Aha, look at what I just got read? Even though it's 4 AM. Too many naps yesterday, now has me up at a weird time, but fairly headache free. I forget how wonderful no-headaches feel.

Anyway, regarding the story, for a time-change chapter, I was surprised, as nothng suggested that, but then I realized this is set during the day,not the night when it takes effect. DUH! I swear my head is just not right anymore.

This just shows how first impressions can always be perceived. Whether good (Justin) or bad (Bryce). A person never knows who's listening. And Jen would be very proud of him.

I almost have to wonder if Angela will be waiting outside for him in her car, to take Justin for that hot coffee and hot food.

Well, now we know how Justin's day went, I presume we'll hear Brian's, then both of them together.

Good first chapter. Congrats!

Hugs,

Cathy

(I just lost my good review!) Dang it. I accidentally bumped my mouse, it fell off the desk... and there the screen went! Shoot! But anyway...

YOU ARE BACK! So happy to see you HERE - instead of just LJ!

I actually read the 'Story Notes' which I must admit, I don't always. And after a moments hesitation, I just knew it would be about Lt. Novotny.

This was awesome. I've always believed, "Respect is Earned"... and just because Debbie was the older one, she felt she could play boss to EVERYONE. And sticking that red nail in their faces, well, Good for Sunshine! If anyone could best Debbie, it's Justin. And their was no holdng back. Jen would be proud.

(Not sure if this would work) but I would have loved to see at the end: Two Weeks Later - and Brian and Justin having everyone over to the loft. Now, whether they do tell family secrets, or not, could be left up to the readers, but that old biddy would be sweating like a pig. Just the idea it could happen would be harder on Debbie than anything. And she deserves to not have Brian and Justin in her life after that. I get so tired of "Well, we're family. We have a right to know." What comes around goes around, lady.

I loved this little story. It riled me up. I need some of that sometimes. (I know my lost review was better! LOL)

Hugs,

Cathy

This was cute. I think the only other QAF story I've red was an old one of Moonshadow Woman that she ended up turning it into a novel on Amazon, and deleting from MW.

I really like the idea of these two having specal powers, because they are a force to be reckoned with.

Keep cranking them out...

Hugs,

Cathy

I hope you know I'm very choked up from reading this, and even needed a Puff's Plus for my eyes.

I have to wonder if Sam's dad was in the camps too, That might account for some of it, and even if he wasn't, I can see his mom dealing with him. She had already dealt with so much in her life.

And there's a reason I have only ever watched Schindler's List once. I've never been able to make myself do it again. And I'm Irish, so no linkage to that.

Even in canon, Sam portrayed those 'quirky quirks.' And I can see where given the chance, Justin could be a good friend with him. And Sam was right, good thing Brian's gay, or there could be a hundred little Brian's running around, all over the states. HaHa...

Keep up the good work,

Hugs,

Cathy

Gotta say first that I loved the usage of the name Danielle; I should, it's the name of my eldest daughter, and a not-very-common name, especially fifty years ago.

Well, sit back... this is bound to be a novella...

I'm sorry for the late read and review, but I just saw this story today. My computer has been living at Dell for the past month. Then I battled within myself: should I chance depressing myself once again? Of course, all I could think was: Maybe she has fixed things for the better? So I read it, and since I can't read without leaving a review - good or bad - here I am. To me, a story that gets my juices flowing means they are super good. Like yours, leave me with intense anger and frustration; Nichelle's - complete opposite - a whoop and a holler. LOL...

I know in your other story from this universe, I had commented that Steve (the homewrecker) could possibly die a horrible death. (Oh man, I can't believe what just entered my mind. I don't dare say it out loud, or people will start giving me a cross with their index fingers.) Now a few more are entering my brain. I almost think I should write a few very short companion pieces to your story. My mind is starting to conjure up deaths made for Freddy Krueger and Jason Voorhees, only I don't picture any knives. (Does that even make sense?) So if you should ever decide to write about Steve's death - give me a call; I can assist with that! ROTFLMAO... ANYWAY...

At first, I thought this was going to be a continuation of your other story. So imagine my confusion when I read: Justin walked around Pittsbirgh's Gay and Lesbian Center. :) Yeah, it really doesn't take much.

I see Craig can be in a room with lots of other 'fags' - even the man he blamed for turning Justin into one. But not his son? It was nice to see: this fag is not staying, but it would have been awesome if he would have given Craig the whole soliloquy he delivered to Dixon... Don't worry, this fag is leaving... etc...

BTW... I only read a very small part of Simon's story, so I'm curious if the family's attitude was how she wrote it, or if that is something you've put in? I was touched by Jennifer's reaction in the gallery... she spoke of the things that she recalled, that spoke of a caring Justin and his awesome paintings. (I'm assuming she got the portrait of Molly?) But it's like - a few months later at the wedding, they already pushed that aside. Then she tried talking to Molly about Justin and the wedding. Then she turns around and humiliates Justin at the reception, saying to Brian: You both are a part of this crazy mixed-up family. Justin will have to accept that someday. How could a mother...??? I'm so angry. So, when Justin said to her: If you need anything, get in touch with Daph, I felt he went over and above with that comment. Because Justin should not feel any need to ever talk to them again. I have to wonder if Justin's return flight went down, would anybody have any regrets? You see where your story puts my mindset?

After reading this though, I have to say that I think I liked your first take on this arc better. (Just to be sure, I reread that one too.) I wonder why it is that we usually remember the angsty stories so well? But Justin and Daphne were such a strong force. Justin had made his own 'family,' and no Pittsburgh clan was involved He had also let Brian know what he thought about him, and how he perceived what he was to Brian. He was a force to be reckoned with. He should have asked Brian if he was happy living the Stepford life. Maybe Lindsay and Michael looked at Steve as BIG money. "All  the better to get some!"

At least Justin got the opportunity to tell Brian he knew he got the job he just quit, and told him the owners referred to Justin as Brian's 'piece on the side - his boy toy'. It was just too sad that Steve didn't get to hear that. But then Brian had the audacity to say he had to let them know how good Justin's artwork was so he could get the job... (Shouldn't they have been able to see that in an interview?) If he listed Brian as a reference, THEN Brian would have had the opportunity to tell them just how good he was.

I'm waiting for a continuation story that has Brian calling a family meeting, and confronting all of them. I would like it better after the first one... because I'd love to hear Lindsay and Michael's explanation. That way Debbie and Ben could get an earful of Michael's cruelty, and Ben would get to hear how Rage and Zepher could have a sexual relationship. And Lindsay would have a hard time with her explanation when Gus is sitting there. It also holds a promise of a future Gus getting together with Justin.

I really liked your descriptions of the portraits. With your visuals, it was easy to 'see' them.

Kyle Raden - since you didn't supply a pic of him - even though he's a designer - it doesn't mean he can't be gorgeous. I have a pic saved of a smoking hot male model that I'm pretending looks like Kyle. I'll keep him warm, and very possibly use him if I ever need a 'cheating' pic... LOL. Hmm, maybe Brian would even be jealous.

I was confused in one area... and I had to reread it a few times, before realizing it was either a name error, or a change made after the fact. Justin stood in the doorway, Daphne at his side - and then the next - past the man he had idolized as a child, and with Kyle at his side, once again...

I told you it doesn't take much these days... :D

Overall, this was well-written, and I thank you for finally sharing it with us.

XO ~Cathy

I was reading a novel and ran across the word "Soulmate" which made me think of your story, so I came back in and reread it. Now I'm double anxious for an update. How is Justin going to get out of this meeting, or are you going to be a meanie, and have him go?

<3 ~Cathy