Penname: sophiesmom Real name: Sherry
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What if Justin didn't run off to New York after Brian's loft got burgled? What happens when he decides to face the situation like an adult? Join us on the journey to find out.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, David Cameron, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Other Cast Regulars, Ted Schmidt, Vic Grassi
Tags: 500k+ Word Count, Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Anti-Michael, Bottom Brian, Family, Getting Back Together, Jealousy, Oral Sex, Responsible Justin, Rimming, Slow Burn, Toppy Justin, What if...
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Canon Divergence, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Porny, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Debbie/Carl, Melanie/Lindsay, Michael/David, Ted/Ben
Series: Tricky Business
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 780683 Read Count: 139925
[Report This] Published: Jan 01, 2017 Updated: Apr 10, 2022
Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: Jun 05, 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Wednesday, December 6th

Ok. First, why is Brian being a complete idiot in every facet of his life? Awkward at the gym, the diner, even at Deb's. The only time he was himself was when he was talking to Justin out back behind the diner?

How much longer is Dr. Dave going to put up with Michael and his gross childish ways? And what's with Brian letting him get away with verbally bashing Justin? That fool should never see a comic book made by him and Justin. NEVER! Isn't worth Justin's time.

Sydney is a riot. Beginning to like her. Love the way she handles Dixon. Getting really tired of that asshole too.

Almost caught up.



Author's Response:

Brian's still a stud, and his usual sarcastic self, but he's missing the blond boy he foolishly threw out of the loft (even if he did think he had good cause at the time) and it's affecting his behavior. And no one's so perfect that they don't have awkward moments, Brian included; we're sharing some of the ones CowLip would've excised. :D Plus, with Ted meeting the hunky professor and developing some self-confidence much earlier than canon, he's more than able to hold his own with Brian. We're proud of our favorite brunet for actually talking to Justin and issuing an apology - that's progress! :)

Dr Dave is completely enamored with Michael, and Brian quite likes it that way - the doc keeps his childhood friend occupied. We'll have to see whether Brian will take Michael to task or not; he's so used to Michael criticizing Justin that he tends to ignore it. You probably don't have much to worry about as far as Justin creating a comic book with Michael; he has neither the time nor the interest.

Sydney seems to be growing on everyone. :D We love the way she keeps wrong-footing Dixon. :D

It's horrid to be caught up with a WIP and waiting for the next chapter. :( We'll try to have a new installment for you soon. :)

~ KaBrynn

 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: May 31, 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Sunday, November 12th

Brian's back home, yay for him. What's going in with his insurance claim?

That Babe Ruth card can probably pay off Deb's mortgage.. They really should look into that.

Telling Tracy that Michael's gay wasn't for Brian to do. I don't think this party is going to go as Brian plans. What Michael really wants for his birthday or any other time is Brian's dick up his ass. He'll never get that present. Ha!



Author's Response:

Brian has escaped the munchers' house! :D :D The insurance company is waiting for the police to clear Brian in regard to the burglary before they will proceed.

The signed baseball card would make a dent in Deb's mortgage, although it probably wouldn't be enough pay it off. There'd still be the debt she and Vic racked up with the trip to Italy, though. In any case, it's far more important to both of them to follow through with the promise they made to Justin in regard to any attic finds. Vic and Deb are pretty darned incredible. :)

No, it's not Brian's place to approach Tracy and tell her Michael's gay, but he's convinced himself he's doing so for his friend, which is partly true. He's doing it for himself too, of course. You're so right that Michael's not going to get the present he most wants! :P

Thanks for the wonderful review, Sherry. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: May 31, 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Veterans Day, Saturday, November 11th

Brian's feeling no pain but at least he knows his limits

Justin is really enjoying staying with Vic and Deb. Gonna be bummed if he ever moves in with Brian again. He likes doing family things, Brian of course doesn't.

I don't understand why Justin doesn't heed the concern of everyone in reference to his dancing at the club. They all only want the best for him.



Author's Response:

A good time was had by Army-Navy and Brian. :D Our favorite brunet may discover the next morning that he didn't know his limits quite as well as he thought. :D

There's no immediate likelihood that Justin will return to the loft. We suspect that if that does happen, Justin will still make sure to spend plenty of time with his adopted family. :) And Brian may not despise family things quite as much as he professes.

Hmm... Justin and Brian are both very stubborn men, often to their detriment. Justin is bound and determined to amass as much money as possible to repay Brian for the burgled goods, all without Brian learning what he's doing.

