds about right since not all that money went to Gus anyway, still hasn't even asked about JR...What a Cow!

Daddy sleeping with his god-daughter is not surprising still wondering if he is going to give the spoil brat the cash to pay Brian?

Brian and Justin vanishing for a few days sounds wonderful cause the garden should be finished by the time they get back, I so wish I see Katie's face when Jennifer shows her around and says the names of all the plants *roflmaO*

Looking forward to the garden party where Katie gets put in her place (her husband is so going to love this!) and when Lindsay gets what she deserves.

I Just Love Your Wicked Imagination! ;)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Jen You Wild Woman! This was a good chapter because we got a girl's night that these ladies will never forget (Thanks YouTube), I wonder how Lindsay is going to.react to all the fun Mel is now having?

Sam is coming town? I hope Lindsay comes to the show to see him I bet it will be memorable lol

 

Daphne buying gifts for the kids is so sweet and that is why she is a wonderful best friend to have.

 

Nancy knew about the affair with the god-daughter that says so much about her and her need to stay in control (Lindsay did learn at the master's feet after all).

Lindsay is so delusional she actually believes Brian is going to marry her? Did she grow a dick and not tell anyone? lol

Justin and his super sperm have produced twins for the Taylor-Kinney household, now Brian is going to have three sunshines to brighten his life :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 19, 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Lindsay is a COW and she is a selfish twit I can't wait till everything implodes around her, her attempts at playing concern mommy is not fooling anyone especially Gus, I wouldn't let Gus go to her parent's house without a swat team I would be too afraid of him not coming back, she just ignored JR and Melanie, glad to see Jennifer dishing it right back.

Sarah and Cynthia have to be at the art opening and garden party I bet they will love it, plus I would like to see them cock-block Lindsay :)

Can't wait to read about the garden party and Justin's art opening I hope Lindsay makes a fool out of herself (Won't be Too Difficult for Her) and the press is there to cover it I just know mommy and daddy would be so proud lol

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 20, 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

OH MY GOODNESS, THAT WAS FREAKN HILARIOUS! Sam did exactly what I wanted him to do, Daphne was a brilliant puppeteer for Sam and Lindsay's reunion, I just love the fact that at first he couldn't remember her, then went straight to insulting in his own un-charming way, I was cracking up!

Brian telling off Lindsay was funny too, she seriously believes that she get Brian to stop being gay and marry her...The chick is off her rocker and destroying her room didn't help because now Mommy has her committed lol

Every New Chapter You Amaze Me :)



Author's Response:

I wrote the garden party hopefully it works.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 20, 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I must now to your wicked genius, that was too funny I am going to be laughing about that for the rest of the night, Katie was out of her league the second she opened her mouth that garden will be quite a story for years to come *lmao*

Nancy committing Lindsay and signing Gus's custody to Brian and Mel is going to make Lindsay's head Pop when she finds out and that makes me giggle.

I wish there was pictures of that garden party I bet the flowers were beautiful and I bet Katie won't be able to look at flowers without cringing in embarrassment. *roflmao*

I think I am seriously going to cry when this ends, but I am going to love reading it all over again! ;)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 21, 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

You gave Brian and Justin the ending they deserve because they are totally devoted to each and their family, I am glad that Mel found someone who makes her happy and adores JR they are a good match.

I thought Emma was talking about Lindsay when she said 'Dirty Stinky Butt' lol, I am happy that Brian decided to have another kid because those kids will be showered with tons of love. The twins names are two cute I look forward to getting glimpses into their lives as they grow.

Brian telling Lindsay off was funny I am happy she got what she deserved sorry she brought an innocent child into her childish behavior, but hopefully his father is there to protect him when Lindsay goes off the rails (I doubt she will stop, for the moment she has just found a new target).

I can't wait to read it all over again this was just wonderful and I look forward to more from you :)

 



Author's Response:

I wrote a new story it starts out sad. I hope that it will work. It gets happier and of course will have humor. It bashes a lot of characters. 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 21, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoa you are not pulling punches this time I can't believe...no wait I can believe how selfish all four of those idiots are being, all they care about is themselves and what they can get from Brian and Justin.

I am so happy that Brian has cut the strings to Michael and Debbie that should have happened a long time ago.

Mel and Lindsay are a terrible couple who should have ended their relationship a long time ago, I can't believe that Mel attacked Gus and threw him out, Brian and Justin are going to kill them for hurting their son.

Everyone not standing behind Brian and Justin is going to suffer their combined wrath and they will deserve it.

I hope you don't blind on pulling any punches this a is fight that has been building for years, it is time to put the bullies in their place once and for all!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

This isn't going to be pretty. Brian is going to make everyone pay. Gus is going to have a lot of help healing. He is hiding a lot from Brian and Justin. Thank you for all the comments and reading through my crazy.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 22, 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow! The stuff that Gus was hiding from Brian and Justin I think we are only scratching the surface of all this kid has been through in Canada, I want to hurt Mel and Lindsay so bad right now they deserve to be in the gutter or underneath it.

Deb is living in a dream if she thinks Brian and Justin still owes her and Michael I think those two should be in the gutter along with the two witches of the north.

JR being on drugs is sad but not really surprising since Mel and Lindsay are just fixated on themselves, plus how much money they can get out of Brian, I was so mad when they asked for $8000 a month are they high! 

I think Brian should sue them for all the support he paid them that they barely spent on Gus, I know they will be coming to Pittsburgh which puts them on Brian and Justin's turf *rubs hands together while smiling evilly* they are all going to learn that it's not nice to attack The Taylor-Kinneys.

Brian and Justin have the money, power and drive to crush them all I can't wait to read that:)

Congrats on your fourth story! You Truly Amaze Me!!


