Penname: soirsagrey Real name: meriam
Member Since: May 08, 2016
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Obsessive Compulsive Reader from the North East part of the Netherlands. Out and proud bisexual and in a relationship with my gorgeous girlfriend Cecilia. Sharing my home with my lovely Podenco/Husky mix Ylva who is now my only pet. December 2023 I had to say goodbye to my lovely three legged tomcat Turbo at the age of 15


Hobbies: QaF Fanfiction, taking long walks preferably in the autumn with the camera in tow. Long bicycle rides even when it rains ( but not too hard).     I love the woods and fields around my town but I also love the beach. I'm an outdoor kinda girl .


I love Dr. Who, (10 is to die for.) Torchwood, Star Trek and Star Wars, Arrow and a major fan of John Barrowman and Matt Bomer. Lately discovered Shadowhunters and religously shipping Malec.  Also loving the vocal stylings of Mr. Adam Lambert.


I used to repair bicycles for a living. I loved to get my hands real dirty and love the fact that 15 years ago I opened the door to more women working this line of work. But still we are few.


Recently I decided due to more and more strains on my body to switch careers. 
I'm going to go on an artistic journey by trying my hand on different arts and crafts areas. I developed a keen interest in working working with stained glass and glass painting.  Also interested in painting on silk.


Having gotten used to work in jeans and old shirts left me with a craving for nice clothes and shoes. I love, love, love vintage (inspired) clothing especially the swing dresses of the 50's.. But the odd pencil dress, tops, blouses or 40's pair of trousers can be found in my wardrobe.


I came to QaF about 10 years after the show aired discovering  a clip on youtube.  A couple of months later a friend gave me the downloaded series as a birthday present. Hooked ever since.  Recently I bought the original series (no netflix version for me) boxset for a small price. Heaven does excist.


 


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To The Victor by elyxer Rated: M starstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

This is a PWP where Brian and Justin try to see who comes out on Top.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Justin Taylor
Tags: Anal Sex (Lots of it!), BDSM, Bottom Brian, M/M, One-Shot, Oral Sex, Rimming, Sex Toys, Spanking, Toppy Justin, Voyeurism
Genres: Alternate Universe, Could be Canon, Porny
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5055 Read Count: 2553
[Report This] Published: Nov 03, 2016 Updated: Jan 10, 2017
Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Jan 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Jalapeño peppers?  

Wasabi straight out of a jar?

Chili's eaten raw.....

Those are nothing compared to the hottness of this story. THE hottest story in ages.

 

Thanks for sharing and welcome to KD.

XOXO

Meriam

 

Summary:

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This is where my mind decided Jack & Ianto's 1st time takes place, at the conclusion of 'Meat'.


Categories: Torchwood
Characters: Captain Jack Harkness, Ianto Jones
Tags: Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Dirty Talk, First Time (Sex), Language, M/M, Oral Sex, PWP (Plot? What Plot?), Rimming
Genres: Could be Canon, CrackFic, Porny, PWP (Plot? What Plot?)
Pairings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6961 Read Count: 463
[Report This] Published: Nov 18, 2016 Updated: Nov 18, 2016
Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Nov 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: There's a first time for everything

Hiya,

My first fanfiction love was Torchwood. I read massive amounts of TW before I discovered QaF. Still TW will always have a special place in my heart. 

To discover this little gem was such a pleasure.

Short, sweet and piping hot. Just the way I like my TW fics.

Thank you for sharing this with us readers.

XOXO
Soirsa

Summary:

Justin is a member of the chorus line of a touring Broadway musical.  One night, after getting a break from rehearsals, the gay boys of the chorus line decide to try out a hot spot in the city they are now in.  Justin is goaded into trying out for the dance contest at Babylon and is spotted by the club's #1 stud, Brian Kinney.  Will sparks fly when their eyes meet? 

 


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Justin Taylor, Other Cast Regulars
Tags: Anal Sex (Lots of it!), First Time (Sex)
Genres: Alternate Universe, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3126 Read Count: 856
[Report This] Published: Dec 06, 2016 Updated: Dec 06, 2016
Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Dec 12, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. Dancing Into His Heart

Great story. Love the way you took a scene out of the series, flipped it around and gave us a totally new outlook on the romance that is Brian and Justin.

Wonderful read and a wonderful story to end the day with.

Thank you so much for sharing.

