Penname: Toto_too514 Real name: Patricia Monaco
Member Since: Jul 10, 2017
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Intersect by Annie-Eliza Rated: M star [Reviews - 116]

As Justin makes his way through the crowd in Herald Square, he sees a man who is almost a stranger to him now. *Officially up to date*


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Craig Taylor, Drew Boyd, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, James 'Hunter' Montgomery, Justin Taylor, Molly Taylor, Original Female Character, Original Male Character
Tags: Bottom Brian, Brian/Other, F/M, Justin/Other, M/M, Rape, Raw Sex, Real Life Issues, Self-Harm, Toppy Justin
Genres: Could be Canon, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Brian/Other, Emmett/Drew, Justin/Other, Melanie/Lindsay, Michael/Ben, Other Cast Pairing, Ted/Blake
Series: Intersect Series
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 426095 Read Count: 116626
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2016 Updated: Nov 17, 2020
Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Aug 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51: Berry and N. 7th Street

Still having technical issues over at MW, so I came here to read and review.

I don't know which has me more teary-eyed those last three paragraphs...  or the author's note at the bottom that says there are onyl a few chapters left!

Author's Response:

Aw, but there will be a sequel! I hope to get it out a lot faster (the first chapter is already written). Thank you so much for your patience and continuing to follow this story. It means a lot! Newest chapter is now up!

Going PC by Tagsit Rated: M half-star [Reviews - 401]
Summary: Feature

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In an age where extreme Capitalism and the pursuit of the Almighty Buck supersedes all ethics and morality, Brian Kinney purchases the contract of a beautiful, young, Personal Companion that he wants to rescue from the harsh fate life has dictated for him. Variation on the Slave!Justin storyline. 


Categories: QAF US, Reader's Choice Award
Characters: Brian Kinney, Justin Taylor, Other Cast Regulars
Tags: 100k+ Word Count, Abuse/Child Abuse, Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Anti-Lindsay, BDSM, Bondage, M/M, Minor Violence, Out of Character, Torture
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 252281 Read Count: 143164
[Report This] Published: Oct 04, 2016 Updated: May 04, 2017
Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28, 2020 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54 - PC Epilogue.

So exactly what does one do during a quarantine??? Why, you read the classics!

I really needed some Brian and Justin therapy. I have already finished Time Blitz for, I think, the 5th time.  And once I saw this one had exactly 399 comments, my OCD would't let me NOT make it a nice even 400. Hmmm... OCD? Maybe time to re-read Stylite. 

Stay safe!

Author's Response:

Yay! Happy 400! 🎉🎉🎉 (I'm doing the same thing - re-reading my older stories while I try to get past the quarantine brain long enough to write more). TAG


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Ted Schmidt, up and coming Adult Entertainment mogul, decides to launch a new website, this one one targeted to reach the fastest growing segment of the gay porn market - straight women. Ted hires Daphne Chanders, a hot young amateur porn writer, to help him write and produce the porn shorts he wants to make for this site. Daphne convinces her friend, Justin, to join the project as one of the actors. Ted offers a similar job to his friend, Brian. While they're all engaged in making delightfully porny movielets for their eager and fanatic female audience, will the two stars slowly begin to fall in love for real?

***Thanks to Marny for contributing a beautiful banner to our story! *** 

Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Daphne Chanders, Justin Taylor, Original Character, Other Cast Regulars, Ted Schmidt
Tags: Anal Sex (Lots of it!), First Time (Sex), Kink, M/M, Oral Sex, Orgy (plays well w/others), Rimming, Sex Toys, Threesomes, Toppy Justin
Genres: Alternate Universe, Porny
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Brian/Justin/Other
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56648 Read Count: 17567
[Report This] Published: Jun 05, 2017 Updated: Aug 02, 2019
Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Jul 13, 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Say Cheese!

I love it! Sunshine - Up close and personal!

Author's Response:

REALLY close and REALLY personal. LOL. Glad you approved. TAG

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Jul 11, 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - A Walk In The Park

Nice to see an update! I liked tagging along with the boys at the park! 

Unexpected by Lorie , Tagsit Rated: M half-star [Reviews - 243]

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When a stray five year old named Gus shows up on Brian Kinney's doorstep one night, the Stud of Liberty Avenue is thrown unprepared into the scary and uncharted realms of parenthood. Luckily he happens upon a hot little blond with a parenting story of his own.

Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Daphne Chanders, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Justin Taylor, Molly Taylor, Other Cast Regulars, Ted Schmidt
Tags: 100k+ Word Count, Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Bottom Brian, Family, Friendship, Language, M/M, Out of Character, Real Life Issues, Toppy Justin
Genres: Alternate Universe, Humor, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Debbie/Carl, Michael/David
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112323 Read Count: 102637
[Report This] Published: Jul 05, 2017 Updated: Sep 13, 2017
Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Jul 23, 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Kid's Life

Still loving this story... always checking for updates! I especially enjoy Brian's little introspections at the beginning of each new chapter. 

Question... BB? Did I miss something? Because I don't know what that nickname means. Oh, and every time I read "Sunshine," I have to remind myself they're talking about the dog, LOL!

Excellent update.

Author's Response:


Toto too,

Glad you're still loving the story.

BB - Bubble Butt. It was in chapter 12, after Brian Bottoms. BB and Stud.

You're not the only one, and I'm helping to write the story. BTW, Sunshine really was her name.

~Tagsit and Lorie~


Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Jul 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Life Experiences

Oh, poor Justin... how awful! 

I'm glad Justin felt the trust he needed to unburden himself to Brian and I'm glad Brian is taking the time to at least allow himself a chance at something more than he's used to. 

Very clever of Justin to figure out Lindsay's name!

Already looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response:


Toto too,

Justin has had a bad time, but Brian will help with that.

Brian is realizing he needs to change some things.

Justin has had much more practice with kids.

More soon.

~Tagsit and Lorie~


Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Jul 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Zoo Life

Yes, I get that you're giving Gus a 5-year-old voice... And I think it's done very well, and feels natural. That's why I like it. In my mind, I could just imagine Justin overhearing this and using the same endearment to irritate Brian - in his very Sunshiney-way, of course! ;-)

I think Brian is trying his very best to ignore the similarities he sees in Gus!


Author's Response:


Toto too,

Thanks that's a great compliment. It's been a long time since my kids were that age.

Justin will have a couple of pet names for Brian.

It's creeping in slowly, others definitely notice.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed half-star
Date: Jul 10, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Zoo Life

HOORAY! Justin is finally here! And it looks like he already has Brian's number.

BTW, B'ine is the cutest name ever. I hope Justin tells him so too! I'm also loving how the family is humoring Brian by not pressing the obvious, that this kid is his! Saving Chapter six for a little later, when I can relax and give it the attention it deserves.

Author's Response:


Toto too,

We're trying to make Gus sound like a five year old. 

If Brian pays attention he'll probably notice similarities.

Hope you enjoy the next chapter.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Aug 12, 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Life With Others

So nice to have an update! I love Gus's defense of his B'ine. Looking forward to reading all about the great adventures at Hershey Park. I haven't been there in aaaages!

Author's Response:


Toto too,

Gus is happy to have people who care, he doesn't want anyone to mess it up for him.

It will be fun for them at the park, there's lots to do.

~Tagsit and Lorie~


Bad Justin by Tagsit Rated: M half-star [Reviews - 280]

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There’s something very mysterious about the big house in the country that Brian just purchased . . .

Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Justin Taylor, Other Cast Regulars
Tags: Abuse/Child Abuse, Anal Sex (Lots of it!), First Time (Sex), M/M, Mental Health Issues
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 111347 Read Count: 54372
[Report This] Published: Sep 07, 2017 Updated: Oct 29, 2017
Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Sep 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Talking Points.

Yay! A sunshine smile! I found the Facetime interaction so sad... the idea that Justin has been living in the darkness behind the walls for so long. 

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Oct 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Welcome To The Ranks.

I'm like Brian... even more curious about Justin's situation now than I was before the big "reveal," of the last chapter. 

Alas... What a shame that Justin's first blowjob lesson had to interrupt a perfectly good plot. *shakes head*

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Oct 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Coming Home

Not too surprised at Justin's confession about feeling guilty about the car accident. And I'm sure Craig took every opportunity to reinforce that guilt. Maybe Justin will feel a little better just sharing the story with someone.

I guess Justin was afraid a local plumber might recognize him... 