 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 23, 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

The land of denial must be a nice place to live since Melanie, Debbie, Michael, Lindsay and JR have taken permanent residence there, even with the report staring them in the face they will still try to blame Gus, they are children playing at adults.

Not surprised Lindsay's sex buddy broke it off and ended the relationship his sister is a smart woman, wonder if Melanie's sex buddy will drop her too?

Melanie losing her job twice because she refused to listen to the client and using the fact that she is a lesbian is to argue her position is pretty accurate, she always did think being a man hating lesbian means she was right about everything and to Hell with what anyone else wants or thinks.

David is a very good attorney to be two steps ahead of Melanie I hope he and the police will be there to make sure the girls move out in two days.

Lindsay slowly coming to realize that she is on the wrong side is typical her, staying on Melanie's side gives her no monetary benefit though I think she will do her whole pretend thing when Michael shows up with his whining and Deb arguing for her sweet innocent granddaughter.

I doubt Melanie will accept Brian's offer because she won't let him have control over her and her daughter.

I look forward to them having to pack their stuff so fast and being forced to pay back twelve years rent.

I do feel sorry but JR but I also feel she needs to deal with some consequences for her lies about Gus.

I wonder if anyone at the party used their phone to record the party that would be the proof to show the four idiots that Gus was not there and it would show JR using drugs socially, plus it might also show JR being truthful about how she feels with the situation between Mel and Lindsay??



Author's Response:

JR is Michael’s daughter you owe her. Michael is going to meet his match. Deb ineeds to see what pass the blame does. Brian will help if they accept it because the sex for drugs bothers him. He had a daughter.  I gave him a family different than Debs. I always see that scene with Vic where she sat in his house and berated him taking about taking care of him and he owed her. Brian’s family doesn't keep score.

They are going by force from their house. 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 23, 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

A nice quiet moment of family back ending and an introduction to three new people is nice and much needed before the madness starts up again.

How sweet of Brian and Blake to want to help JR but I do agree with Brian Mel is going to fight it because she doesn't want Brian to have all the control.

I like reading about the interaction between Brian, Justin, Ted, Blake, Emmett and Drew it just goes to show you that once you stop listening to others opinions you start to realize who your real friends are.

I look forward to reading about Max, Dylan and Linda they are going to make wonderful additions to this family and they will be loved by Drew and Emmett.

I know Lindsay is starting to realize that maybe JR isn't such a innocent angel, but I still think she will try to con Brian out of some money or manipulate Justin.

Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 24, 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Lindsay is so pathetic She put on her sexy outfit to try to seduce David and he turned her down so fast I bet her head is still spinning.

Mel left her daughter alone so she could Ho get her needs met and now JR is in even more trouble than she was before (And this is after being out of jail less than 24 Hours), I doubt she will get bail this time and even if she could get bail Mel and Lindsay don't have the money to pay for it.

Michael trying to guilt trip Brian was so pathetic typical him though, not surprised Deb got into trouble at work and is now on suspension for a week I doubt her going down there to plead her case will help it could make it worse.

They are all going to flip when they find out she has been re-arrested and this time it is for dealing, Trace is going to rat her out to save himself, she admitted that she has done this before(?), the kid wasn't nervous at all to be handing out drugs to some stranger on the street.

Mel and Lindsay haven't even started packing yet they have a few short hours before the police and David come to toss them out in the street.

Michael, Deb, Lindsay will be calling Brian non-stop for money now, I wonder how Mel and Lindsay's employers will react when they find out about this?

I hope the kids get their pets it is going to be quite a full house lol.

Can't wait to read what happens next this is a spellbinding story. :)

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 24, 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Deb is so lucky because if it was me I wouldn't even give her fifty cent to get to Canada she hears what she wants to hear and believes what she wants to believe. Up get so sick and tired of her playing that same ' You Owe Me, Us' record she needs a good smack upside the head.

Mel and Lindsay are so obtuse that they are still looking for a way to blame Gus despite the fact that evidence proves Gus wasn't even there at the party.

I wonder if Lindsay will get into trouble about using that credit card that was meant for Gus?

The next few hours are going to be quite a whirlwind for these people once Deb and Michael get to Canada, can't wait to see read the fallout :)

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star
Date: Jul 25, 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I will be sad to see this end it has been such a joy to read because all the ones who got on my nerves are getting their just desserts.

Deb finally removed the repose colored glasses to see the truth about Lindsay, Melanie and Mama's precious little baby boy Mikey, he took that money she begged Drew for to buy a toy, he couldn't be bothered to go to work to support himself or his daughter but he could steal money for a toy? SMH

Lindsay using the credit card for her own selfish reasons is not surprising anymore, Mel joining in on the phone is icing on the cake, I agree with David it would have been nice to see the look on their faces as the movers put their stuff on the lawn for all the neighbors to see.

Michael lying to JR about Ben not wanting to see her was so him and so pathetic that the girls joined in, especially since Michael never once helped them with JR's support, but pettiness loves company so they all should get a place together lol.

Lindsay and Melanie go at each was funny because they are two spoiled children just looking for attention, of course this attention they might not enjoy so much but you reap what you sow. (Mommy and daddy Peterson not helping is Hilarious!!)

That was nice of Ben and his husband Brad to take JR in this kid needs discipline and a strong family structure to save her life.

I really liked that Brian and Justin put Debbie in her place she has years of groveling to do before forgiveness can be established, I agree with Justin I don't trust her either she needs to start thinking before she speaks.

I like both story ideas they both sound very interesting though the one about Brian running every time Michael calls has potential for a lot of angst :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the cheering on. I wrote to see if I could and you guys cheered me on. I am already on the next one. Michael is going to be thwarted at every turn and I want to return to a more humorous one.