XOXO

Soirsa



Author's Response:

I apologize for taking so long to respond, Soirsa.  I truly appreciate your comments.  Thank you very much for checking out my story, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

Summary:

 

Summary: Gale's in pain and worried about the future of his relationship with Randy. RPS sequel to Life is a Cabaret and Go Get Him, Peter Pan. Although this one-shot can be read on its own, you'll probably enjoy it more if you read the other two stories first. Final one-shot in the Cabaret trilogy inspired by the Zarata Events convention in Bilbao, Spain, where Randy and Gale meet again.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Gale, Hal, Michelle, Peter, Randy, Robert, Scott, Thea
Tags: 10k+ Word Count, One-Shot, Oral Sex, RPS (Real Person Slash)
Genres: Humor, Porny, Romance
Pairings: Gale/Randy
Series: Cabaret
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12658 Read Count: 1350
[Report This] Published: Dec 17, 2016 Updated: Dec 17, 2016
Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Dec 17, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hello Karynn,

Thank you for one lovely story. The perfect ending to this wonderful trilogy.

I love everything about this. The antics the fan"girls" get up to to be near their idols. It had me in stitches. The nicknames are really hilarious. And how defensive the ladies are about Gale. 

The scene where the "ladies" were planning to follow Gale into the men's room had me roaring with laughter. I nearly busted my stitches. Do fan"girls" really do these kinds of things? 

As you know RPS is not my cup of tea but these three stories sure were sublime. A wonderful glimpse into the world of fandom and idol worship.

I would have loved to have been there in Spain. But alas..... maybe one day I will get to meet all those ladies I see in the pictures of several facebook pages. 

Thank you for the lovely dedication. And yes it did the trick. I feel much better. 

XOXO

Soirsa



Author's Response:

Thanks for your detailed comments, Soirsa. I'm doing a happy dance as I read what you enjoyed. :)

I have heard of fans following their idols to the men's room, although I'm not sure whether they've gone inside. More likely they lingered outside until the object of their affection emerged, lol.

As you guessed, the humor is intentionally over the top, although it also contains a grain (or grains) of truth. I like to weave some fact in with fiction and have fun doing it.

I, too, would have liked to be there in Spain and meet other fans. Someday, maybe.

So glad you're doing better. I figured you could use a good laugh or two or three. :D

Big hug,

Karynn

Twenty-Ten by Morpheus Rated: M starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

The Year is 2010. Justin comes home to Pittsburgh for a special occasion. Justin's POV.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brian Kinney, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Ted Schmidt, Vic Grassi
Tags: Birthday, Family, M/M, One-Shot, Post-series
Genres: Alternate Universe, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11512 Read Count: 1696
[Report This] Published: Dec 18, 2016 Updated: Dec 18, 2016
Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Aug 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love, love, love this.

XOXO

MeMa

Summary: Feature

What happens when Justin's need for food, Brian's need for something (but he doesn't know what) and Michael's need for attention clash...

This is a co-author fic with Bea Johnson, who suggested the idea.  She, Nichelle Wellesly and Kathy Hearns are my awesome betas.  Thanks ladies!

 


Categories: QAF US, Reader's Choice Award
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Debbie Novotny, Drew Boyd, Emmett Honeycutt, Justin Taylor, Kiki, Michael Novotny, Original Character, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Other Cast Regulars
Tags: 100k+ Word Count, Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Michael, Bottom Brian, Brain Bleach Recommended, First Time (Sex), Out of Character, Rimming, Toppy Justin
Genres: Angst w/ Happy Ending, Hurt/Comfort
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Debbie/Carl, Emmett/Drew, Melanie/Lindsay, Michael/Ben, Ted/Blake
Series: Food of Love
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281598 Read Count: 651889
[Report This] Published: Dec 20, 2016 Updated: Apr 02, 2018
Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Dec 20, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Cold

Yep! That's the way to meet someone. Puke all over them. But why did Justin have to throw up all over Brian.

Would have preferred it would have been Michael who would have gotten the master load. 

And do I have permission to stitch Whiney's mouth up so he finally shuts up?

Keep this one up. And I'l keep reading and reviewing.

XOXO
Meriam



Author's Response:

As much as a great idea as that would've been he wouldve whined and Brian would've taken him home.  This way they get a few minutes for the sparks to start.

And yes, yes you do...use a big needle and no anaesthetic.