Thanks for another insightful review, Sherry!

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: May 30, 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Friday, November 10th

If you work for Smythe Justin beware. I smell danger ahead.



Author's Response:

The good news is that Smythe is a far better person than the Sap - we couldn't stand to let that creep invade our story. Since we diverged well beffore his first appearance in canon, we waved our magic wand and * poof * he was gone. :)

This doesn't mean that Justin shouldn't be careful. Smythe will be looking to promote his business through Justin.

Thanks for reviewing, Sherry.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: May 30, 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Thursday, November 9th

Normal everyday life. Why not, once in a while.



Author's Response:

We suppose it is an ordinary day by the boys' standard. :)

Thanks for leaving a comment, Sherry.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: May 29, 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Wednesday, November 8th

Wonder if Brian's bad mood has more to do with being without Justin than being robbed. Hmmm.

Jennifer better get her head out of her ass if she wants anything more to do with Justin. Right now he's having the time of his life outside of school.

 



Author's Response:

Poor Brian - he's not about to acknowledge that missing Justin might be at the root of his bad mood. :D

Jennifer's concerned with the wrong things, at least for now. She'd better be careful if she doesn't want to irreparably damage her relationship with her son. Justin's building a new family and she could be left behind...

Thanks for commenting. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: May 29, 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Tuesday, November 7th

Nice to see ya Marty. Kip a friggin' idiot.

Man these two need their heads smacked together.

Michael needs to get a life and his own place. Good for Em for putting his foot down. If he'd sell that shit he could buy a loft near Brian. Ha!



Author's Response:

We agree - Marty and Kip deserve each other.

Can you imagine being surrounded by that much comic book memorabilia (outside of a shop, that is)? Emmett had to put up with it to some extent since he moved into Michael's apartment, but still... We can't blame canon Dr Dave for being horrified when Michael moved in, although he should have been willing to compromise, if he really wanted it to be 'their' place.

Ssh! Don't give Michael ideas! Brian would have to move. :P

Thanks for the humorous comments. :D

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: May 29, 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Monday, November 6th - Part 2

Communication! Maybe if Brian knew Justin was working so he could try and pay Brian back something, although it would never be enough, it may help with his attitude.

How many times was Mikey dropped on his head? What a fucking idiot. Could never understand that friendship.

Living with Vic and Deb is good for Justin. A sense of belonging to a family again.



Author's Response:

Brian's gotten himself into a pickle - can't stop caring about Justin no matter what. He's not nearly over his mad, though, since he's convinced Justin is at fault for the burglary. And our favorite blond doesn't want to reveal his efforts to make restitution, especially after Brian has again shot him down. Two stubborn men... sigh.

The friendship between Brian and Michael is just bizarre, not to mention codependent and toxic. I thought it was too bad in canon that Michael didn't stay in Portland, at least for a couple of years, or that Brian didn't move to New York (with Justin joining him, of course). With some distance, they might have gained perspective and built a healthier friendship.

Justin has found a loving, accepting family with Vic and Deb. :)

Thanks for reviewing, Sherry!

~ KaBrynn

 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: May 29, 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Monday, November 6th - Part 1

A few more months Justin, just hang in there. Fuck Hobbs and the teachers.

Go Cynthia! Make Brian think about Justin and then ruin his orgasm. Serves him right. Ha!



Author's Response:

Thank goodness Justin has Daphne on his side - that's what a best friend should be like. :) Frau Rose, the English teacher cum librarian, is in his corner too. :)

We still chuckle when we read the scene where Cynthia cockblocked Brian. Blondes rule! :D

Thanks for continung to comment as you read, Sherry.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: May 28, 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Sunday, November 5th - Part 2

Gus is against him forgetting Justin. His dreams are against him. The world and blond twinks who can't give a decent blow job are against it. Only michael. Geeze. Poor guy.

Doesn't he know not to tempt fate like he did by kicking Justin out? Ha!



Author's Response:

Your comments on this chapter have us giggling. :D You'd think Brian would realize fate was conspiring against him, right? But, alas, it can't be that simple for the stud.

Thanks for reviewing, Sherry. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: May 28, 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Sunday, November 5th - Part 1

Justin was lucky Jed was there to look out for him. Who knows what would have happened. I'm certain they'll meet again.