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Oct 04, 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Coming Out

Great chapter! Absolutely loved the morning wake-up scene... It's as if Justin had no issues or insecurities at all. Very clever the way Brian so gently got Justin to loosen up at dinner. But what could possibly be the horribly "bad" thing Justin did or thinks he did???? 

More please... and not just pie! ;-)

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Oct 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Lair of the Ghost.

Oh, wow... this was just what I was hoping for - A better picture of what Justin had been enduring while hidden away in the house. Like Brian, I am curious as to why the locks were on the inside. Perhaps a way to keep Craig away? Or had Craig threatened to send Justin away, and Justin was protecting himself??? So many questions! 

Is it too soon to ask for the next chapter, LOL!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Sep 30, 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Mood Lighting

Ok, so I basically cried my way through this one... Justin has a lot of healing to do! The twist at the end with the dungeon was great, just what I needed at the end of such an intense chapter. Very curious if we'll get more details about what Justin's hidey-hole was really like... exactly what kind of conditions has he been living in all of this time? 

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Sep 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out

I think it's great that Brian feels the need to "protect" his house's and his Ghostboy's honor!

Poor Justin... that reaction to a simple touch and the constant self-deprecating way he speaks about himself. If you hadn't already killed Craig, I would happily do it!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Sep 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - First Contact

Great "first contact!" I like how much bolder Justin is when talking to Brian on the tablet... he seems almost like the Justin we know. Yet, when he arrives at the dinner table, it's obvious that this Justin has some serious issues. 

I am very curious to find out just how long Justin has been living like this... did he willingly go into hiding to avoid confrontation with Craig? Or was he forced into exile by Craig? And why did he remain in hiding after Craig was gone? Ooh, there are so many questions rolling around in my head!

Don't know what I'm going to do without a new chapter to read tomorrow night. :'-(

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Sep 18, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Visitations.

Ha! Those ladies are something else! 

A little mothering from Debbie, with an assist from Justin... it's everything Brian needs to feel better!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Oct 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - How To Make A Murderer

OK, so waiting to read both chapters tonight saved me from the first cliff-hanger, but not from this one!

But I loved the dinner at Deb's and Justin's imaginative disguise... but I'm glad that he waited around until after the car was fixed, and that he finally got all of that guilt about Craig out in the open.

Now, that second cliff-hanger...

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Sep 08, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Moving Day.

It's your birthday... but we get the great present!

I don't know anything about the film that inspired this... I don't even recognize the title. But I'm hooked on this!


Author's Response:

Birthday presents for all, I say! Happy reading! TAG

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Sep 10, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Infestation.

Ha! Justin was thirsty after eating Emmett's food the other day!

Author's Response:

Can't ghosts like beer too? Or maybe this ghost was just being mischievous and wanted to take Brian's beer so our handy homeowner wouldn't get too drunk? You just never know with ghosts . . . TAG

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Oct 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - You Just Never Knew

Teddy to the rescue! 

I don't think I'd consider Brian to be a murderer... it was more of a mercy killing.  But I'm glad he was able to calm Justin with the story.

Wish we could have stuck around for the coming out party with the Quilting Ladies though, LOL!

I'm already missing this story...

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Sep 16, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Sweet Smiles

Brian slumming in a gas station food mart is just too perfect! And Sue Ann... I immediately pictured Betty White as Sue Ann Nivens! I have a feeling Brian might be doing kitchen renovations sooner than he planned.

Author's Response:

IKR! I can just see Brian being forced to buy his food in a gas station. LOL. Glad you like Sue Ann - she's based off one of my mother's friends that I met in AZ over the summer. I can just see her flirting outrageously with someone like Brian. And, yes, Betty White would probably be the actress to play this part in the movie that will inevitably make. TAG

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Sep 13, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Boy In The Walls.

I don't mind being confused... not when I'm having this much fun reading! Hoping for another late night stealth post soon!

Author's Response:

How about an 'Afternoon Delight' post instead? Lol. TAG

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed
Date: Sep 18, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Sexy, Spooky Shenanigans

This just proves that no matter whether in this realm or another, Brian and Justin are made for each other.

I think it's hysterical that Brian has just shrugged his shoulders and decided to make friends with his "ghost," to the point of giving him sex tips, LOL! I also love that Brian lets Justin pick items he wants from the boxes, and lets him borrow the tools, (What IS Justin building?) but warns him about stealing the good lube! Just great!