Nicole xxx

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Jan 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Honesty and Payback

WOOHOO!!!
The cat is out of the bag and it is bye, bye to "poor Widdle Mickey" and his collectibles. How stupid can he be to put all his possesions on the line for one stupid comic book. He has as much brain contens as an amoeba on a flea on a dog. None at all!!! The way he is willing to take care of Lindsey but not his daughter really made my blood boil.

And way to go Slick! What is there not to love about this firecracker of a woman. Her "adoption" of first Brian and then Justin makes her so special and loved. So happy for her she found Lindon to love. And he sure loves her as well. One magnificent couple.

Not at all surprised about the review Lindsey gave of the show. She is so biased and so vengefull. Just great the way she fell flat on her face in front of the entire "family". 

Can't wait for the next chapter. I just love this story.

XOXO

Meriam

 

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Feb 05, 2017 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 - Twinkle

I want to kiss Twinkle. The way he treated Bitchy and Whiney to a milkshake made me giggle for a while. 

The silent treatment B&W are getting all up and down Liberty Av. is awesome. They are getting what they deserve. Them crashing the party at the loft is unforgivable. 

I just hope our hapless duo get it into their stupid heads that Brian and Justin are really together now. But somehow I think they will make even more mistakes towards Brian, Justin and the rest.

Twister in the loft! Who would have guessed that to happen. Great to see all of the "family" enjoying themselves.

Thank you for another great update

XOXO

Meriam 

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Feb 21, 2017 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 - Devil Makes Work for Idle Hands...both Good and Bad

And once again Captain Asshat and Blondie Bitch, AKA Dumb and Dumber, are up to no good. How the heck do they come up with all these stupid idea's? Obviously they still haven't had enough snubs and are asking for more.

This story gains strength from chapter to chapter and has become one of the stories that make my heart dance a samba when a new update is up.

Keep going Nicole, for I'm not fed up with this one yet. I can't wait what you come up with now to get CA&BB into even more trouble and of course with the wedding coming up it will be even more fun.

Thanks you for all these wonderful chapters I had to catch up with.

Big,big,big,big hug with sprinkles on top

Meriam

 



Author's Response:

Gorgeous girl, thanks for the review!  Samba dancing eh, well hopefully the next few chaoters will make you shake your groove thang some more!

Hugging to infinity and beyond and a dollop their ice cream on top!

Nicole

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Mar 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62 - Tease, Taste and Tell

I love the way Slick has the Dastardly Duo dancing on her strings. She is like a spider in an ever growing web. And still Blondy and Whiney are not aware of how far Slick's strings reach. 

Grim and Twinkle: Awww they are so adorable.

Claire getting a second chance. Go girl, you deserved it.

And the new couple on the block? Kyle and Brandon: hot, hot, hot.

Eagerly awaiting the next update.

Love you with hot fudge and whipped cream on top. 

XOXO

Meriam

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Mar 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65 - A Small World

From being comrads in arms to being each other worst enemies: The story of Lindsay and Michael. Can't wait to see who delivers the first punch. I guess it will be Mickey when he realises he can't get to his precious toys.

And Brian and Justin: they have to be the reason there is global warming! Those two are way beyond hot....

Thanx for sharing!

Looking forward to the next update.

XOXO

Meriam

 



Author's Response:

Welcome darling girl. 

Happy reading.

Nicole xxx

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Mar 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66 - Pot-Stirrers over Pot-Stickers

Oh my sweet Lord,

Such an evil, wicked but extremely hilarious chapter.

First there is Terez in her wiggle dress for I guess that is what she was wearing. From the way you describe her she's a latina pin-up girl. I've seen and worn wiggle dresses and know how tight they can be but to actually creak while worn it must be a very tight fit. The disaproving look of Lindsay towards Mickey not being able to keep his eyes of the infamous cleavage is dripping with envy. Can't wait to see how Mickey is going to escape from Terez's exquisite torture. Her and Claire? The dastardly devious dames. What's not to love about them.

And then that dinner!! OMG you wicked woman! All Lindsay's and Mickey's enemies all in one room? I was howling with laughter all through that scene. I will defenitely need to reread this one again and again. 

And there is more to come? Please, please, pretty please make it soon. Can't wait to see how this ends. (guessing in tears of laughter)

Thank you for making my sides and my stomach hurt with laughter.

XOXO

Meriam

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Mar 13, 2017 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68 - Fawning and Divining

Those last 10 lines and especially the final two: The ultimate revenge.