I hated how Brian's selfishness showed it's ugly head when his things were stolen. Not a thought or care as to what could happen to Justin. Lindsay drove that point home and hebdesrtvef to feel unsettled by it.

If the diner had been busy Justin would have missed out on both a job and a place to stay. Funny how Deb and Daphne know Justin's eating habits. Ha!

"Second Hand Job", bet it has almost all of Brian's stolen items inside. Marvella seems to pop up everywhere.



Author's Response:

Justin's encounter with Jed was indeed fortuitous - and the impetus behind our responsible Justin. :)

Not that we agree with the way Brian acted toward Justin, but in the guy's defense, he was feeling very vulnerable after the burglary - all the possessions he'd acquired through hard work gone and his personal space violated. Plus, he's clueless that he's in a relationship with Justin.

Justin and his bottomless stomach! :D Both will feature in the story again.

That's an interesting theory about Second Hand Job and Brian's stolen goods. We'll have to see how that plays out...

Thanks for reviewing chapter by chapter, Sherry. We're enjoying revisiting the beginnings of our story via your comments. :)

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: May 28, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Saturday, November 4th, 2000

I'm just starting this so there will be a skew of reviews.

Justin did lock up. Michael's the one who let the thieves in. Why else was he so close to the loft when Brian got there. Brian was at work when Justin told Cynthia to tell Brian. Why was Mikey around so early in the day?

Yeah, can just picture Brian staying with Em and Mikey till he could get back into the loft. He'd shoot himself first.



Author's Response:

We're made up that you're reading our story, Sherry. :) Feel free to bury us under a mountain of reviews - we can take it. :D It may take us a while to respond, but we'll do our best.

That Michael is responsible for the burglary is a popular theory. That storyline is still playing out, so we'll have so see what develops.

Yeah, Brian would probably have to off himself if he took Michael up on his offer. :D But will the alternative be much better?

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: Jun 02, 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Monday, November 20th

I know I haven't commented lately, but it's better to just keep reading.

What I did want to comment in is that I like the way Brian's and Ted's friendship is developing and that I really like the idea of Ted and Ben. Although I like stories where Ben and Emmett hook up, Ted and Ben is good too. Never u understood what Ben saw in Michael.



Author's Response:

No worries. It's hard to stop and comment when one is engrossed in a story. It's more fun to move on to the next chapter. :)

We're made up that you're enjoying the devloping friendship between Brian and Ted. Ted's self-confidence is increasing ever since meeting Ben. :) There seems to be a consensus among our readers that Ted and Ben make a good couple - they actually have a lot in common.

The relationship between Ben and Michael was weird. Maybe it was a case of opposites attracting and Ben wanting to serve as a mentor to his partner.

At the rate you're reading, you'll soon catch up with us. Many thanks for all the reviews. :)

~ KaBrynn

Summary:

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Justin and Brian have been together for over twenty years. They have a large family, with all the good and bad it involves. One morning their world is thrown into turmoil. Got the idea from Safe Passage, good movie but changing quite a bit. 


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Chris Hobbs, Daphne Chanders, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Ethan Gold, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca Marcus-Peterson, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Ted Schmidt, Tucker
Tags: Anti-Ethan, Post-series
Genres: Drama
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65815 Read Count: 80363
[Report This] Published: Feb 21, 2017 Updated: Nov 27, 2017
Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: Nov 21, 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Teenagers

Brian knew to walk away, and Justin knew what needed to be done for him. Get him away before he went off. Caleb calling Justin by his name and the attitiude almost broke him.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: Nov 27, 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

Nice ending. Everyone found someone, even Avery. They really need a vacation by themselves. Sone day.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Yeah, vacation alone would be nice but I don't think they would get much peace then either. 

Summary:

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Post 513. Brian is missing Justin way more than is healthy for him and it’s showing up in some strange behavior. The gang starts to notice and they get worried. They eventually confront him, but will it do any good?


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Justin Taylor, Other Cast Regulars
Tags: April Fools Day
Genres: Could be Canon, CrackFic, Humor
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Challenges: April Fools Day Crack!Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6908 Read Count: 1373
[Report This] Published: Apr 01, 2017 Updated: Apr 01, 2017
Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: Apr 15, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've read this before and didn't comment because what Michael did and said left me speechless. I can't stand that little weasle.

Brian and Justin are on the same wavelength. Stunning.

Summary:

 

A Partner-free Week Getaway has sent relationships spiraling out of control. After a public altercation, landing the couples in front of Judge Marcus, four skilled counselors will have their work cut out for them to save the well-known couples of Liberty Avenue.

