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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2019 6:22 pm Title: F- ...BUT F*CK OFFS ARE THE BEST

Yes Melanie is seeing how Michael and Lindsay were truly never Brian's friends but his jailers and enablers so they could continue to bask in the spotlight of Brian Aiden Kinney.

They would truly rather see him miserable or dead just as long as he continues to pay the rent to them for being his friend, even Deb has used her proverbial bat to keep Brian exactly where she wants him while she floats about being the mother of the Stud of Liberty Avenue and the rest of her lost children.

But Brian is right that Melanie shouldn't settle for less just to keep Gus in her life it is better to fight for truth then lie down and be beaten for lies continuously.

Lindsay doesn't want love she demands power and adulation from her subjects now that Melanie is fighting back she should find her own Happiness and leave Lindsay to wallow in the muck where she belongs.

Justin truly is a genius and is very good at seeing how Deb would be about the finer and her need to cater to Michael while bullying everyone else.

Just think how much they gave Deb that she in turn have to Michael that they will never get back because Michael is too selfish to care and Deb would never let anyone force the issue unless it affects her first.

Nice to an explanation about why Melanie cheated on Lindsay.

Ryder is going to wish he had woken up in another country because he is a bit to lose his best asset and biggest money maker.

The agency should be closed in three to six months.

Oh This Meeting Is Going To Be So Much Fun😃

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 9:07 pm Title: E- CHANGE IS GOOD…

Their teasing is delightful!

Mavid Or Dikey Show, cock-guzzling, dick-riding lunatic, F.B.I.: what an imagination you have Nichelle!

Mel and Justin: for once (from what I remember on KD) their friendship is highlighted and it's a great idea.

I hope Gus' weight isn't a concern.

Interesting background story with Brian's scholarship, the teacher and the diner.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 5:53 pm Title: E- CHANGE IS GOOD…

Nice to see Daphne being worked into this.  Never knew how much the owner of the diner was following Justin's career.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 3:18 pm Title: E- CHANGE IS GOOD…

oh... I'm so addicted to this story! write faster... lol kidding, but not really lol

 

I love the way you weave everyone into the story and the way you are exposing how (at least I) we saw the hidden motives or intentional ignorance in Deb's case.

 

Mel is how I always wanted Mel to be in the show... standing up for herself and finally seeing that everything doesn't have to be a fight. I REALLY like this Mel!

 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 8:36 am Title: E- CHANGE IS GOOD…

Does Debbie have shares in the diner, too? Is that offered to all employees, or was this a side deal Brian made with Tony? And, yes... Daphne won't have any problem handling Michael or Lindsay... and Debbie if need be. Lindsay might think her WASP powers are better than Daph's, but - put to the test - Daphne will out-WASP any day! But, if Tony decides to sell... Justin will snatch it up (even if he has to get Brian to help.) WE RESERVE THE RIGHT TO REFUSE SERVICE TO ANYONE FOR ANY REASON. (except for race or disability.) (Does lack of brain cells fall in that category?)

So, Craig is claiming the grandparents are old and feeble-minded. I'm so glad Jennifer is taking steps to help them prove otherwise. When the grandparents get control back, Craig might find himself behind bars... as I'm very certain that major funds are missing. Otherwise, why not give it up?

Justin needs to let Brian know about how Wertschafter is trying to shaft Ted. (like that play on words? :)  Then they need to talk to Ted.

There are just certain activities I don’t want my name associated with… this is intriguing. Pray tell... what is going on at the diner?

Good thing neither Debbie or Michael came in when Brian, Justin, and Mel were sitting there... but alas, I guess they are still in-house... they could show up.

Which brings me to Gus, and the fact he is losing weight. (Lord, I hope my brain is wrong...) Could Lindsay possibly be VERY slowly poisoning him... which, if he gets extremely ill, Brian will sit beside her while they wait for news about Gus?

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 3:38 am Title: E- CHANGE IS GOOD…

What Is Wrong With Gus?

Not surprising Lindsay wouldn't notice if something is wrong Gus he is of no use to her now that Brian isn't dropping to run to do her bidding or writing her a check.

Tony is right about Michael and Lindsay they see people only as mirrors to be used to make them look good, they can't see past their own reflections so they really don't know anyone and no one knows the true them.