Mickey is going to have a cosmic meltdown to the magnitude of 10 when he finds out where his priceless comics have gone. Way to go Divina!!

And way to go Jenny! The way she dismissed her "daddy". Utter brilliance.

You my dear friend are spinning one heck of a tale. Can hardly wait for the next update.

Off to read the updates to ROTS.

XOXO

Meriam

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Mar 27, 2017 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75 - An Unexpected Assist, Slick vs Brian...and Reality Bites for Lindsay

EEEEEEWWWWW!!!

EEEEWWWW!!!

Did they really do it? Mickey and Lindsey....... EEEEWWW!!! 

Major, really major brain and eye bleach required. And I guess bleach won't suffice anymore. It really has to be hydrochloric acid to burn those images out of my mind. 

I do hope those two nincompoops will get their come uppance very, very soon.

XOXO

Meriam



Author's Response:

Sorry, sorry and sorry!!!   Comeuppance coming very soon and advance warning...there's more of that ickiness to be revealed.

Nicole xxx

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Mar 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76 - Getting Married in the Morning...Right?

Oh my good gracious: Brian and Justin secretly married. YIHAA!! 

A big thumbs up to Slick for being that much in control of herself. This could have ended up in a big bloody mess. 

Now it's back to jail for Widdle Mickey and Blondy Bitch. Good for them!

I'm still giggling deep down about Mickey trying cosying up to Terez. Is he still a gay man or is he going the bi way? He can certainly think about that in jail. 

The wedding of Twinkle and Grim will be an event to behold. I wish them every happiness in the world.

Eagerly awaiting the next update.

XOXO

Meriam

 

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Apr 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83 - Truth and Meeting

Sweet Lord in Heaven what an update this turned out to be.

Nancy picking her clothes out of the mud dressed in her nightie. OMG you had me howling with laughter at the demise of that old crone. Darling this was one amazing chapter.

I just feel so terribly sorry for Lynette for being treated that f**king awful by that woman that calls herself her mother. Now we all know where Lindsey learned her behaviour.

Fun to see both Asshat and Blondy Bitch going down in court. Can't wait for the sentence to be announced. I guess they both will spend a considerable time in jail. Which they obviously deserve! They way they both acted: despicable.

I know they both will have a "jolly, happy" time behind bars.

I loved Lindons propasal to Slick. Very romantic and all of that in the presence of Nancy. She is being ousted more and more for her homophobia and false sense of pride and entitlement.

And Ronald? Well he is in better spirits since he decided to leave Nancy. His life did a 180. And isn't it looking up for him in a magnificent way? New selfrespect, new friends and possibly a new love. Go Ronald.

Eagerly awaiting the next update and off to read the updates on ROTS.

Loving you to bits for this enjoyable read.

XOXO

Meriam

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Apr 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84 - Laying Down the Law

YES, YES, YES!!! 

Full jail time for both bitches and absolutely no contact with Brian and Justin afterwards! The ultimate scentence for them. A social death sentence....

Nobody and I mean nobody will want to see Blondy Bitch and Manky Mickey after their return from jail. They might as well move to Alaska to be pissed on by the elks and wolves for they are dead to the Avenue!!

It will also mean the ostracism of Nancy as well. She will never, ever, ever be welcome in the WASP circles of Pittsburg and New York and possibly even further away for don't they all know each other in these circles? And I guess there will be a warm welcome for Slick in those circles for getting rid of the obnoxious and over entitled Nancy and Lindsey.

All this will bring peace and quiet and some well deserved love for Ron and Lynette. They will most likely grow closer together and enjoy their new found appreciation of each other.

A big bravo to Brian and Daniel for verbaly kicking M&L's butts. And an even bigger bravo for Slick for keeping her statement short but venomous as can be.

I just feel very sorry for poor Debs to see her son sinking away into oblivion. But I guess her extended family will help her in getting over all this.

Thank you for an amazing, amazing update.

XOXO

Meriam

Summary:


 

A Justin - Gus ficlet. On Christmas Day, Justin rationalizes his feelings for Brian's son. 

Merry Christmas, everyone! 


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus
Tags: Christmas, Established Relationship, Family, One-Shot
Genres: Could be Canon
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Melanie/Lindsay
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1183 Read Count: 1162
[Report This] Published: Dec 25, 2016 Updated: Dec 25, 2016
Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Dec 25, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Merry Christmas - Love, Gus

Charming, heartwarming and oh so sweet. 
This is one lovely story.