The question is: can they be saved... or do they even want to?

*This ambitious work is 5 stories in one fic! 

Before I Let Go: General and Counselors Povs

Staying or Going- Brian and Justin’s story

In or Out- Michael and Ben’s story

The Wife or the Mistress- Ted and Blake’s story

Fire and Ice- Emmett and Drew’s  story

 


Categories: QAF US, Plot Bunnies
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Drew Boyd, Emmett Honeycutt, Justin Taylor, Melanie Marcus, Original Character, Other Cast Regulars, Ted Schmidt
Tags: Drug Use - Recreational, Established Relationship, Jealousy, Language, M/M, Out of Character, Post-series, Real Life Issues, Season 3, Season 4, Toppy Justin, Voyeurism
Genres: Alternate Canon, Alternate Universe, Angst w/ Happy Ending, Could be Canon, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Porny, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Emmett/Drew, Michael/Ben, Ted/Blake
Series: None
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 196333 Read Count: 207434
[Report This] Published: Apr 06, 2017 Updated: Jun 09, 2023
Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: Nov 07, 2018 Title: Chapter 54: STAYING OR GOING: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: WISEST COURSE OF ACTION Part 2: INFORMED DECISIONS

They know him so well as the money grubbing little weasle he is. .Can't wait to see it come crashing down around him.

Looks like Ben will have a new career with backing and silent partners to the hilt. Good for him.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: Aug 20, 2022 Title: Chapter 77: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 10: IDGAF Part 1

OOO. How well Melanie knows Michael. And Ethan getting the boot off the island. can't wait.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: Jul 10, 2019 Title: Chapter 63: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: MARCH OF A HUNDRED BOXES/ 7 LIVES EXPOSED

Michael just has this inherent knack for ruining everyone's lives doesn't he. Carl probably thought when he met and married Deb he'd have someone to grow older with. I feel bad for gin but he'll be better off.

Diane has to try and find out what Tino's up to and get a warning to Blake. Dr. Crystal should have OD'd a long time ago. The one thing Ted has going for him is the backing of his friends. Even with Brian's past it's going to be hard for anyone toto get him and Ted using again.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: Jul 06, 2019 Title: Chapter 62: FIRE AND ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 4

Boy oh boy I can't wait to see all of Michael's plans backfire. It will be epic.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: Apr 28, 2019 Title: Chapter 60: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2

What an egotistical diabolically thinking idiot. 

Happy David has Chase. He surely wouldn't want to get mixed up with that nut job again. 

Duh duh duh... Oh no Ethan is on the island. Whatever shall we do? Can't wait to read what happens when Dumb and Dumber come face to face.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: Apr 28, 2019 Title: Chapter 59: STAYING OR GOING: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 1

The lives these men live. Good/bad, secrets and full disclosure. It is about time Brian knew about Kip. But with good old Mikey having his fingers in every pot it seems, why then if he truly wanted Brian and Justin broken up did he not tell Brian all about it? It seems like Mikey is all knowing. How could he not have known?

I don't understand why Michael set up Emmett? What was the purpose?

Justin really needed that drink. Ha! I don't think the guys are going to look at him or treat him differently. I'm sure they would care just as much as always. He needs to stop worrying so much about what others think.

Mayweather Media sounds like a can't pass up opportunity but the strings attached aren't worth Justin's time or trouble.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: Feb 15, 2019 Title: Chapter 57: FIRE and ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: TALKING BOOK

That fucker!

Better get the truths out now.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: Oct 31, 2018 Title: Chapter 53: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: THE WISEST COURSE OF ACTION

I just spent days reading all 53 chapters.

I just want to say that I love how much you detest Michael. However cunning and conniving he is, it brings me great joy when all his crap he pulls comes back to bite him in the ass. Purly poetic.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed
Date: Nov 08, 2018 Title: Chapter 55: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: WISEST COURSE OF ACTION Part 3: BELL RINGING and BUTTON PUSHING

Wow, Michael really was and still is a shit.

While they're meeting and filling everyone in on the true Devil himself, what is said Devil doing? Is he getting his minions together? Ethan's on the island. Who else? Did he get a hold of Chris Hobbs? How many of Blake's, his old dealer, Justin's, Drew's, snd even Ben's skeletons out of the closet to get them running away?

Did Lindsay, Mel, and Brian ever discuss having another child together?