Penname: mamab Real name: Marilynne
Member Since: Jan 13, 2017
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Retired grandmother.  Love QAF characters & cast especially Brian & Justin!


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Reviews by mamab
The Loft by Tagsit Rated: M star [Reviews - 127]
Summary: Feature

I love the supernatural twist to the Brian and Justin romance. Very different from other stories and it's well written and entertaining to read. - samcdee

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Justin moves into a new loft apartment in preparation for starting his first term at PIFA.  Upon arrival, he finds a “Welcome Letter” from his new landlord, Brian Kinney. But, when he goes to respond, odd things start to happen.  Can these two men reach across time itself to realize their love?  (Loosely based on the plot of Alejandro Aresti's The Lakehouse - one of my all-time favorite movies.)


Categories: QAF US, Admin Pick
Characters: Brian Kinney, Justin Taylor
Tags: Anal Sex (Lots of it!)
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst w/ Happy Ending, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62382 Read Count: 120419
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2016 Updated: Sep 07, 2016
Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 22, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Moving Day (August 4, 2001)

Ok Tag, I have to say, I never read The Loft because I am not into supernatural, but since I now know what an amazing writer you are along with Sally, I felt in observance of your 7th anniversary, I have to read it.  Glad that I started since even though this was your first story, I am hooked after just one chapter.  You had the talent from the beginning.  Well back to reading.  Have a good day.



Author's Response:

Thank you for giving this story a try. I think I have improved as a writer since posting this one, but even so, it's still pretty good. It's also my baby, so I'm fond of it! Thanks for reading. TAG

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24, 2019 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - In Unison. (May 20, 2002 ­ 8:30 pm)

Wow, just wonderful.  Glad I picked it to read since no one has been posting any stories the last few days.  Sorry I didn't read it sooner.  So happy you continued to write after this story.

Intersect by Annie-Eliza Rated: M star [Reviews - 116]
Summary:

As Justin makes his way through the crowd in Herald Square, he sees a man who is almost a stranger to him now. *Officially up to date*

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Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Craig Taylor, Drew Boyd, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, James 'Hunter' Montgomery, Justin Taylor, Molly Taylor, Original Female Character, Original Male Character
Tags: Bottom Brian, Brian/Other, F/M, Justin/Other, M/M, Rape, Raw Sex, Real Life Issues, Self-Harm, Toppy Justin
Genres: Could be Canon, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Brian/Other, Emmett/Drew, Justin/Other, Melanie/Lindsay, Michael/Ben, Other Cast Pairing, Ted/Blake
Series: Intersect Series
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 426095 Read Count: 121516
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2016 Updated: Nov 17, 2020
Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 18, 2020 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53: N 1st Street and Wythe Ave

Had a very hard time reading this story.  I am a Brian and Justin together happily ever after fan and Brian being married to Eric nearly broke my heart, but your writing is so good, once I got into it, I kept at it.  I am really bad about reviewing after each chapter since I will stop reading a story if I don't like the way it is going.  If and when I complete it, I then review.  I guess I am optimistic that Derailed may get my guys back together so maybe I will give it a chance.  And, because I have 93 wips, I no longer read some stories until they are complete.  It is very frustrating to a reader to get into a story and have the writer just drop it.  I am a senior citizen and seriously don't know if I will live to see the end. LOL  Hope all is well with you during these difficult days.  Keep writing you are great at it.

Summary:

Gapfiller for 4-11 Brian's conversation with Lindsay after she slept with Sam

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Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson
Tags: Bottom Brian, Kink, Toppy Justin
Genres: Could be Canon, Gap-Filler
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12662 Read Count: 8366
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2016 Updated: Jan 23, 2021
Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 06, 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great story. Fantastic writing.



Author's Response:

 

Marilynne,

Thanks. I will be adding one more chapter because I realized that Karma needs to served.

~Lorie

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 24, 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

What a wonderful ending.  Great story and writing. 



Author's Response:

 

Marilynne,

Thank you. It was a fun story to write.

~Lorie

 

Summary:

When Brian hears over the radio that Babylon was subjected to a bombing, all he can concentrate on is racing to his club to make sure the people he loves are alive and safe. He doesn't expect to be irreversibly injured himself. As Brian faces a slow recovery and a permanent disability, he must learn to accept the support of his friends and the love of his partner.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, Debbie Novotny, Drew Boyd, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Original Character, Ted Schmidt, Todd (Backroom), Tucker
Tags: Homophobia, PTSD, Toppy Justin
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Tragedy
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Emmett/Drew, Michael/Ben
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11752 Read Count: 5939
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2016 Updated: Apr 05, 2017
Reviewer: mamab Signed
Date: Dec 08, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Will this story ever get an ending?