XOXO

Soirsa

Summary:

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What happens under the mistletoe, stays under the mistletoe. A short Christmas story of a miss-placed mistletoe brunch and Justin's mischievousness nature.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Justin Taylor
Tags: Christmas, Drabble, Family, Language, M/M, One-Shot
Genres: Canon, Humor
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 980 Read Count: 767
[Report This] Published: Dec 25, 2016 Updated: Dec 25, 2016
Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Dec 25, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: What Happens Under the Mistletoe

Who ever would have thought that Brian Kinney likes Christmas.

Cute the way Emmet stole a kiss from Justin and Brian wasn't even upset. 

And to top it off: Justin "steals" the mistletoe for some Christmas spanking.

Cute, really really cute story.

Merry Christmas and thanks for sharing.

XOXO

Soirsa

Summary:

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What if Justin didn't run off to New York after Brian's loft got burgled? What happens when he decides to face the situation like an adult? Join us on the journey to find out.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, David Cameron, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Other Cast Regulars, Ted Schmidt, Vic Grassi
Tags: 500k+ Word Count, Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Anti-Michael, Bottom Brian, Family, Getting Back Together, Jealousy, Oral Sex, Responsible Justin, Rimming, Slow Burn, Toppy Justin, What if...
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Canon Divergence, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Porny, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Debbie/Carl, Melanie/Lindsay, Michael/David, Ted/Ben
Series: Tricky Business
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 780683 Read Count: 139885
[Report This] Published: Jan 01, 2017 Updated: Apr 10, 2022
Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Feb 20, 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Thursday, November 9th

Hiya,

Due to RL troubles I hadn't gotten around to reading this. So now I did 8 chapters in one go.

I love, love, love this story. Justin is amazing in getting on with his life while Brian seems to go off the rails.

Let's hope Brian can step over his own shadow and forgive poor innocent Justin for I agree with our blondie: It must have been a big gang to do this heist for nobody can clean out a loft in so short a time on their own.

Looking forward to the next update.

XOXO

Meriam



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the lovely review, Meriam! We're so glad we could delight you with eight chapters at once, which we hope made RL better for you. :)

Brian hasn't gotten over his mad yet - that was such drastic possession withdrawal for the big guy to cope with. It surely didn't help to have that wanker Thomas go on the attack right after the burglary.

We're so impressed by Justin - such a caring, mature young man. He does have his teen drama moments, though.

We're working on the next chapter now. :)

~Karynn & Brynn

Summary: Feature

I choose this story because it has drama, intrigue, humor, sex... all the things which allow me to settle and suspend my reality for a good long while. Anytime I'm ready to bite folks for disturbing me while reading... well you KNOW that's a great read! -Nichelle Wellesley 

Sequel to The Buzz of the Wasp.  

Luther gathers enemies of Brian, Justin, and Zee... yes, including those two... to seek revenge for his humiliation. He thinks he's got game, he is so very wrong!


Categories: QAF US, Admin Pick
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, David Cameron, Debbie Novotny, Drew Boyd, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, James 'Hunter' Montgomery, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca Marcus-Peterson, Justin Taylor, Kiki, Leda, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Original Character, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Other Cast Regulars, Ted Schmidt
Tags: 100k+ Word Count, Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Anniversary, Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Michael, Bottom Brian, Brain Bleach Recommended, Christmas, Established Relationship, Family, Hatred, Homophobia, Post-series, Raw Sex, Rimming, Toppy Justin
Genres: Angst w/ Happy Ending, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Porny, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Debbie/Carl, Emmett/Drew, Ted/Blake
Series: Waking with Enemies
Chapters: 77 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256975 Read Count: 386959
[Report This] Published: Jan 04, 2017 Updated: Jun 19, 2017
Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Apr 06, 2017 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Hiya, reviewing two chapters in one go.

When God was giving out braincells to every creature in creation Mr. Michael Novotny must have been the last in line. Even an amoebe on a flee on a dog has more braincells then Captain Nuts for Brains.

16 and a half years of jail already and counting........ Bubba is going to have a roommate for a long time to come.

The cherry on the cake in this chapter must be Zee's pregnancy. Oh this is such wonderful news and one hell of a plot twist.

Ronald? Bravo for finaly growing some balls. He will be a very welcome addition to the fold. I guess he will become one heck of a granddad for Gus and Jenny.

