Still having technical issues over at MW, so I came here to read and review.

I don't know which has me more teary-eyed those last three paragraphs...  or the author's note at the bottom that says there are onyl a few chapters left!

I love it! Sunshine - Up close and personal!

Still loving this story... always checking for updates! I especially enjoy Brian's little introspections at the beginning of each new chapter. 

Question... BB? Did I miss something? Because I don't know what that nickname means. Oh, and every time I read "Sunshine," I have to remind myself they're talking about the dog, LOL!

Excellent update.

Yes, I get that you're giving Gus a 5-year-old voice... And I think it's done very well, and feels natural. That's why I like it. In my mind, I could just imagine Justin overhearing this and using the same endearment to irritate Brian - in his very Sunshiney-way, of course! ;-)

I think Brian is trying his very best to ignore the similarities he sees in Gus!

So nice to have an update! I love Gus's defense of his B'ine. Looking forward to reading all about the great adventures at Hershey Park. I haven't been there in aaaages!

I'm like Brian... even more curious about Justin's situation now than I was before the big "reveal," of the last chapter. 

Alas... What a shame that Justin's first blowjob lesson had to interrupt a perfectly good plot. *shakes head*

Great chapter! Absolutely loved the morning wake-up scene... It's as if Justin had no issues or insecurities at all. Very clever the way Brian so gently got Justin to loosen up at dinner. But what could possibly be the horribly "bad" thing Justin did or thinks he did???? 

More please... and not just pie! ;-)

Ok, so I basically cried my way through this one... Justin has a lot of healing to do! The twist at the end with the dungeon was great, just what I needed at the end of such an intense chapter. Very curious if we'll get more details about what Justin's hidey-hole was really like... exactly what kind of conditions has he been living in all of this time? 

Great "first contact!" I like how much bolder Justin is when talking to Brian on the tablet... he seems almost like the Justin we know. Yet, when he arrives at the dinner table, it's obvious that this Justin has some serious issues. 

I am very curious to find out just how long Justin has been living like this... did he willingly go into hiding to avoid confrontation with Craig? Or was he forced into exile by Craig? And why did he remain in hiding after Craig was gone? Ooh, there are so many questions rolling around in my head!

Don't know what I'm going to do without a new chapter to read tomorrow night. :'-(

OK, so waiting to read both chapters tonight saved me from the first cliff-hanger, but not from this one!

But I loved the dinner at Deb's and Justin's imaginative disguise... but I'm glad that he waited around until after the car was fixed, and that he finally got all of that guilt about Craig out in the open.

Now, that second cliff-hanger...

Ha! Justin was thirsty after eating Emmett's food the other day!

Brian slumming in a gas station food mart is just too perfect! And Sue Ann... I immediately pictured Betty White as Sue Ann Nivens! I have a feeling Brian might be doing kitchen renovations sooner than he planned.

This just proves that no matter whether in this realm or another, Brian and Justin are made for each other.

I think it's hysterical that Brian has just shrugged his shoulders and decided to make friends with his "ghost," to the point of giving him sex tips, LOL! I also love that Brian lets Justin pick items he wants from the boxes, and lets him borrow the tools, (What IS Justin building?) but warns him about stealing the good lube! Just great!