Justin could see beyond the reflections because he saw behind Craig's mirror of respectability of the Perfect Dad and Businessman to who Craig really is a ugly waspish wannabe flaws and all, it made it easy to see past Michael's sweet boy next door act and Lindsay's sweet girl next door act.

Craig must be praying he can continue to hold onto Justin's trust fund probably because there isn't much left and the grandparents don't seem like they are going to meekly slink away without a fight.

Also another reason why Lindsay can't stand having Justin around he grew up in her world and is better at reading between the lines than her, he sees the ugliness she has spent years hiding from everyone, she couldn't fool him and that makes him lethal to her plans of HEA with Brian.

For Michael it was about the fact that compared to Brian at fourteen and Justin at seventeen he didn't measure up and the fear that this blue eyed, blonde might be the one to get Brian to Forget He Exists, it is the same fear Lindsay has too.

Brian was smart to look after Justin the way he and Justin is smart to bring in Daphne to protect his investment along with Ted, Emmett and Kiki because she isn't afraid to take on Deb who enjoys intimidating others when it comes to Michael's little feelings.

It really shouldn't take something effecting her personally for Deb to see that Michael isn't an innocent little boy, but when you intentionally ignore the obvious you set yourself up for backlash and being knocked off a pedestal you appointed yourself to with painful, long lasting consequences.

Biting my nails waiting for the next chapter😀

 

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 3:13 am Title: E- CHANGE IS GOOD…

Mavid and Dikey?.. OMG!, Bwa hahahaa. Love it

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2019 9:28 am Title: D- PARENTAL RIGHTS

The Novotnys and Lindsay are unbelievable but let’s hope they get their comeuppance I. Front of everyone 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2019 9:17 am Title: D- PARENTAL RIGHTS

5 AM... Finally I've pulled myself out of my sick bed, and hopefully, I'm on the mend.

Loved this: Clothing optional... speedo, nipple ring... check. What was Brian's ensemble? Naked as the day he was born?

Hitting that ignore button is bound to become tedious though... gotcha... no number change... but why have to just ignore it? BLOCK THE SUCKERS! Unless they need the recordings down the line to prove malicious intent.

I'm glad the guys laid all the cards out on the table for Jen and Vic. Sounds like they could use a few days in sunny Cali, too.

If Michael is coming at the end of the week... I sure hope that it's after the two days that they plan to leave in. That way he will not be able to find Briiiiaaaan! It will drive him insane! He's been gone all this time and when he gets home, I'm sure he expects to see Brian! So, not only will he NOT have access to the loft... he can't even SEE Brian. Oh my, the shit is going to hit the fan when Mikey and Lindsay find their keys no longer work!

So, Debbie, who just got off the phone with Vic, is already wanting to talk to him again... gotta wonder why. 

But, David is calling now, too. Is he calling to forewarn Vic of the demand he gave Michael? "Go home, Michael. Go home." That way Michael can't spin his own little lie and try to gain sympathy. I have to wonder what you will come up with for why David is sending Michael home.

Good chapter update. Loving the series.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2019 7:24 am Title: D- PARENTAL RIGHTS

I love Vic and Jennifer and now that they know what's going on I'm waiting for the fireworks when the best friends can not find Brian. Another great update! I love that story si much!!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2019 1:48 am Title: D- PARENTAL RIGHTS

Informing Vic and Jennifer was wise.  Now they get to watch the fun once Brian and Justin return to their new jobs.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2019 8:01 pm Title: D- PARENTAL RIGHTS

It's always great when Brian and Jennifer deal together like adults and also like family. They had a hard beginning, but they are getting very close at the same pace.

Vic and Brian are also a great pair: it's too bad it wasn't shown so much in the series. Love without condition, just like Jennifer does.

This quote from Brian is so him: "Justin, at least, wore his speedo and nipple ring whenever we dined outside. That does constitute as clothing, right?"!

If Lindsay and Michael learn that Brian is living in 2 residences- both in Los Angeles, and in Malibu, they will pack their suitcases at once.

Debbie is going to hear from very angry people and it won't be nice. She won't see it coming.

Brian is smart, that's a given, to change the locks of the loft: stop the invasion already!

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2019 7:55 pm Title: D- PARENTAL RIGHTS

thanks for update

Just love it

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2019 6:24 pm Title: D- PARENTAL RIGHTS

Yes I do believe Jennifer and Vic will be coming to California sooner than anyone thinks what with Deb behaving like a bully and lack for Michael and Lindsay without caring how she is alienating everyone else.