The "performance" of Joan and Claire Kinney deserves a night in jail. The opiniated cows deserve all that is coming to them. The utter stupidity of those two astounds me. Now they expect Brian to bail them out? Bitches, dream on......

On to the next session in court and another punch in the face for Michael "Mason" Novotny. Is he really that delusional in thinking "little" miss Jenny will have a kind word for him? Can't wait to see her rip him apart.

And I loved seeing the formiddable duo Narda and Meriam in action. They are a top team!

Can hardly wait for the next update of this thrill ride of a story.

XOXO

Meriam

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Mar 02, 2017 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Out of breath from ranting and crying.

WTF Michael. You unimaginable bastard! Robbing your best friend and let his lover take the blame? You should be flogged, skinned alive and rubbed down with salt and then left to stew in it with you hands and feet tied. 

Messing with the condoms was stupid but then offer Lindsay to be the father to her next child? How stupid are you? No please don't answer that. An amoeba on a flee on a dog has more braincells that you will ever have.

Michael has crossed some major lines here and may the courtcase that follows all these transgressions be a serious drama. Is Judge Maatje going to be the one to preside over this one? I'd love to see her chopping Widdle Mickey to bitesize chunks and feed him to some ravenous long time jailies with an appetite for a whiney piece of ass.

Done ranting now!

So looking forward to the next update.

XOXO

Meriam

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Mar 23, 2017 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

No way are you going to bitch me into a delay.  Throw everything you’ve got at me.  I have 30 years in the legal system and over 20 years living in Hell’s Kitchen.  You sir, are merely a snack!


OMG I love Judge Carruthers. Mikey is going down hard and fast. And then being arrested in the court room? HILARIOUS. This asshole will never, ever, ever learn.


Big Bubba can start preparing for training his new "fish" for Mickey is going to go down for a very, very, very long time. 


You remember we talked about: Op je muil gaan? Well this is op je muil gaan to the max!! If and whenever asshat is going to be realeased from prison he will be persona non grata on Liberty Avenue. Or should I say Pussona non grata. For he will be bottoming for each and everyone in jail.


Poor Ms. Joss to have to work for this asshole. It is enough to make anybody quit their work as a lawyer. Good to know that the rest of the prosecuters includig Judge Carruthers have her back. She will need it when she has to question him.


Can hardly wait for the next update. For this could very well become THE courtcase of the century.


Thank you for brightening my day.


XOXO


Meriam


 

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Apr 02, 2017 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

OMG and now he even stole from his mother and his uncel! How despicable can a person become, how low can he sink.

He will go to jail for a very long time! He'll be an old man by the time he get's out of there. An old and bitter man without any friends. I guess he will be forced to move from the Pitss for nobody will ever want to talk to him again. And that is the way it should be.

I love Jugde Narda. She is a real fiesty one who doesn't condone any dilly dallying in her court. 

Can't wait for Joan to be called to the stand. That will be one very interesting day.

XOXO

Meriam



Author's Response:

I am so pleased that you love Narda.  Yes her and Joan are going to clash and clash badly...there will only be one winner!

This is Michael we're talking about though, he thinks that Brian is going to come to his rescue and appeal the sentences previously handed down.  Someone should tell him that denial is not just a river in Egypt.

Happy reading.

Nicole xxx

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed
Date: Apr 10, 2017 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

OOHHH Hurry, hurry, hurry please with the next update for I'm really desperate to see Manky Mickey go down.

After him slamming darling Jenny Rebecca in such a horrid way he is in dire need of a gigantic, humongous and most humiliating slapdown.

I want to see him dragging himself out of the courtroom by the tips of his hair. Not even clawing himself out on his fingernails. No I want him slithering back to his cell on his own bodily fluids. He deserves the entire world emptying their bowels on him.

The utter cruelty and disrespect he has for anybody is beyond words.

A very big bravo to Jenny Rebecca who showed how a young woman can rise above her age and be all grown up and mature. Yes, her future is definitely the law.Should she decide to study law Mel, Meriam, Charles, Empraim and so many others will, no doubt, be backing her all the way. She will most likely become a lawyer with the reputation of being a shark if necesarry. 

So once again, please don't make us readers wait too long for the next update.

XOXO

Meriam



Author's Response:

Oh now would I do that to one of my favourite girls...working on C68 as we speak.

Slithering back to his cell on his own bodily fluids?  That is so being stolen!

Nicole xxxx