Author's Response:

Yes, we are going to start back on it again VERY soon x

Reviewer: mamab Signed
Date: Dec 28, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Why has this story never continued ????????????  It is really annoying when stories are left unfinished.

Summary:

After an accident that nearly kills him, Brian has a long road to recovery. While he knew deep down that it would be a rough road, he wasn't prepared for something like this.

Huge thanks to Annie_Eliza for my spiffy new banner :)


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Joan Kinney, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Original Character, Original Male Character, Ted Schmidt
Tags: Abuse/Child Abuse, Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Bottom Brian, Brian/Other, Dirty Talk, Family, Justin/Other, M/M, Non-Consent, Oral Sex, Rape, Real Life Issues, Rimming, Toppy Justin, Underage Sex, Unsafe Sex, Violence
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst w/ Happy Ending, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Brian/Other, Justin/Ethan, Melanie/Lindsay
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 87253 Read Count: 41036
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2016 Updated: Apr 05, 2017
Reviewer: mamab Signed
Date: Dec 07, 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Is this story completed because it says no in the comments????  Good story, but is there more??



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review. This story is NOT complete, but I have not forgotten it. I was just dealing with writers block. I will be coming back to it as soon as Tag and I are done with Time Blitz :)

Summary: Feature

 

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Emmett tells the story of how HE was responsible for bringing Brian and Justin together (or at least his version of the story). This story is an eclectic mix which is part fairy tale, part folk tale, and part tall tale, with an appropriate amount of alliteration and sprinkled all over with a generous amount of humor.


Categories: QAF US, Reader's Choice Award
Characters: Brian Kinney, Emmett Honeycutt, Justin Taylor
Tags: 10k+ Word Count, BDSM
Genres: Fable, Fairy Tale, Fantasy, Folklore, Humor
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36356 Read Count: 33879
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2016 Updated: Jan 02, 2018
Reviewer: mamab Signed
Date: Jan 10, 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Now this is what I call an amazing story.  It was so much fun to read.  Just loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you. So happy you liked this one. It was a hoot to write. I had so much fun researching southern saying for Emmett to use! Thanks for reading. TAG

Summary: Feature

Did you ever wish you could go back in time and change just one thing you’d done - just one - thinking that you could change your whole life for the better? Well, Brian Kinney did. He was sure that all his problems stemmed from that first time he broke his first rule about sex - never let a trick stay the whole night. If he had never let Justin Taylor insinuate himself into his life, he would still be the top Stud of Liberty Avenue, free from the heartache and headaches of a relationship, with his friendships and family intact. At least that was what Brian was thinking the night after Justin left him and went to live with the stepford fags, Michael & Ben. But, every action has some direct or indirect consequence and Brian may not necessarily like the results that he gets when he wishes he could go back in time and change his life. This story begins after Episode 5.07 but flashes back to episode 1.02 & 1.03.


Categories: QAF US, Reader's Choice Award
Characters: Brian Kinney, Justin Taylor
Tags: 10k+ Word Count, Out of Character, Violence
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Magical/Supernatural, Romance, Science Fiction
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91141 Read Count: 86388
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2016 Updated: Dec 02, 2017
Reviewer: mamab Signed
Date: Dec 02, 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - The Prince and The Palace

What a great story with the perfect "Happy Ending".   Terrific writing.

[Report This] Published: May 05, 2016 Updated: Aug 19, 2022
Reviewer: mamab Signed
Date: Jan 10, 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: DAMAGE CONTROL

Happy to get an updated chapter of this story that is so good.

Reviewer: mamab Signed
Date: Mar 26, 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: BANKRUPT

Very good update.  This is such a good story.  Can't wait to see where it goes next.

Reviewer: mamab Signed
Date: Oct 07, 2018 Title: Chapter 12: CHAPTER 12: THE START OF SOMETHING

Great update .  Glad you are continuing some of the older stories.  Love all of them so I am happy when any update comes to us.  Thank you.  Hope you are feeling good.

Reviewer: mamab Signed
Date: Mar 10, 2019 Title: Chapter 13: CHAPTER 13: ATTENTION-SEEKING BEHAVIORS 101

Cliffhanger!!!!  Oh, just want to also give Mikey and good swift kick and even worse to Linds.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 19, 2019 Title: Chapter 14: CHAPTER 14: WHO’S FOOLING WHO?

Great update.  Always happy to get one.  Fantastic writing.  