It is not surprising Jennifer Vic see Justin as an adult while comparing Michael and Lindsay to adolescents they are still waiting to reach maturity when at seventeen Justin bass already passing them by.

Funny two three people for Years has been telling Brian to grow up but the moment he does it while also taking na stand to get some distance they start celebrating him until he reverts back to what they want??

Deb, Michael and Lindsay don't really want Brian to grow up because the second he does and takes a really long look at the people in his life, then they will be kicked to the curb faster than Brian's last trick of the night and they don't want that.

Who will they berate and blame when things don't go their way?

And the person staring back at them in them in the mirror makes Dorian Grays' portrait look normal?

Perhaps it is time for Vic to move out now before his ears bleed worse than they are now?

I get the feeling by the time Brian and Justin are Ready to confront The Bitch Brigade everyone else might be ready to leave Pittsburgh behind too for Sunnier Skies?

Yes Liberty Avenue is going to be quite rocked to its foundation before this is over and nothing and no one will be the same again.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2019 5:32 pm Title: C- YEAH… LET’S GO WITH THAT

I like these new chapters. Brian and Justin ready to fight. Bank Brian closed for Michael and Lindsay I can not wait to see this and especially that we know that Ted Cynthia Mel Vic Emmett and Daphne will close the access and protect Brian Justin.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2019 2:09 am Title: C- YEAH… LET’S GO WITH THAT

Love how Ted and Cynthia took the news.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 06, 2019 2:47 pm Title: C- YEAH… LET’S GO WITH THAT

Two more true friends for Brian & Justin. Love their reactions to hearing about their marital status. Looking forward to the reactions of Vic & Jennifer.

Cynthia certainly knew how to handle Ryder & Vance. That's going to be another set of fireworks!

Ted certainly has Lindsay spot on. He's really going to enjoy asking for receipts! 😊

Looking forward to the next chapter!

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 06, 2019 1:43 am Title: B- THE NEW LOCATION OF SOME PLACE SPECIAL

Now this is true friendship! Love that Justin has both Daphne & Emmett. It's made even better since they are friends as well so they have someone to stop them from ending up in jail for killing either of the dumbass duo.

I hope you include one of these online slumber parties. 😁

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 06, 2019 12:15 am Title: C- YEAH… LET’S GO WITH THAT

Getting juicier and juicier 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2019 11:41 pm Title: C- YEAH… LET’S GO WITH THAT

Thank you for giving us a Cynthia chapter... I always loved her and thought we didn't get enough of her... her insights are fantastic!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2019 9:57 pm Title: C- YEAH… LET’S GO WITH THAT

It was a given that Cynthia would be on board, but with Ted, I wasn't so sure; his relationship with Brian was a little chaotic as Brian wasn't that kind with Ted and Ted was often returning the favor.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2019 9:24 pm Title: B- THE NEW LOCATION OF SOME PLACE SPECIAL

Emmett's reaction when he was told he couldn't say anything! Precious, hilarious!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2019 9:13 pm Title: A- WHERE YOU HEADED?

I love this dynamic between Mel and Brian: so much healthier than in the series, smarter as well.

Good to know that Mel could find a playdate with Del.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2019 9:13 pm Title: C- YEAH… LET’S GO WITH THAT

Imagine my surprise when I finished my other review the next chapter popped up. It wasn't there when I started. 

As far as Justin's side business... all business contacts can be given his new number with Brian's as a back up. I WOULD CHANGE MY NUMBER! Talking screeching and hollering, when they can't get through on Justin's phone...

I LOVE the dog reference. My next chapter of my 'bashed' story has that referenced. Just waiting for the beta to get done.

Yes, the games are certainly going to be played, with Lindsay, Michael, and Debbie as the pawns, contrary to how Lindsay and Michael were trying to play Brian and Justin as the pawns. Oh, Lordy... when the bank of Brian is officially closed to Lindsay and Michael... ooh, la, la. Fun times ahead!

Well, it's definitely back to bed for me. Great job with this story. Really loving it!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2019 9:03 pm Title: C- YEAH… LET’S GO WITH THAT

Again, so love the stick it to Lindsey and Michael. As well as this Deb. Keep it up. Also love the continued posting.

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