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 17, 2020 Title: Chapter 15: CHAPTER 15: DECISIONS

Great update.  So happy that your updating is in overdrive.  Wonderful writing as always.  You write, I read, perfect combination.  LOL 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 27, 2020 Title: Chapter 16: CHAPTER 16: DISCLOSURE

Wow, this is a Daphne we have never seen before.  What a terrific idea.  Wonderful writing.  Hope all is well with you.

Foolish Wishes by Tagsit Rated: YA [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

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Summary: Set late in season one . . . Brian’s being an ass as usual, but will he finally regret at least one of his actions? He should know better than to make wishes he really doesn't want to come true in the presence of Mysterious Marilyn!  Tehehehehe . . . .


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Justin Taylor, Mysterious Marilyn
Tags: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Humor, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: Foolish Wishes
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6899 Read Count: 2095
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2016 Updated: May 05, 2016
Reviewer: mamab Signed
Date: Nov 30, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good story.  I liked the silent reference to "The Secret Circle".

Summary:

Brian and Justin understand each other. The rest of the world does not, even though many of them think that they do.

This one-shot, set long after Justin has moved to New  York, shows that things in the lives of those around us are not always what they seem


Categories: QAF US
Characters: None
Tags: Underage Sex
Genres: Could be Canon, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3497 Read Count: 2645
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2016 Updated: May 05, 2016
Reviewer: mamab Signed
Date: Dec 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-. The Anniversary

What a good story.  A different twist on Brian & Justin and I loved it.  Love happy endings.  Happy Holidays.

Summary:

Brian and Justin live in different worlds. Brian is still based out of Pittsburgh, while Justin is in New York. Yet, they still have a great deal in common. Both are successful...both are respected in their fields...both are wealthy...both feel like they should feel on top the world….and...both feel like there is something missing in their life. It’s been five years since they have seen each other. Will a chance meeting bring them together, or will they remain as far apart as ever?


Categories: QAF US
Characters: None
Tags: None
Genres: Angst, Could be Canon
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31605 Read Count: 46536
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2016 Updated: Aug 18, 2018
Reviewer: mamab Signed
Date: Aug 22, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Strolling Down The Avenue

Great start to a new story.  As usual, I may not review again until I finish the story.  I get so involved in reading that I have to keep going.  Can't wait to see where you go next with it.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read - can't wait to see what you think of the story by the end!

Happy Reading!

Charle

Reviewer: mamab Signed
Date: Aug 22, 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Coming...And Going

Ok, I am running out of tissues.  I hadn't planned to review before the end, but I am an emotional mess and just wanted you to know how powerful your writing comes across.  Thank you for this amazing story.  Off to the next chapter.

Reviewer: mamab Signed
Date: Aug 23, 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Last Stop

WONDERFUL,  Thank you for my happy ending.  Such a good story and you are correct, you have to overcome the bad to appreciate the good.  Used a few more tissues, but that always lets me know just how much I am into the story.  Great writing.  Hope you will write something else for us.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. It is always so exciting when someone really enjoys my story, and tears means it hit the heart, just like Justin's art. Thanks again for the great reviews. 

Summary:

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Justin has escaped a gilded cage mired in abuse. Having finally broken free, he is now looking to redefine himself as a man.  When the offer to become the new Art Director for Kinnetik PA comes in, he jumps at the chance for freedom.

Brian hires Justin as the new Art Director for Kinnetik PA but Brian has secrets of his own. Can each of them teach the other to trust someone other than themselves? 

THE STORY IS COMPLETE!! 

HAPPY READING!!

~NICHELLE


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brandon, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Ethan Gold, Gardner Vance, Gus Marcus-Peterson, James Stockwell, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Leda, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Mysterious Marilyn, Original Character, Ted Schmidt, Tucker, Vic Grassi
Tags: 100k+ Word Count
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Melanie/Lindsay
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 188278 Read Count: 99126
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2016 Updated: Jul 08, 2019
Reviewer: mamab Signed
Date: Feb 16, 2018 Title: Chapter 22: CHAPTER 22: IT’S NO FUN WHEN THE RABBIT’S GOT THE GUN Part 1

OH this story is getting really good.  Love your writing.  Great job.

Reviewer: mamab Signed
Date: Feb 20, 2018 Title: Chapter 23: CHAPTER 23: IT’S NO FUN WHEN THE RABBIT’S GOT THE GUN Part 2

Wow what a powerful chapter.  This is an amazing story.  Can't wait to see where you take it next.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: mamab Signed
Date: Jul 07, 2019 Title: Chapter 31: CHAPTER 31: RECKLESS WITHOUT APOLOGY

Wow, great chapter.  Love that Justin was so powerful.  Terrific writing.